| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 23:52 PST
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*nice* lemon there!! ^_^ Story's great so far...nearly done though? Ah well, will see, but will definatly be sorry to see the end. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: November 21, 2005 17:48 PST
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that was beautiful! so sweet and feeling! utterly romantic! xD i love the markings at the back of the neck...they totally match the characters. good job. ^_^
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Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 (NSI) On: November 21, 2005 15:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Now that was no ordinary lemon. That was beautiful. Please continue the beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: vbollman(nsi) On: November 21, 2005 14:23 PST
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That was simply beutiful. i really have nothing else to say other then keep up the great work. luvs ya
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Title: Bootiful.
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 21, 2005 09:16 PST
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That chap was so sweet. "I don't have anything else to offer you, but I can give you this." That line nearly brought tears to my eyes. It was so heartfelt. Lovely chapter. It wasn't just some lemon. It was like a real joining of hearts & souls. Well done.
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Reviewed By: MikoTen (not signed in) On: November 20, 2005 22:31 PST
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Wow. Ever since I discovered this fic I have been addicted. It is plain to see how much heart and thought you put into each and every chapter that you write. You write the characters extremely well and you have a wonderfull way of bringing out the emotions of your readers. I know that you will continue to amaze me (and the rest of your fans) with more of your excellent talent. Keep up the beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: November 19, 2005 02:06 PST
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What a great story! I think your idea and the main plot (that we've seen so far) are very original and well written. You're very clear and concise with your writing, sometimes flashbacks and memories can get confusing, but I really like the way you've done it. I think everyone has been in character, good job doing that. The passion between InuYasha and Kagome is steller, you're definatley talented at writing romance. I've had so much fun reading your story over the past week, and I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 17, 2005 22:55 PST
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All caught up now. Loving this story and can't wait for your next update. Thank you for sharing your work!! It's going to be a long wait until Monday (grin).
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Reviewed By: koga 52 On: November 17, 2005 10:08 PST
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Great story. Thanks! Can't wait for the lemon (grin).
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 16, 2005 22:06 PST
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Just found this fiction and am really enjoying it! I don't have a lot of time to read fics so I usually just pick a particularly good author and stalk him or her. My most recent favorite author is starting to slow down so I'm in the market for a new fav. You've got me hooked. I shall now commence the stalking (grin). I've made it through Chapter 12 and can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: November 16, 2005 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always feel the need to review for you. another wonderful chapter, this time showing that not everything is roses. kagome needed to see that she loved inuyasha no matter what he said or did. i do hope that some of her memories of him and her friends come back, to reinforce the times they spent together at least. inuyasha had his turning point in their relationship, seeing that pushing kagome away wasn't the best thing for either of them and now kagome can see, and hopefully gain more of a sense of just how deep her feelings for our favorite hanyou run, no matter what their past held they know they love each other now and aren't afraid to show it. as always your faithful minion will be awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inuki-chan09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 20:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing, yes you spell things wrong sometimes or have some other form of gammatical error, but this story is awesome. I love the plot line, and I can't wait till the lemon comes out!! I hope you update soon!!
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Title: Me Again ^_^
Reviewed By: Tamoko On: November 09, 2005 21:37 PST
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1500 characters wasn't enough, and I just got done reading chapter 15. One thing I wanted to tell you: I admire the way you handled the lime. A lot of people tend to inject waaaaaaaaay too much fluff in those moments and their aftermath. Ex- "I luv j00, Kagome, foreva n'eva and now I'm gonna break down inta tears bc I luuuv j00 so much!!!" You know? Seems very unlike him, lol. I like that you can write Inuyasha being open with his feelings and actions toward Kagome, but still retain a large percentage of his wryness- which IS keeping him mostly in character. When he calls her "Wench," for instance; it's a really nice touch, and I'm glad you kept that element in his character. Thanks for that! Looking forward to more updates :)
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Title: Much Kudos
Reviewed By: Tamoko On: November 09, 2005 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very hard to please. To me the best fanfiction is one that follows mostly along the story line and orginal character makeup, but branches off into a side story all it's own and is STILL believable- As if you could see the author's story happening in the manga or anime. This is one of the better fics I've read so far and I mean it; my opinion is reflected in the ratings I gave.The plot of the story that has been revealed is unique and creative- I haven't seen it used much before, and it's highly believable, (that I explained above). That is very attractive in a fanfiction; it's one of my preresiquites (sp).Your style is also very nice and a breath of fresh air amongst most fics I've read. I guess in some areas, and this is just personal opinion, I think there can be tweaking. Some things I would have worded differently, is all. But 90% of the time, I was pleased.Spelling and Grammar came out to be 9/10 because I recalled seeing a few errors- least I think so. Well, that and I didn't want to give a near perfect rating until the story was done, lol just to make sure.I giggled and Awwww'ed while reading at least 20 times. You didn't make me feel "..." with too much fluff. And I just can't resist well-written adult inclined fanfiction. I love that you took your time bringing that element into the story: so far you've been delicate with it, and it's worked out very well. Please keep this while writing more, lol!Great job, and good luck
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: November 09, 2005 18:16 PST
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your fluff has made my week. after being sick with the flu for four days (and still feeling like i got hit by a truck) i saw you did decide to post the next chapter early and i couldn't be more thankful. i liked how you gave inu and kags a chance to talk a bit about inu's insecurities (something i'm sure will end up being dicussed more as kags memories come back) and also how you give the three friends very distinct personalities. all too often i read fics where any one of them can be talking and it doesn't make a difference. also hojou seemed a bit less niaeve than he usually does in the manga and it was nice. now he's got a girl! keep up tha great writing.
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