| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 16:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont think that you could have ended that story any better then you did. I have enjoyed reading this stoey from the begining. I hope that you keep up the good work with the others and hope to see a posting from you soon. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: April 21, 2006 13:30 PDT
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*sigh* i went back and read from beginning to end...so satisfying. i really enjoyed this story and have no complaints only compliments. everyone was true to character and the relationship unfolded at a realistic pace. i'm looking forward to the updates on unfettered. (sorry to not be signed in, i was but i got kicked off somehow...i'm only a few reviews down if you need to contact me for anything) great work!
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: April 20, 2006 23:10 PDT
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That was a very nice ending. Sweet, gentle, patient and full of love. Well done!
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Title: Awsome!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue not signed in On: April 20, 2006 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story it is awsome! i havent finished reading it yet but so far its really good. i'm only up to chapter 6 right now so when i get to your last chapter be sure I'll be reviewing again:-) awsome, awsome fic OXOXOX
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the most enjoyable stories. Im sorry its over, but they say all good things must come to an end. Ive read this from the get go, and have loved every chapter. This was really excellent. Now, heh, any chance of a sequel?
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Reviewed By: Bree1229 On: April 10, 2006 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since you posted the first chapter and just wanted to thank you for sharing it with us. This story has had romance, angst, the growth and maturing of the characters and has been a real emotional roller coaster. I really liked the last chapter. Kikyou's death and final moments were very sad. I also thought Kikyou's final request was like finally putting an end to what she and Inuyasha had before she sealed him 50 years earlier. Very nicely done. I always hate the end of a fic where Kagome and Inuyasha have to part from Miroku and Sango but thought you handled it very well and kept the characters in character. I am looking forward to your epilogue and the continuation of Unfettered. Keep up the good work.
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Title: move on
Reviewed By: che lee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 12:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... hi. I have a few things id like to pount out...ya let inuyasha get over himself quickly so you can move on in the story. I mena it is a Kag/Inu story...not a moop cuz kikyo is dead story and I thing even Kagome wood be a little upset about the hole kiss thing...yes she is a undstading person...but she isn't a saint...just punthing it out thats all...and no im not a bitch...I really do like this story.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 12:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story so far...i'm only on chpt 17 but i'm really enjoying it and wanted to let you know. I must say I've been reading alot of fanfics now and your has real depth to it. I really think you have a unique writing style. Keep up the work!~*
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 03:11 PDT
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**sniffle** The ending of Kikyou was so sad... :( Well done, though. Great job so far, although it's a bit sad to think the story is nearly done...
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Title: Amazing Doesn't Describe You Well Enough
Reviewed By: Emrald of My Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..no..wow doesn't even begin to explain it. You are simply amazing! I truly enjoyed this and I am assuming that you intend to write an Epilogue? I hope so. You are an extrodinary author and I don't understand why on Earth you would have such problems in obtaining reviews. I read the entire story written thus far wanting to review every chapter but decided a long review for the last one might be just as good. Feel free to count this 29 times. I like the style of your writing. You had a good plot and worked things out accordingly. I'm not a good writer myself but I know talent when I read it! When Inuyasha said in this last chapter it was something like "I feel guilty for not thinking of you during our first joining" He mentioned something about Kikyo in one of the chapters I recall when they were making love, but you do mean he was only reflecting about her, not...loving Kagome's body but thinking she was Kikyo. I dont think you did but I just wanted to be clear on that. It was a truly beautiful story and it made me a little sad that Miroku and Sango did not get to see Kagome and Inuaysha's wedding. I hope you continue to write more fan fictions and win a lot of awards for best fan fiction. You deserve it. ::EOMH::
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kilika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story, and plan on reading more of what you have written. If I get a chance before someone else, I'll second you on your recent nomination on the IYFG. So keep writing wonderful stories like this one!
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Reviewed By: jarediz13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!! I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet chapter. I love how you made the death of Kikyou so moving, it brought a tear to my eye, and I totaly agree with how you think Inuyasha thought he owed it to Kikyou. Pros to you on that. No matter what anyone says this storie is one of the best you have written as far. Cant wait to read the finall chapter. I am also looking forward to you updating your other story Great Work!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 13:03 PDT
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Whoa. I can't believe it's almost done. While I am a bit...irked...by what Kikyou asked of Inuyahsa before she died the final time (especially after she saw that he was struggling with it in his heart)I can accept that that is something that the old Kikyou would have wanted. Will Shippou make a guest appearence in the future? I try to never get too picky with the technical details in stories. As my writing teacher used to say, as long as it follows plausable guidelines, you can manipulate the law to work within the realm of your story. If everything had to be exact (and your portrayl of the hospital experience was pretty much dead on; at least from the POV of one who works in a psch hospital)then half the stuff that happens on ER wouldn't be happening. you envoked drama, frustration, betrayl (on the part of an agency that is supposed to listen to and help people)and the attitude of 'dr. knows best' and that is what great writing does. It makes you feel, something your writing has always done for me. I enjoyed this latest installment and will be waiting for the finale.
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Title: Agrees' With Author
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 11:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...that's why I always sign in when leaving a review. With you last AN, I agree with you inufan625. Though, I too, do not know what the Japanese Laws are pertaining to such, U.S. Laws are basically what you said. While some hospital DO look the other way sometimes, *personal exp*, others do not and will push them Laws as far as they can take them. Sometimes I think it's just to see if they can and how much damage they can do. Anyway...Great chapter, I must say. Excellent story. InuYasha was honor bound to finish what he set out to do. Kagome knew this and understood it. Doesn't mean she has to like it. It was just something that had to be done. Didn't mean he loved her less, meant he loved her more. That's how I see it anyways. And you are pregnant no less. Heh, just wait till you have grand-babies running around...OH, then the real fun begins. Lol...Again, love the story, great chapter. Update when you can.
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