| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Stephmote On: September 27, 2005 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god that was awsome. I the chapture started out a little slow but, it turned out really well. I love it. I was just so sweet. I can not wait to read the next one. I wish I didnt have to wait a hole week though but as the saying says, you cant rush a good thing! Great work.
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Reviewed By: anji On: September 27, 2005 05:09 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 23:03 PDT
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you did it again. thank you for another amazing story.
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Reviewed By: tiggrchic82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 08:50 PDT
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Poor Kagome - What will she go through next? I can't wait to find out!! I was just wondering how everyone on the other side of the well was doing. They must be worried sick! I don't know how long it's been since Inuyasha left them. Maybe now that Kagome is awake they can find a physical therapy place closer to home so Inuyasha can give the gang an update! Also, YAY for Kagome's mom -- slap the hell out of that bastard!!
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Reviewed By: iamfireofinuyashascurrentlynotloggedin On: September 25, 2005 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i nearly cried after reading the latest chapter of emergence. i had just finished making things right and i was so excited to look at your profile and see another fanfiction ready for me to start reading. you have an incredible sense of what works and what doesn't in stories and you dare to do what others rarely think about. i have to say that if people don't review and let you know how fantastic you are THEY ARE DUMB. anyway, i am looking forward to the next chapter of emergence very much. happy writings, fireofinuyashas
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Reviewed By: cj On: September 25, 2005 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...You are a gifted story-teller, truly. Thank you for sharing this story. I'm really looking forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: chocolatedream22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's so heartwarming.
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 01:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is truly amazing. I can definitely feel the characters emotions and the scenes are so vividly described that I feel like I am there.
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Reviewed By: BlackMikoKikyo On: September 23, 2005 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With every chapter this story keeps getting better and better you are an amazing writter with great ideas, don´t be so hard on your self when what you write is not what u expected cause is great for your readers
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Reviewed By: SeneLover1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thats the only thing I could think of after reading this. It's beautiful, a work of art. You've really developed a scenario but let the characters keep their personalities. What you've done with Inuyasha was done in a very professional way. You don't know exactly when it happens, but you ceritnly notice it. One question. Inthe End, will Kagome be the same? Like will she fully regain her memory, speech, and movement? This story is one of those you don't want to read, because it's sad and Mature, but you can't bring yourself to stop. You just have to know what happens next! Great work from a Great author. You really have a future at this. Keep up the GREAT work and Thanks so much! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Stephmote On: September 23, 2005 13:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, That was such a good chapture. Cant keep thinking that if that happen in the anime what would he do next. I am so happy that you are going to be continuing the story it is a very good story regardless if people reaspnd or not. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent tale, I would say it is sad that such a good story has so little reviews, but considering it claims you have had only 300 hits, I would call 21 reviews a rather high turnout. This story has a collection of all the best dramas, sadness, anger, despair, hope, persecution, happiness, devastation and my goodness you even can top it off with a little cold hearted molestation. Even I felt the smack to the head Inuyasha experienced when word of Kagome's accident hit him. You also have handled all of Kagome's mother and Inuyasha's conversations quite well, it can be hard to touch on such subjects without sounding bubbly corny. A lot of personal scenes I see in fan fics you more just hear the writing then actually get to witness the scene occur, if that makes sense, kid of a hard aspect to explain. Anyway to wrap this up you did an excellent job, this is the longest fan fic in a long time I had the patients and the quality was good enough to actually read from start to finish. I can't wait to see the final conclusions, very well done and keep up the good work. Tata.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: September 23, 2005 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic and it is very original. It is nice to see Inuyasha work though his feelings and try to be better. Please continue writing it. (I just started reading your fic today and I'm glad I did)
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Title: Tough but compelling
Reviewed By: LadyMoonHawke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was so hard to read, but rewarding at the same time. We never want to think about something terrible happening to a favored character, and Kagome has been through a lot already. Just want you to know that I will be following your story to the hopefully non-bitter end. :) Wonderful stuff!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 22, 2005 20:23 PDT
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This chapter, was amazing. The thing that really got me was the fact that things like this do happen and no one does anything to help the victims. Thank you. And i hope that as more people read this story, that it will open their eyes to what can and has happened to people who have no control over what is done to them. Please keep up the great work. and update again soon. I just have one question, what is happening to the others in the group, and when will they find out that kagome is awake, and if not ok, then on the mend to get there?
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