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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look just because it may seem boring to you it really helps your readers to understand whats going on. I'm sure that you will get back to the action soon. Just be patient.
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Title: Courtship
Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: October 21, 2003 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chappie may have been short but it was still good... so don't go hating it. i'm also glad that you aren't going to redo the chappie because it explains the youkai's visitation. Besides... this is story is really, really, GOOD! can't wait for the next update! laters!
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Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 11:21 EDT
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No, no this chapter (12) was definately not boring. I like the interaction with Kagome/Inuyasha and her shock that he is making and effort with Shippo. Definately keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: CandyPalmer
Reviewed By: CandyPalmer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my fave fic right now! I look forward to reading it every week! Don't stop!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 21, 2003 09:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. I know you didn't enjoy this chapter as much as the others but I'm glad you wrote it. A writer sometimes has to muddle through the inbetween stuff to get to the parts they are enthuisiastic about. Thanks for continuing to update this story as it is my current favorite.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Can you say... Kouga! Who else would try for Kagome's hand in marriage? Good work. Now I'm a elementary school teacher grading your paper, Good work. Ugh...
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction! I can't wait to see what he wishes for! *has many ideas rushing through head*
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Reviewed By: Rebekah On: October 18, 2003 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's so creative and fun to read. I frequently reread each chapter. I love the last chapter you did. I really like how you potraied the seamstress. She is very interesting. When I read the story I can imagine everything in my mind. It's a wanderful story. I look forward to reading the next chapter when you typw it up!
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 17, 2003 14:57 EDT
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Argh!! hate mm.org!! can never get it to work right---but, at least I finally got to read another chapter!! Inu and his dreams ^_~ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 16, 2003 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the stories on Media Miner, this is probably my favorite. Thank you!!! Please keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: Evil Karyta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 05:31 EDT
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Hello. ^-^ I can't believe I'm doing this, this late at night. I'm greatefull I'm off school tomorrow, all thanks to some strange reunion that cancelled my only class for that day... Go figure. This story is very good. You have a nice way to discribe things, althought your choice of word is rather repetitive. Try using some synonimes of metaphores. It'll make the story flow much better. Other thing, try not to overuse the charater's name. Saying 'Inuyahsa' in three sentences in a row tends to make the flow of the story a bit floopy, if you know what I mean. Readers get tired of reading the name every phrases. Try to discribe the character instead. For exemple: Instand of saying Inuyasha, try saying 'the silver haired' or try being creative. Play with the words a bit, it give the story some quality to it. Use proses, comparations, metaphores. In all, try not to repeat the same words over and over. The story become heavy in a ways. Truthfully, beside that, there's nothing wrong with this story. I love it very much. Actually, it's the first Inuyasha fanfiction that catches my interest enough for me to wonder when there would be a next chapter. ^-^ My best advice as a write is : Have fun writing and readers will enjoy reading it. Don't be too harsh on youself. If you think something is not good in a chapter, take a few days and read it again, maybe you're perseption will change. If you're not satified, try and seek someome to help you, to inspire you. Writing is 90% imagination 10% real situation. I how i was of any help to you. I'll be glad to read more of this. You're a good writer, keep going! Enjoy what you're doing!
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Reviewed By: Aisuru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 12:40 EDT
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Great chapter! I can't help wondering if the "full youkai" in the picture on the yukata is a foreshadowing of how the Shikon no Tama will eventually be used. I also wonder why no youkai (or bad humans other than the rich village boy) have tried to go after Kagome yet. I would have thought that she would be under attack by now, especially knowing how Kikyou attracted Onigumo (sp?) and Inuyasha 50 years prior.
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Title: courtship
Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: October 15, 2003 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOVE IT!!! got to admit, it was worth the wait. hope to see the next chapter up soon, if not - i'll still be waiting patiently. laters!
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Reviewed By: Kestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this fic. It almost seems to be an episode. You've delved deep into each of the character. Keep going on this fic.
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Reviewed By: Alyshar On: October 14, 2003 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this fic. It almost seems to be an episode. You've delved deep into each of the character. Keep going on this fic.
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