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| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 › » ] | Reviewed By: krazy_kilala [not signed in[ On: January 22, 2005 23:46 PST
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Wow! Anther great chapter for Possession. Of course, this one leaves us with anther cliffhanger. You know, I do have my minions that'll eat you if you continue to keep me in suspense like this! Anyways, I have a question to ask you, so if you could e-mail me at Xxvixen320@aol.com we can talk about it! Continue writing, everyone loves this story!
| Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 22:48 PST
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Oh my....Kagome's inner turmoil, her hatred of herself, guilt for how she treated Scott throughout their marriage and sudden fear when he pulled out the gun. But when he pulls the trigger, a resigned feeling of relief that it's all over now. No more pain, no more disgust, no more struggling to pretend that everything is fine. "Stick a fork in me...I'm done." ---- Deep.
| Title: Wow--another winner!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 21:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally catching up on my reading, and you've got not only one but TWO new stories up, and they're both wonderful! I really like this one, dark and angsty as it is, with a very hard Kagome, but you're doing such a terrific job with her backstory that I understand how many layers of scar tissue have built up around her heart. Great jeopardies in this story, helluva cliffhanger, and I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the great work!!
| Reviewed By: kagz On: January 22, 2005 21:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay.. I seriously never though I would say this, and never thought I would feel this way. I've read a lot of fanfics and stories.. But god, that last chapter of yours, .. I feel like I'm going to die if I don't know what happens!! oh, your writing is so good, it's bittersweet...btw, all those ten ratings are HEARTFELT.( im not logged in, but this is chaos_kyes_fallen_angel )
| Reviewed By: Sevs Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!!! I'm sorry thats all i can think of to say. It was honestly the best written chapter i have seen on anything in a long time, it was something you could really get into, and unlike most things other people have written, it is something that will consume the mind about what happens next. excelent job!!
| Title: You've ripped my heart from my chest
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading this story on AFF.net and oooh my god I think your story is the only one thats well written on the whole site. I knew that it was over here at mm.org so I came to review and put this story on my favs cause I don't think you can do that over there at AFF.net. Pretty dark, fucking sad, and I'm hangin on the edge of another cliff praying thats you'll give me my inuyasha and Kagome lovin heart back and save me from falling. I love the way kagome is bitter, and I loathed the way Inuyasha was so damn evil...I don't think I've ever like Inuyasha that way but your write it well I hope they get another confrontations soon. Thanks for the story I'll review next chapter with more weird praise. Ja matta ne
| Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 20:12 PST
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Oh wow that was a good chapter... Blew me awayy!! God, I love your work so much! I really thought it was going to be Inuyasha there, man that guy scared the hell out of me.. creep! o.o;; what is he, a stalker? >_> thats scary. in the middle of the night too... man, if inu gets loose, theres gonna be hell, lol.
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 17:49 PST
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Oh, please update again soon. That cliffie is eating at me and I need to know what happens next! I can't get enough of this story!
| Reviewed By: crying_alone_in_the_shadows On: January 18, 2005 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
baby?...baby?!...BABY?! HOLY CRAP!!!!! AND WHAT THE F*** IS SCOTT DOING THERE?! DAMN THIS STORY IS GETTING AWESOME!!!!
| Reviewed By: Krazy_Kilala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 15:16 PST
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Oh. My. God. YOU SUCK! You have no idea how scared I was at the end of this chapter. I was holding my breath and terrified FOR HER! :::trys to calm thudding heartbeat::: I absolutely love 'Posession', it is one of the best stories I have ever read, so well thought out and written, and original. It kept me on the edge, I know that! I was twitching nervously and dieing to get to the end but then mad when I did get to the end. Anyways, I have an important question for you, so if you'd e-mail me at Xxvixen320@aol.com or give me your e-mail, we can talk it out! Please, update soon! I can't wait, and why the hell is Scott running away the shrine? What if he tries to hurt her and Inu Yasha saves her? But then what would happen? GAH! My brain hurts! Please hurry! x Vixen [aka Krazy-kilala]
| Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 10:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--I really like this story so far. Definitely dark and creepy...I've wondered myself, from time to time, "what if Inuyasha is just playing along with the others, in order to get his hands on the complete and purified jewel?" Your story is a really engaging exploration of that what-if. I look forward to seeing more!
| Title: possesion
Reviewed By: Rosa Torres On: January 18, 2005 07:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great!I'm hanging on the edge,can't wait to find out what will happen next!
| Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 01:45 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this fanfic pleaz update soon is she gonna c inu - chan again i despise hojo w/ a passion now poor kagome seeing her x husband all in 1 day and finding out that her brother dropped out of skool omg her life iz fucked up sooooooo bad and shez in dat skimpy night gown although i must admit i do own a night gown alot like that but mine barley covers my ass and i go out all the time in it but still pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz pleaz make another chappie REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY soon pleaz
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 17, 2005 23:04 PST
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Such terrible things to torment herself with. The ghosts of the past still haunt her; regrets among the worst. Now her ex-husband has shown up...sneaking around in the dark. Not a good sign. What is he up to? --- Good chapter.
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 11:29 PST
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What a shocking story! I'm riveted by the darkness your spinning into it. How awful for Kagome. InuYasha pretending all that time to care for her only to get his hands on the Shikon no Tama once it was completed. (I really have to stretch my brain to accept that concept, but you told it so well I was starting to hate him...and I love my doggie-boy!) His subsequent possession of her and breaking her spirit in the process...how unbearably horrid. And she still loved him, in spite of it all. Would have given him another chance at the very last...only to have her worst fears realized; that he was no longer the InuYasha she once loved if, in fact, he ever had been that person. Want and Love are two different things and it took her a while to understand that her love would never be enough to combat his cruelty. (God, I'm gonna have a hard time getting that image outta my head) Now, while she may be successful and powerful, she has lost all of her self-esteem...and her self-worth. She carries little respect for anything or anyone except for her family. The flashback to her hemmorraging at school sounds suspicously like a misscarriage...which only further broke her. A child might have been the only redeeming thing she might have had from the experience; something good from the bad. Even that was taken from her. Now, her contempt for herself has colored her world. How sad.
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