| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!! I LUV THIS FIC!!!!! So far I have only read up to chapter 9 but I couldn't wait to review! This story is one of the best I have ever read. (Mine is the best but I think that because I wrote it)I will review again after I finish reading the story, or as much as u have posted. -InuGirlTeen (Fanfic- 'The Story Time Forgot')
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Reviewed By: ?'?'?'?'ApPlE'?'?'?'? On: December 21, 2003 18:06 EST
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This is a great story! I NEED MORE LEMON!
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Title: i'm back
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found you, and it's great even though i do have the mental video going in my head *shudders* ....i post here to , though i have a fight scene coming up so now i have that one and yours in my head...coffee anyone
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Reviewed By: Saccharine - Ish On: December 15, 2003 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic absolutley kicks ass! you gotta gotta gotta update asap. i just read the entire thing today and i am hooked! i love your idea of bringing her father into it... never seen that before (love it though)
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rating system only goes up to ten? I've never noticed... I honestly just can't describe to you - in any way, shape, or form - how good this is. First of all, I started reading this on FF.net about 10:30pm last night, give or take a few minutes. (I transfered to Media Miner for some *ahem* obvious reasons...) I think I stopped somewhere around 3:00am this morning. I had to physically pry myself from the computer, considering I still had about 3 chapters left to read. (The crowbar was realllly messy. I just read another fanfic, and it showed me the only words that can describe this one: Simply Irressistable. The only other word in the English language that can describe it is perfect. There's no shadow of a doubt that this fanfic could easilly be considered perfect. Anybody who disagrees... well... let's just say I'd better not hear about it... I'll now stop my incessent rambling. Do the entire fanfiction community a huge favor and update as soon as possible. (I might post this on fanfiction.net too, just incase you see it twice...)
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 16:15 EST
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Wow, this story is very good. kagome kicks ass as a demon. and if that last scene is the same as what im thinking, I can see why it could make someone feel a bit queesy. I hope that everyone got out fine. oh well, please update soon, and have fun this is good writing, so please continue the good work.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 16:11 EST
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im going to be reviewing twice, once for some weapon suggestions, and once for the story. weapons will come first. You seem to be doing an awesome job of thinking up some very imaginative weapons, and i think that the hohos and soap was quite funny. I pretty much only know about melee weapons, and you've pretty much only used a katana up to this point, so lets see. we have the tonfa (basically a policeman's club, but with an optional blade on the side opposite the handle), the naginata (the basically a spear whos tip was replaced by a swords blade), the tai chi sword (basically a straight sword used in the martial discipline, my personal favorite), and perhaps a double blade (a sword that has a blade on each side of th hilt). cant think of any more melee weapons, and most of the weaponry seems to be taken care of, except perhaps a whimsical satellite death ray that the government keeps secret. oh well, next review (even though this is probably the second review your reading)
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Reviewed By: cool20 On: December 11, 2003 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i was wondering were u went I couldnt find ya on ff.net dont know why? oh well love the stuff keep it up, or i will have to kiddnap u and tie u up in my basement and make u finish this for me! braed and water once a day chain around the ankle type thing! hope thats enough motivation. hehehehehe ja!
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Title: I didn't review earlier..... Oooopppss!! O.o;;
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 08:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, sorry bout that, I did mean to review earlier but........... **** happens... oh yeah, life happens too!!! ^^ Anyhow, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! *shivers* Mental pictures...KEEP ON GOING WITH YOUR FANFIC!!!!.... Well, you now have a mages powers!!! Any power you'd like, it is yours to use, er, threaten, er, encourage your readers to review!!! HAVE FUN!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:37 EST
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GAAAHHHHH!!!!! This is so sad!!! I still love it non the less though! ^-^ Thanks for the update! ~Kitsune Ookami-chan (ff.net name)
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: Esme On: December 07, 2003 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Nasty horryfying images of blood and other things were in my head... But the chapter itself was still good. Good job, cant wait to read the rest and I hope you get A LOT of reviews for this great story that is too good for words. ^_^
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 02:50 EST
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AAUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!! Why did you have to end it there?! I simply love this story, I almost had a Inu fit when I couldn't find it this morning to finish it. I was on the verge of shreading something(Human or otherwise). I so want to see what happens next. I'm desperate here, please, oh please update soon. If you don't I may just start killing things to vent my frustration,^-^.*smashes nearby tree to splinters with pole-arm* Ok that made me feel a little better, but not much. Mabey I'll go kill a few demons.*smiles thoughtfully* Oh Inuyasha!!^-^ *evil grin*. Please get the next chapter up soon, I so need to see where this will go. Keep writing.^-^
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Reviewed By: Heero Himura On: December 05, 2003 13:28 EST
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Oops forgot to ask, but where are the pics at? Tell me in the next chapter. I want to see those things.
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Reviewed By: Heero Himura On: December 05, 2003 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok to start with I just read every chapter this story in under 24 hours. And I have to say, you are one insane girl, but that makes you very funny. The hohos thing made me laugh for a good 5 minutes, and with me that is an impressive amount of time. The lemon chapter wasn't needed, but it was good, and as for over all story I have only one thing to say. Update soon. You aren't the only one with alot of weapons to use. Oh yeah a gift for you DL. *Hands you a chain* There is a huge red dragon at the end of this. He will obey only the person who holds the chain. Enjoy.
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Reviewed By: me On: December 04, 2003 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good
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