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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter had my heart racing ten fold. It was so damn good and totally worth the wait. No explanations needed, life has a way of making us all busy. But I am so glad to see you back. I almost wanted to cry a couple of times while reading this chap. Kagome is seeing her life flashing before her eyes, and part of me while reading it started panicing with her. It was crazy...I kept asking myself 'what would I do?' Damn, Bank is nuts..but I can see how a girl would like to be dominated, there is some appeal in it. But to be beaten, that is just so scary. Part of me doesnt believe that Bank would go to the cops, there is just too much at stake, but threatening Kagome with it, he knows that will work. She always puts others first before herself. I wonder if Kikyou knows what is truly going on between Inu and Kagome. This story is very well thought out, and is so much fun to read. The drama......cant live without it. You take care! Neddi
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, even tho I actually like Bank as a character, you can really make him a truly evil one, lol. Loved as the scene unfolded on what was what between them all. Now they all know. And tho Bank got the beating of life, can almost bet money on it'll be nothing to what lay in store for him. Nope, don't see Inu lettin this go. Or rather, Sha? ;) Great chap Hun, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: November 02, 2007 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you pieced this chap together just fine. i think it's refreshing that inuyasha is the one that found out who everyone really is. usually it's the girl who finds out the truth and has to hide it. i wonder how long he can keep it from her, tho. as for kagome meeting oberon again... ugh, i can't imagine. he's psycho! but, she does want to help her friends. i can understand that. it's just that i have a feeling things are about to get so much worse. every chap i finish, i wish there was more. i'm glad you found time to write, and i'm sorry life is so hectic. hope to see more soon. take care!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 09:12 PDT
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Excellent chapter, it's good to finally see Bankotsu get the shit kicked out of him. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 05:40 PDT
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My...I believe the pharse "the shit has hit the fan" doesn't begin to cover what happened in this chapter. We must invent a new saying to correctly convey everything that happened. You get started on that and have it ready by the next chapter. Did anyone else notice that this all comes out after Inuyasha kicked Sesshomaru out so now his brother can't be on stand by for his defense? Everytime I think I'm in Kagome's brain she does something like this. Threats to others aside, where is the natural reflex actions to protect one's self? Kagome's self-estem made be a little tattered but I'm still convienced that she loves herself. Anyone that loves themself would have been selfish enough to make a plan before walking into the lion's den. If she is THAT desperate to do a hell-mary she needs a truimph card. Threatening him or guns would do no good. Tell Kagome to strap a bomb to herself take him and the whole place down. See how he likes that! The only way I can see to deal with a psycho is to become a better one yourself. I'm not sure what Inuyasha's father will be more mad about: that he beat up a rival, let the situation that he could have told someone about and gotten help before it spiraled out of control, or that he wants the pauper instead of the princess and kept his mouth shut. Miroku's right, if Inuyasha had just insisted that he didn't want to marry Kikyo then sure their would have been some hurt feelings but not even Kikyo's dad is dumb enough to break multi-billion dollar contracts because she couldn't have that doggie in the window. Besides wanting to throttle Kagome for her sporadic decisions (that work for and against her favor) I find myself wondering once again why I'm reading this. Yes it is very good but usually I don't do this much angst. Perhaps you are so spectacular at what you do that I can't seem to stay away despite the fact that this isn't my usual stuff. I'll just keep it in my category of exception then leave it at that.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i can't believe that just happened. and kikyo's got a devious mind. she's gonna find kagome at the inkwell 'cause that's where she's meeting sango. IF she's meeting sango. omg, i can't believe she's going to go see him. she wants to die?! what the hell, but she's trying to keep inuyasha from harm. ooh, so many things going on. and what' going to happen once inuyasha tells kikyo the truth? is he going to tell her? and will they all find out kagome's dirty little secret? more soon please, pretty please!
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was awesome
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 21:43 PDT
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That was absolutely fantastic and well worth the wait! I'm so glad you updated. I totally didn't expect Bank to be at the door. Jesus...had my on the edge of my seat all chapter. And FINALLY he got the crap beat out of him by Inuyasha. About freekin time! Very well written. Good luck with all that work and try to get some sleep :)
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that ass whoopin had happen that sick basterd bank or Oberon w/e the hell he was had it coming I say coodles to Inuyasha ^.^ poor kagome I really hope she gets out of this bad sisuation.... please update soon Darksaint. p.s. Welcome back and thanks for updating we missed you ^.^
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 00:41 PDT
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I reviewed this story ages ago when I first started reading it but I just wanted you to know that I still love it. While waiting for your next update I decided to go back to the beginning and it's still as fantastic as I remembered it. You have such talent I'm really, truly impressed. I've come to the conclusion that your cafeteria scenes are by far my favourite. Every one has my laughing out loud so please keep them coming. On a random side note, if you get the chance to you should watch this live-action Taiwanese drama called MARS. There are cafeteria scenes in that show that are a lot like the ones in your fic with similar characters too (the cocky, sexually aggressive guy, the shy girl, the lecherous friend, etc). That series was part of what made me want to go back and reread Shades of Gray. Anyhoo...I'm blabbing now but please please please update again soon? Please? and Thank you :)
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 10:55 PDT
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I want more!! please please pleaseee uptade soon! I absolutely love this story:)
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Title: Money making!!
Reviewed By: bored person On: September 24, 2007 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you could change a few bits and peices about the demons and names you could have yourself a story there, I know you like to write fan fiction but you could have this published. Just change the demon style and names, just an idea. Otherwise brilliant story, best of luck finding a new place.
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wats the songs name in this chapter??
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wats the songs name in this chapter??
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Reviewed By: Memei On: August 15, 2007 06:35 PDT
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i like the story, but hate the SessRin :( I've never been able to see them as a couple.. mostly because in canon she grew up with him.. and he's like a father/mentor to her. And in this story i get the feeling that she's your Mary Sue.. sorry
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