| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 20, 2006 11:04 PST
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You have done very well. The story is unique, and has been fun to read - I hope you come back and finish it. I do think you could use a beta - there are some problems, not with spelling, but with words like say where stay should have been, missing words, or words in an odd order. While this is distracting, there have only been a couple of places where I had to stop and really think about what was actually being said. All in all, I have enjoyed your version of InuYasha and the people in his life.
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Reviewed By: Inu-kag15(not signed in) On: February 20, 2006 00:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally read all the chapters. I began reading a few days ago, and I finally finished! Anyway, love the story, great romance. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 09:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the last 2 chapters. Was on Vacation the past week and it was nice to come back and see that you had posted. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to your next posting.
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Reviewed By: kamarria On: February 04, 2006 15:27 PST
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i just sat here all afternoon reading this one. quite fab. can't wait to see the finish!
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Title: kawaii
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 14:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww! SUPER KAWAII! u r such a good author! i can't wait for more!!!!
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Title: Absolutely kawaii
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: February 02, 2006 03:59 PST
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I loved this chap. The wedding was so sweet & OMG, Sesshy-sama is da shit ain't he? God, i love that demon! Eri pissed her pants (bwahaha) Inu spoke mushiness in front of another living soul (gasp!) and kags made sessie dance (keeling over from shock). Great chap! And of course you were nominated at the IYFG (wink) this fiction is damned good!
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Reviewed By: Pipe_wrench_kid On: January 31, 2006 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again, nicely done... I must say that no other author has a style that can touch yours. nice no great job this time. Im awaiting the next chapter(s). looking forword to seeing many many more fics with your name on them. thank you for these great stories. If you keep it up you may just end up with a few awards of your own.. :) :)
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Title: cUtE
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 06:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute chapter! eri is such a bitch! kagome should have tackled her to the ground or at least slapped her sheesh. i also like how ayumi is so understanding, she's an awesome friend! but my fave par is when inuyasha says 'it's always the ears...not the claws or the fangs..." it was so FUNNY! really looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Very Enjoyable!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 05:33 PST
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I really enjoyed this chap. "It's always the ears, it's never the fangs or the claws..." I laughed so much! And Eri...wow. That bitch is insane! Kagome should have seriously clocked her! I wonder if she'll come to the reception & do something outlandish... Now that would be interesting. Then there's Sessho- awww, they had a moment. Just a really fun chap!
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Title: wow is all I can say
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 00:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like my title...wow is about all I can say. This has got to be one of my favorite stories ever. Actually, I love just about all of your stories...I hope you update soon!! I can't wait to read about the WEDDING!!
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Reviewed By: marbear411 (not logged in) On: January 24, 2006 17:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was Awsome plz update soon!!!!^o^
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Title: AwEsOmE!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 14:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! ur story is soooooo awesome! really! i cannot wait until the next chapter!! YEAH! well, i'll review when the next chapter comes! ByE!
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute chapter. Not to much happened but all and all very good. Hope that you take to long to get the next chapter up. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 13:32 PST
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Kawaii. First off, I just found this story and I love it. I especiallly like how you portrayed Inuyasha through Kagome's recovery. The pace was just right, and while the lemon rocked, it didn't come too soon. I also loved how you've made them put more trust in each other little by little, and linked it to the original failure of trust between Kikyo and Inuyasha. I look forward to reading more when you get the time. Fanfiction is really only secondary to real life, unless you're like me and slacking off on homework to read really well written fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 13:31 PST
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Kawaii. First off, I just found this story and I love it. I especiallly like how you portrayed Inuyasha through Kagome's recovery. The pace was just right, and while the lemon rocked, it didn't come too soon. I also loved how you've made them put more trust in each toher little by little, and linked it to the original failure of trust between Kikyo and Inuyasha. I look forward to reading more when you get the time. Fanfiction is really only secondary to real life, unless you're like me and slacking off on homework to read really well written fanfiction.
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