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Title: chappie 23
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:55 PDT
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NP on the quute, hell, you have my email, I have a bottomless bag of quotes, gimme a ring sometime if you need one. Anyway, great chapter; drama, character development, secrets, mental image of Sessy-sama in an apron with a mop and sponge...a good time was had by all!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:29 PDT
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I didn't get to leave a comment last time I read, so here's pretty much my comment for the whole fic so far LOL I LOVED the sex scene b/w I/Ka. That was pretty hot *fans self* Whoo. But now I want to go kill him for saying that to Kagome LOL!! Curse you for being such an addicting writer!!!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:28 PDT
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I didn't get to leave a comment last time I read, so here's pretty much my comment for the whole fic so far LOL I LOVED the sex scene b/w I/Ka. That was pretty hot *fans self* Whoo. But now I want to go kill him for saying that to Kagome LOL!! Curse you for being such an addicting writer!!!
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That was amazing. I think I need a cigarette. I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder what sessy will do when he sees Rin. Oh, I wanted to let you know that I figured out the little secret Kags is keeping from everyone. You haven't hinted at it much but last night I was laying down and it hit me. It's the only reason why her dad would leave. Don't worry though. Your secrets safe with me.
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....wow..... i wasn't expecting THAT scene so soon...interesting... So inu's going to get one helluva wake up call when he realizes he's got the wrong brother!!! teehee!!! Rin will definitely be confused as hell... i have one word for kikyo -bitch- that was a shitty thing to do to Kag... as you like to say, 'when the shit hits the fan' there's still a lot more to come... great chapter, please update soon!!!
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This as Funny AS Hall you did a great job even the drama is funny Keeep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is so f*cked up... but I just love where its heading hehehe This is so interesting (and horny), I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next, kagome's secret, Inuyasha's solving his situation... everything..
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 15:57 PDT
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Ahh, I didn't get to be the first one to review this time... Oh well :D I LOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEDDDDDDDD this chapter, it was totally the best you've written yet :) I can't wait to see Kikyo's reaction. Does that make me a horrible disgusting person? Lmao. I really cannot wait for the whole freaking out thing that's going to happen :D ... and Bank... I'm still worried about him :S
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:08 PDT
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Well I guess the hard part comes next huh? Now that they have decided to be together Inuyasha won't take her brush off answers anymore. All though I do wonder if she is completely out from under Ban's thumb now (mentally). I hope so. I can't figure out what Inuyasha has in mind for Kikyo. Even if he breaks up with her and holds Kagome hostage in his house, Kikyo will still try to get back with him so she will see them together at some point. Oddly enough I haven't really been bugged by anything Kikyo has done until now. Sure calling Kagome out by comparing her to her mother was wrong but as Inu' says she is a product of situation. But telling Kagome that she and Inuyasha have agreed to be more serious about their relationship when all she did was mention that this was what she wanted while he with held comment is not a full affirmative conversation in my mind. And I know you have done this for a reason but it bothers me that neither Rin nor Inuyasha said the "brother's" name. I will just sit and patiently wait for the horrific-humorous moment when Rin walks into his house to find Sesshomaru sitting there. That is one of my "gotta see" moments that I'm still waiting for. Oh before I forget there are a few typos in the love scene. Usually I don't point fingers but my poor mind had red alert sirens flashing but my mental video just kept running the very wrong images in my head! Just re-read that paragraph where Kagome takes off his boxers and you'll see what I mean. I think I saw another one about him being deeply in her body but I can't remember exactly what it was. Also I like how you make them unconsciously fall into the dom/sub roles. They have just been doing it so long they don't realize it has popped up.(Makes one wonder what hoops he had Kikyo jump through…) Still waiting for the moment they realize who the other really is. That's on my "gotta see" list too. I wonder if Kagome will be able to look at Kikyo's bed without flaming into a permanent blush. Loved the part where you talk about Rin's height being a problem to get in the car. It was a nice little extra.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: May 14, 2007 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know...I just couldn't get the whole 'Bank coming up to the school' outta my head. Oh well...time will tell ne? Great job with the chapter by the way. Though you completely blind sided me with the lemon. To tell you the truth I wasn't expecting it at all. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: May 14, 2007 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after that little interlude... i suspect that things will become increasingly complicated. not just with inu/kag, but everyone. and, was kikyo setting kagome up somehow by leaving? just wondering. she seems to be every bit as sneaky as kags has been. i'm still trying to figure her out. ah, and now with yash confused about which brother is kenrens father, i am really eager for the next chap. btw- i'm glad you finished up with school and that's awesome that you got all B's. *high 5's you like a huge ass dork*
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 12:41 PDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed for so long! Bad me... I read every chapter, though, and most of them more than thrice! Interesting dialogue between Rin and Inu-chan, I was half laughing and half tearing my hair out! Does Rin know Inu has another brother? Oh, I can't find it Kikyo is going to come back while Inu and Kag are napping! Think what kind of 'fireworks' that would make! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 11:11 PDT
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*screams with indignation* ahhhhh how could inuyasha get 'jiro and sesshomaru mixed up. he should have been more inquisitive. Rin should have said sesshomaru instead of just saying him or your brother, god they are so dense. why would inuyasha assume it was kagejiro instead of sesshomaru?! aaaaaaack... *yes i can rant about this even after reading that hot steamy lemon* and Kagome and kikyou.. oooh where do i even start about that? Kikyou is soooo dense. She even dated Bankotsu?! and didnt experience ANY of what kagome went through? Great guy my ass. I swear, this is like an addicting SOAP OPERA. daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn. Now onto Inuyasha and Kagome.. Holy shit. *I believe that was the best lemon you have ever written.* I can't believe that they got into a MORE complicated position. I was sooooo waiting for Kikyou to come home and witness the end of it. Do you think that Kikyou will ever catch them in the throes of passion?! oooh i cant wait to find out. This chapter was worth the wait, and oh so long. Keep up the good work, and i eagerly await the next chapter. Oh, and read your email, girly.
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Title: chappie 22 again
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:44 PDT
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BTW, re-read it, and HAH! Fucking on Kikyo's bed, now that's funny AND kinky! Luv it!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:35 PDT
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Awesome, awesome, awsome! Loved it! It's funny and a little frustrating that none of them know the truth about each other. Please update soon!
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