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Title: Awww...
Reviewed By: Sandy02 On: September 07, 2004 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... Wow... Events are finally unfolding! ^_^ (I finally find you! I didn't realize you had stopped posting at FF.com until I looked at your profile -.- stupid me) But ah, whats going to happen? Is Kakarot married? Does Bulma have a child? And does Nexus now have that child under his care? Arg >.< Good story, awesome plot, wonderful writing. -Sandy02- -KittyKatRascal-
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Reviewed By: mona On: September 07, 2004 01:27 PDT
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please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:52 PDT
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Poor Vegeta. I wonder what happend between Karkarotto and Chichi..
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: August 28, 2004 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a briliant chapter i can't believe it ended like that i was so shocked i thought they would part on good terms but it seems you've surprised your readers yet again. i don't know why but i feel more sympathy for Vegeta than Bulma for Bulma is asking of Vegeta something which she hasn't even given him herself. She seems quite hypocritical to me yet i still can't wait to see how this develops. I can't wait to find out Nexus' plans for jucachigou and the mysterious child.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: August 19, 2004 10:32 PDT
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just great... beautiful... i love the latest chapter... just the perfect suspense and drama.. a cliffhanger but i hope for the next chapter which will hopefully be up soon that there is a solution for the wonderful heartbroken vegeta... i can't wait for it.. please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahaha, SO EVIL! I love your writing, and I hope that you don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews on this site. That is why I am reviewing! YAY I AM THE 100th REVIEWER! I win!!!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 17, 2004 16:17 PDT
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What's the bet there's a vital piece of information not already told to Bulma as to why Vegeta had to kill Kakarott, like he killed her parents and enjoyed it or something like that. And because Bulma is so convinced that Kakarott is the man for her, he's been cheating on her the entire time he was healed by those people and started a family with someone else.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 00:16 PDT
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Oh no! So close and yet so far! Another lovely chapter--this is really a good story. I'm enjoying it immensely.
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: ArtemisDuLunes On: August 16, 2004 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goddess girl, you can WRITE! There are no words for chapter 10, I was riveted to say the very least. And that entire seductive routine between B and V in the carriage was just simply beyond beautiful. Amazing. Talk about your sexual tension why don't ya! ;) LOL. I love what you do with their relationship in your stories. She is strong and feminine and he manages to express some of the most beautiful sentiment without saying a word and never without retaining that godlike masculine pride of his, that I adore so. Your writing is truly inspired. NEVER stop! (And if you could check out a new, one-shot I've posted on Fanfiction.net, where I followed this story from, I would really like to hear your comments on it, even though you've boycotted that site. Thanks. Its called Swept Away.) Love ya girlie. Please post soon, cuz I can hardly contain ^0^. Laterz.
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Title: This is Namoi and Kakkabrat i just didn't want to sign in.
Reviewed By: Namoi On: August 15, 2004 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Terrible cliff hanger! how could you do this to me!? :: says dermaticly ::
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Reviewed By: kikyo0789 On: August 15, 2004 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job with this chapter. I loved it. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 06:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I wasn't expecting that, it just hit me out of the blue. WHAM! Poor Bulma, poor Vegeta. What else could possibly happen between them to muddy the waters of their emotions any more? Knowing you, you'll come up with something. Awesome chapter.
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Title: One Night
Reviewed By: StaindGT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:20 PDT
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That was so unexpected. But damn was it funny. I actually never thought Vegeta would...well you know, anyway that was no short of Talent! Brillant. And yet again I am impressed with your work.
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:11 PDT
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OMG! All that's happened so far was so not what I expected! I didn't think they would leave things like this, but then again... the worse the break-up, the better the make-up ^_^. I like the fluid connections you made from both points of view, and for some reason, it's a little more... shocking, on Vegeta's part, to finally realize why Bulma's nuts >_
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww!!! That's really sad...I mean damn, that was so ean for her to say. It bugs even worse because they want teh same things from eachother and all that. Well, hopefully everything will turn out for the best in the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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