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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 23:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole thing about Souta is so sad... Sango just doesn't know when to stop, but its a great revelation. Kagome's Mum is wonderful isn't she. There was a very awkward silence that seemed to last forever. "When you say you got a problem with a guy, you mean you pissed on some other dog's territory or you take in the ass and need advice? Cause I ain't against you being gay and all, I just don't have no experience with that, so I ain't exactly the guy to take it to." VERY FUNNY I actually thought this person was Sesshoumaru and not Kagejiro until the very end. How long till Sesshoumaru finds out about his kid????????
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:44 PST
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whoa kagome had a kid and it's souta?! crazy, but it's working for me. Man I've been sick for three days so far and have done nothing but take lots of meds and not go to class. Congrats on being so productive and thanks for such a quick update!!
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Title: Wow...just wow.
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:00 PST
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You know I had an inkling Kagome had been raped and Souta was her son, but to be honest I thought it was her Dad who'd done the deed (sorry does that make me sound warped?). Well firstly I always thought of Kagome and Souta as having two separate fathers...like Souta's "Dad" was her step dad...maybe I'm getting your story confused with another so correct me if I'm wrong. Also with obvious the tension between her and her mother I just assumed that's how things went down. Glad to know I was wrong but at the same time I'm sad to hear she's been carrying that around for so long. Definitely explains a lot. The cafe scene was great as well. Sha to the rescue! Personally I don't give a crap if Kikyo figures out he's knocking boots with Kags...cheating ho. Sorry you've just written her so well the animosity is there. I understand her situation, being trapped in a loveless relationship, but Kikyo's character has always rubbed me the wrong way. I'm glad you've continued her character so well but why do I get the feeling she's going turn out to be a good guy and save the day? Hmmm anyhoo amazing work as always. Get well soon!
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Reviewed By: CLipse On: November 07, 2007 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write Kikyo in this story. She's not too bitchy but not little ms perfect either. Nice balance. Was that Naraku at the end? Guess I'll find out next chapter. There were a few grammer errors here and there but overall it was nicely written. :)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 07, 2007 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I was completely blindsided with the duo update! SWEET! *LOL* It was so funny 'cause when Kagome stopped Sango and said that Souta was not her moms child I instantly knew Kagome would say it was hers. At first I thought she was raped by her father but I was way off base with that one. I looooooved the chapters. It's hard finding fics where you never know what's gonna happen next and this one is definitly one. You did an amazing job for someone who was sick. :) Keep up the good work girlie!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, omg, omg! souta! WOW that came outta left field. and her dad is an ASS, i hope he gets it in the end. love yash's brother!!! yay! cant wait to read more about him! great chapter!!!!! can't wait to read more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, Dun... Duuun! Oh yesh! The famous, or rather infamous, bro is on his way... shall we set up services now for Bank or sit on it a while longer, lol. :D And Kags isn't the only one with probs I see. Bad Kikyo, bad, hehe. Would still love to see Sha kick his ass tho, and then some, lol. Oh, and thanks much for a quick update, its awesome. Till next time... Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:30 PST
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OMG!!!!!!!!! O_O WOW and..... im speechless. fantastic, f__kin fantastic writing!!!!! i am going on to read the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:06 PST
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Woooo, speedy update! My god, the Sota thing, I never would have guessed...sorry if I missed it, but I'm assuming Sota doesn't know, right? Damn....and the mysterious Kagejiro arriving, nice. And overall, lots of good set-up. But hm...something Sango thought got the wheels in my f-cked up little mind spinning like wild. Naraku. He's here, but you haven't done much with him, he just pops in now and then, but thus far he hasn't had any real bearing on the true plotline. I can't help but grab a baseball mitt and wait for the left-field curveball you're gonna chuck at us when his character inevitably takes center stage. He good, bad, what? You've made him into a real wildcard, and I can't wait to see him ger played. Anyway, now that I've blasted my tank of metaphors dry...oops, one left...I know somewhere in the back of my head there's a real good quote about darkness and evil and blahda blahda blah, but I can't find it. I'm gonna get back to ya, I know I got at least one more good quote in here somewhere, I'm gonna check in back beside the radiator. Anyway, chow, awesome chapter. Drake.
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY! Really fast updated! Man So much Drama in this Chapter i loved it soo much!! i Felt Like i was watching a soap opera loved it hehe.. cant wait till the next chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 19:44 PST
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oh man I'm so happy that inuyasha knows who everybody is, even if it is gonna make his life a lot harder (I'm selfish). Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!
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Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Astrid44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah.Bank finally got tha ass whoopin he deserved.I hope Inuyasha doesn't go to jail.that would really succ.Thanks for the update it has been a while.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this update yesterday and i was so mad that i couldnt read it cuz i was out all day since we didnt have school XD BUT!... you really now how to make ppl happy! I thought for sure you might not of updated like roun christmas cuz it's been a while... but now i understand and this chapter was... O.O!! I cant decide if i should hate kikyou or love her! I mean the girl is like a freakin weather! She's folling kaggie, ne? And another thing! What's up with kaggie? Can she really be that much of an idiot?! I mean she puts herself behind others but it's her life dammit! I thought she would of figured out inuyasha to be sha... *sigh* Sha was so fucking hawt! I think i'm messed up but the site of an angry inuyasha is such a turn on; lol. He slick ways--like when he hugged kaggie roun the waist while avoiding kikyo's attention...it was so hawt! And who eva said that inu was slow? He figured out everything so easily... it was all amazing...and the best part about it, is that he's gonna follow kags 2night. So now he's risking his identity, among other shits. Isnt sessy more powerful than bank? or i mean it is THE sesshomaru we're talking about!! yesh it is... lol... kk am done babbling, but know that i so freakin' love this chapter n story ofcourse! I can only imagine what the other chapter will be like and am sure even then it'll surpass my imagination! *__* I hope all things are well with u.. .and sleep well! I know how little sleep can be *sigh* Ja!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is getting so good! Kikyo isn't an idoit after all! Yay!!! I'm so excited about the next chapter. I can only imagine what's going on it that wicked, wicked head of yours. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 02, 2007 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo! The bitch is back better than ever! *lol* Loved the chapter. It has been a long wait but this update was amazing! Kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what you post next time. :P
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