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Title: I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Reviewed By: phrisky On: September 25, 2004 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope that they do kiss and more ^_^ keep updating and i hope there is some kind of lemon and SOON!!!! lol well g2g KEEP UP THE FABULOUS WORK!!!!! ^_^ luv ya phrisky
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: September 25, 2004 18:16 PDT
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A book???? That's 'it'??? Aww, man! It could be any kind of book! A diary, a magic book, a cookbook, a book of lullabies...that couldn't be it. Could it? I mean, he was singing a lullaby before, right? Argh!!! This is gonna eat me alive! I'm crazy, I know. But you already figured that out, huh? LOL. Hope you talk about this book MORE in the NEXT CHAPTER! *hint hint* LOL
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 17:46 PDT
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Since they're traveling alone without the gang and knowing how Inuyasha is feeling for Kagome, will he 'slip' and let her know how he feels. You know, without the constant comments from Miroku or the taunting from Shippou that always stop him before. They are without a chaperon and they're only adolescents going on young adulthood, no? ;-)And the book? Is it a family picture book (with painting of course) or a diary or... what is it??? And I love the moment in the tree, will there be more? **herg! stupid french-anglish dictionnary doesn't have all the words I want to use***glearing at the book** **Flash** Is it a Kama Sutra book for Inu Youkai with humans? ~_^
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: September 25, 2004 17:01 PDT
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What's in the book?? C'mon, don't leave me hanging. Please? ::pouts:: Meanie.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 16:48 PDT
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Awesome. So what is the book and what is about? IS it about Inu? His father? His mother? A prophecy? What? Keep up the good work. cools beans as peas in a pod on a fire.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 14:30 PDT
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This is good ! please update soon !! I wanna find out what happens !!!!
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: September 25, 2004 13:02 PDT
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Hehe.. interactive reviewing... I'm lovin' it! hehe Well, now at least we know where they're going.. that's half of my sanity back. I loved the part where after she sits him she wipes him up and they apologize.... I could feel my heart thumping right along with Kagome's. Well, with all that being said, time to go wait for the next chapter. hehe
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Squalleon On: September 25, 2004 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't get over the fact that your writing just keeps getting better and better and better. Keep up the fantastic work! This is excellent Awesome work! This one is promising to be as good if not better than Purity!
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: September 25, 2004 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All praise the updating one! ::laughs:: This is really entertaining. Your stories are starting to be the reason I come to this site.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: September 24, 2004 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! Busted! I love how you ended this chapter. When Inu took his time getting up, I knew he was doing it on purpose to make Kagome squirm. And Inu is singing?!?! Woa...I hope you write some lyrics to his song. I would love, love, LOVE to hear this lullaby!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 22:17 PDT
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great chapter!! keep up the good work! hope u update asap^_^ ~Melissa~
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Title: Cetacea92
Reviewed By: cetacea92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawwww! How cute. Inuyasha is still taking care of Kagome as she follows him. That is so sweet! Can't wait to see how you write their eventual reunion. Also, I love how you've kept everyone in character so far. At what chapter are you going to tell us what Inuyasha's mission is? I can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 14:50 PDT
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That was nice of Inuyasha to protect Kagome, even if she didn't know that, but I can't wait to see what Kagome's reaction is when she realizes that she doesn't have the Shikon no Tama.
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: September 24, 2004 13:10 PDT
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I hope she finds him so they can kiss and make up! *Very wishful thinking on my part.. hehe* And I need to know what IT is... IT is driving me insane! hehe I love this story so far... you are an excellent writer, and I can't wait to see what's in store for us!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 13:00 PDT
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great chapter! can't wait to see what happends ^_^ hope u update asap. ~Melissa~
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