| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: PJ On: October 14, 2003 16:56 EDT
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Great chapter!!! I liked the way you addressed Shippou's feelings it was just right. Wonder why Taka put a fulled blooded youki on the cloths does she know something the others don't. Well again great chapter post more soon.
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kept it up!!!!!! And writting detailed chapetrs are hard.... thx for any inspiration you've given me...though i don't realize it yet. (I never do^-^)
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Reviewed By: original shadow On: October 14, 2003 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best inu fic i ever read and i read a lot of them keep doing this wonderful job write more please
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 11:49 EDT
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AWWWW! Cute! That was so good. Write more! If you do, I will!!!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 10:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your storie is amazing and even if u can't find this i'm happy just to write it... All the obstacle u put in front of those 2 are well thought out and i am really enjoying this fic....thx
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 03:50 EDT
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hey I know the feeling of not being able to see the revies...be a pest that and you have to logout but go to your own story hit write review and do not put your name or anything in their but hit submit. It ususally shows up then so good luck! Keep writing very good story I liked it
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: October 11, 2003 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shockingly enough, I actually liked this story enough to review for you, which has NEVER happened before on mediaminer. I normally stick to ff.net and even when I do read on here, I never review. I just had to let you know that I really have enjoyed reading the story and that I can't wait to see more of it! It's such a cute read and you do a great job with the characters and the plot. I was also VERY impressed with your original character Taka. I normally hate originals, but you did such a good job with her! What I do suggest you need to be more careful with in your spelling watching for typos. I notice a lot of that in your story. If your having a hard time with it, you might want to consider getting a beta reader. You know, someone willing to go over the story and look for mistakes and problems that you might not catch. They are very handy. ^_^ Please continue to keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 10, 2003 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! finally!! through no fault of yours, I could not get mm.org to work correctly!!--been checking back every day for 2 wks and this was the first I was able to get the new chapters--even then, I had to go about it in a convoluted way to get it!!! but it was worth it!! love your fic, can't wait for some more Inu-Kag 'moments' to come our way ^_^!!! I'll try to see if I can figure out how to see if you've updated--can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 18:12 EDT
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aaw....who is it?? is it koga??? or maybe..*gaspes* FLUFFY-CHAN??? oh plz!!! *huggles her 'precious'* anyways! i LOVE UR STORY! again and again and again! sorry i havent been a very loyal fan and didnt write as many reviews as i wanted^^ so PLZ UPDATE ASAP!!!! anyways^^ gtg and read on!!! ja ja!! plz continue!!!! meh and meh fluffy-chan plushies r egear to see wat happens next~
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Title: 2lazy2login
Reviewed By: bebe-jinx On: October 07, 2003 16:56 EDT
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You're right about the mm.org not working correctly. Since you update so quickly, I have been checking your story almost everyday since ch 9 was uploaded but it wasnt until today the 7th that i was able to see that you had updated but almost 5 days earlier. But anyway I love your story and what your doing. Another obstacle is no problem it just means they have to work through something else. Will Kagome be crying a lot in this fic? I have no problem with her crying I'm just not a fan of a Kagome who cries in EVERY chapter. The spelling typos are getting fewer which is something I really enjoy. Although I am a raging hentai, even I can see the rewards of taking time in a fic before adding a sex scene. The characterization is great and story just keeps on getting better. I will say that I can't wait for them to be together and I wonder when that will be. Are you going to be uploading this on ff.net? I kno that isnt the best place for lemon fics but yours isnt a lemon right now. plus they arent having any trouble with thier stories showing up. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:37 EDT
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I did not mean end the story soon, but end the tension that is there between inu & kag. I love this story. Update soon.
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Title: Fan-Freaking-Tastic
Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is great. How much longer are we going to suffer with this tension? Please end it soon.
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Reviewed By: Drkdrgyn On: October 04, 2003 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! One of the best IY romance fics I've read in a while, actually. You've been posting very frequently, which amazes me considering the quality. Of course it's possible that you're sitting on an almost complete fic, but still. You're a very dedicate author, and a pretty good one, too.
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 11:40 EDT
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the new problem is cool, you could maybe have Montaro and Inuyasha fight in later chapters adn Kagome accidentaly get faltaly hurt. And Inuyasha uses the jewel to wish for her to stay with him forever. And then she would have the long life of a hanyou just be human.
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Reviewed By: cherrybreeze On: October 03, 2003 11:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story. Please update it again soon! I love it.
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