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Title: Beautiful Job!
Reviewed By: KuramasGirl1 On: November 11, 2003 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story! I have read it over a hundred times waiting for the next chapter to come out. You are such a great writer, and the lemon was perfect. I say that because you didn't make it seem like they had sex before, like a lot of other fan fics do. But anyways, the next chapter sounds quite interesting, a baby. I wonder what it will look like.
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Reviewed By: bl On: November 11, 2003 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's fireash...good job on the lemon. i think i am blushing too. good details. thanks for updating.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is easily my favorite IY story. The lemon was very well done especially considering it was your first. Very sensual. Great job all around. Looking forward to more of your writing.
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Reviewed By: ME On: November 10, 2003 21:58 EST
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I'm still totally loving your fic--I'm glad you didn't change Kagome into a hanyou, I mean she accepts Inuyasha the way he is, why should she change?? they're Inuyasha and Kagome--a hanyou and a human miko--anything else just wouldn't seem right! enjoy your R&R--can't WAIT for the next chapter ^_~ FINALLY!!!!!! ahhhh....lemons....just love citrus^_^
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 09, 2003 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, new chapters. My day is now happy. I LOVE the way you disposed of Montero (sp)! Read that bit over a couple of times because it was understated and way cool. As always, thanks for writing!!! Still my favorite fiction!
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story so much! its the best, keep up the good work. please update soon!!! :)
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Title: update soon plz
Reviewed By: Missy-Bee (the real one) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOO SUPER CUTE! Even Shippo made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. I agree with you. I didn't want Inuyasha to be a human, and I don't want to turn Kagome into a hanyou. I love how you handled this. I am really enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter(s)!!!!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: November 09, 2003 01:11 EST
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Thank you, thank you! Just a little earlier tonight before I started catching up where I'd left off on your story, a summary for another story I was reading made me think about the common uses for the shikon jewel. You know, the way most author's tend to use it in their stories. A lot of people use it to address the aging problem, and a lot of them tend to turn Kagome into a hanyou. I have to admit, when people do that it irritates me, lol...most people don't stop to think about the fact that that's just about as unfair as Kagome wanting Inuyasha to become human for her. So when you suddenly brought up the subject of aging in the last chapter, I immidately groaned, thinking 'No way! She wouldn't, would she?'. So I was very happy with your compromise as well as the fact that you actually had the characters point out why Kagome shouldn't change. And as for the rest of the story beyond that, I love it! The fluff is great without being too much or too sappy. I can't wait to see the next chapters, so please keep up the good work! Oh, and your spelling and errors are getting better. I didn't notice nearly as many this time around! ^_^
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Title: ^o^ Happy!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I love this fic!!!!!!!!! Sorry for not reviewing before for the other chapters, but it was too good not to stop! I've read afew of the Inuyasha fanfics but so far they are excelent! Yours is right up there!!! Please update soon!!!! Tanya
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Reviewed By: bl On: November 08, 2003 19:28 EST
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its fireash. too lazy to login. loved the chapter. glad you didn't make kagome hanyou as well. or inu human for that matter. cant wait for the next chapter. thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: Winter-sama (should sign in) On: November 08, 2003 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say thank you for a wonderful fic. I can't wait to read further installments, but I decided to write this review to show my appreciation for chapter 18. You showed originality in how you arranged the wish. I'm not a big fan of the kagome as hanyou plot line, and I think Inu has to keep his ears!!! Perfect choice!! Keep up the fantastic writing!! ciao! Winter
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Reviewed By: Kylinn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 16:11 EST
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Wonderful fic! Great job with the character development - can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:55 EST
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I appologize. I have been enjoying your fic for quite some time now, and have not reviewed. NO excuse, really, except that I e-mail myself chapters (can't access mediaminer at work), and read them there (lots of downtime w/ nothing else to do). So, I can't review when I read, and forget to do it later. Anyway, I love your story, love your writing style, get very happy when I know I have a new chapter to read! Much easier to go to work knowing I have one waiting for me to read. Can't wait for the next one! You are brilliant, and I thank you for such a wonderful, fluffy (I LOVE fluff), romantic story.
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Reviewed By: LadyHanyou On: November 08, 2003 14:50 EST
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Hey. I like your story so far. I dunno. I just have the feeling that we haven't seen the last of Montaro...
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