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Reviewed By: crazyhelga (not logged in) On: September 23, 2004 21:19 PDT
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Great job LGV! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter... You always keep us at the edges of our seats and begging for more, and I wouldn't have it any other way! Well, keep up the excellent work and update as soon as you get the chance. Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: BlueRain32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't get enough, awesome story. Why couldn't I have read them more slowly? I need to read more LOL. Please if anyone knows of other great Bulma/Vegeta fanfics e-mail me or list them. I haven't found any quite like Lavender's.
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Reviewed By: Venuss On: September 21, 2004 13:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it, the plot is awsome!! please add me to your update list, bulma_secrets@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 10:26 PDT
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Well, that was an interesting turn of events! A new twist and Kakarrot's secret still to be revealed! Update soon!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: i'm jagan-I On: September 20, 2004 04:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh!!!! they have a son???!!!???!!! oh my gosh.... Trunks, please oh please update soon, i beg you, i'm dying in here pls... pls.... You knbow you're one of the best writers in this universe so please don't torture me like this, pls oh pls update soon... Luv u so ,much!!!! uuu tc olwez... uuu
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Reviewed By: subu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 15:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although this fic is quite different from the others you wrote,I still enjoy it as much as the others you wrote, please don't stop updating.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Dazed Reviewer On: September 18, 2004 14:39 PDT
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Oh my gosh! I cannot believe Bulma had a son! That's why she got all serious and mad when Vegeta was saying that the chance of her getting pregnant after just one time was highly inprobable. I can't believe it! She gave her son to Ju-whatever-her-name-is and that's is why she kept in contact and that's why she was so fixed on them only writing eachother at scheduled times because she was so worried about Trunks.Oh my goddness. By the way, what's Bulma's last name? Does Trunks have her last name or the other woman's? And please don't let her and Vegeta get an anullement. You should have Goku find out that Bulma is not chaste and has in fact lost it to Vegeta and did it with him recently. But you should have her find out that he did something with Chichi. Why else woluldn't he want her to meet her? He seems so secrertive about them. And make nexus get hurt os make himrape bulma! that would be awesome. Was Trunks the secret she wasd keeping from vegeta when she said he couldn't find out until after their anullement so that she wouldn't be tied to him. You should have Kakarot not want anything to do with her. She and himdon't belong together.She belongs with vegeta. They fit eachother perfectly. Besides,it doesn't really seem like Goku still lov4es her. he's probably just trying to be with her because that is what his life was like. make him be in love with chichi or comething. but make chichi and bulma be friends cause wedon't need anymoree jealousy n rivalry.Please update soon! |
Title: Speachless
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 18, 2004 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this story is realy good, I like where it's going. poor trunks though. I hope Vegeta Will get over himself and tell bulma how he feels
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Reviewed By: kikyo7089 On: September 17, 2004 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the end of that chapter was a shocker. I had no idea. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 17, 2004 17:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really don't want Nexus to be with bulma...oh how terrible that would be.i know that she loves him deep down inside..this story gets so hard to read somtimes...i fell for him so much..really great story.can't wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: kendra On: September 17, 2004 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well if you thake out the flash back and reflection of bulma and vegeta you don't have much of a chapter. And with a *spoiling* title you don't bring anything thrilling to the story.
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Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I love your work ^_^ Awesome chapter! Keep 'em coming! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bulma75*** On: September 17, 2004 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update soon. Great chapter. Knew it was Trunks all along. Great side plot.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Y On: September 16, 2004 08:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I love the drama, but did vegeta really have to have THAT problem??? i can't imagine him being anything but perfect in that field... Anyway, i still love it all the same. Please update soon, i understand you may be busy, but we've been waiting for a while. PLZ!!
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Reviewed By: merlinis me On: September 10, 2004 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a chapter you have to update soon cause i can't wait!!!!
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