| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: wepon
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me: yay senseless wepons. *holds out a Graboid egg* Here you go he can eat all your none reviewers. heheheheheheh. Bert Gummer: Huh? not another one. Trio: run for the hills or the graboids will get yah. Me: Hey read my inu fic Boldly Going Nowhere. or i'll sic El Blanco my albino graboid on you. Trio: You are obbsessed with Tremors. Me: so are you.
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 21:03 EST
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hey, i got to read three new chaps! ('cause the others were on ff.net before) i'm not one for Inyasha in modern clothing, but hey it works. great job!
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Title: I like it, I loves it, I want some more of it!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Nice! Keep on going! I can see why it was such a big hit on ff.net........ By the way, couldn't you be an elemental mage, and use wind, water, fire, earth and all of that goodness to threaten, er, tell readers to review? *chuckles at her ebilness* hehehe... have fun, I hope to see the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere On: November 28, 2003 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good chapter! A really good story too! Is this the end? If not, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 28, 2003 03:24 EST
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How will Kagome and Inuyasha handle the situation in the Feudal era? What will Koaga do when he finds out that Inuyasha and Kagome are mates? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere On: November 28, 2003 02:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on ff.net earlier, and i saw this story. at first i thought someone ripped this off. but then i came here and found out that you are that author. I reviewed your story before they took it off of ff.net. i am LtlSwimmerGurl. I still think that your story is to good!
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Reviewed By: battlewhore [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic! i like it alot. and my personal guess is that she's getting her period. but i really hope you won't make this a "and she smells so damn good to the demons, 'cause now she's in "heat"" thing, 'cause we human girls AREN'T in heat when we have our period. everybody uses that, and it irritates me. i mean, EW? sex while menstruating doesn't really do it for me. it makes more sense to be in heat about a week afterwards. i mean, does it really make sense biologically that we'd be fertile when we're bleeding? in fact, that's probably the SAFEST time to have protection-less sex. it would just be really ... messy. ew. - battlewhore "i prefer the term 'morally challenged.'"
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Reviewed By: Zsenny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. ^_^ I love your writing style, a pleasure to read. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:42 EST
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AN UPDATE, AN UPDATE! YIPPI! to be honest i don't remember some things about your story, like what's with Kagome. :( but that's why i'm reading it now! =D YIPPI! (i had a lot of candy to day.)
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Reviewed By: eRICYAMAHA89 On: October 31, 2003 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a realy good story i cant wait util chap 8
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Title: i have your story saved
Reviewed By: vap [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 20:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DL, i have your story saved on my computer but im not quite sure how to get it to you, i saved all but the last two chapters as one word document, if you have aim my name "aim name" is daemonpyreblue and my email is rvap@msn.com
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 10, 2003 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading it on fanfiction.net but never got to finish it. I loved it please continue writing it.
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: September 13, 2003 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Took me forever to find this again, I'm not very perceptive. Yay!! I hope you finish the story! I can't wait for it! As always really good chapter and story! |
Reviewed By: Kamila_Silver On: September 03, 2003 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic!!!! |
Reviewed By: Elayne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just found this fic and I love it! I like the idea, though it seems rather unlikely to occur as nothing like that was ever seen in the series. But I'm sure you'll explain everything in good time.
I know you said not to ask for a lemon, but would it be too much to request a little hint of lime? If you don't want to yet, that's fine. I really enjoy it so far, and i think you have a very nice, straight-foward way of writing, which I much prefer to pure smut and long-winded descriptions. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter ^_*! |
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