| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: Medatsu-chan On: November 01, 2003 15:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur writting if really good...nice emotions...this fic has become very populor hasent it..lol see u next time!
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Title: *is extremely happy*
Reviewed By: kuramasgirl1 On: November 01, 2003 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is too lazy to sign in* It's KuramasGirl. ^^ Well anyway... That was a great chapter!! Who knew that Youkai InuYasha would be so gentle and kind? Can't wait till next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 14:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was wondering how Inu would convince Kagome of his love...thanks for updating!!!
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin13 On: November 01, 2003 13:55 EST
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hehe, im sitting here grinning. KAWAII!
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon! I love this story! Evil Cliffies!!
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you left off at that cliffy....that is just plain EVIL........
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU CLIFFY!!! *takes a bat and runs screaming at a cliff, beats the shit out of it until it is nothing more than a pile of rubble, and then returns sweaty and dirty* Okay! Where was I? Oh, yeah! DAMN CLIFFY! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR ELSE...OR ELSE...I'LL COME AFTER YOU WITH THE BAT! HAHA! Seriously, though, it really is too great a story for you to not update regularly! I absolutely love it and it has been on my favs list since the first chapter!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like this story. I noticed a few spelling errors, but most were just simple mistakes that spellcheck ignored, since they were spelled 'right'. It wasn't constantly repeated though, so I can't really complain. The story is going well enough that it's easy to ignore any minor mistakes to focus on the big picture. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all ends, but good writing can't be rushed. Good luck with it.
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. I have been following this story for a few weeks now. I really like it. That cliff is really really high; please hurry write another chapter. Save us!
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Reviewed By: Nazzy Nazzy Nazgirl On: October 28, 2003 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an AMAZING writer. Like piss-your-pants-oh-my-friggin-lord good. Like..whoa good... Your sentences really flow and mix, which really helps with the visualizations, and you describe things, but not in a cumbersome, arduous way. Beautiful. The NAZZY has spoken.
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 28, 2003 14:28 EST
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Dun, dun, dun!!!! So was Inu's dream a foreshadowing of his youkai self and Kagome?? hhmmmmm....very interesting!!! next chapter sounds like lotsa fun ^_~ love it!! update when you can *cough* soon *cough*
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 28, 2003 02:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the fantastic chapter. I love the way you wrote the demon form of IY. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: shannanaginns [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey this is an awsome fic. I can't remember if I have already reviewed, so I'm writing this. Ch. 12 isn't sucky. It's good just like the rest of this story. Just keep on writing I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 15:07 EST
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you are making me cry. I hate you!!! FINE. this must be a sign to write on my own story. WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: October 27, 2003 14:11 EST
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Wow this is getting really good!! Please continue to update when you can I look forward to the new chapters to this story. The last chapter was wonderful the way you had Inuyasha and Kouga fighting and Inu's thoughts on what would happen should he loose. How Kagome would never be totally free, etc. And how Inu's demon side already sees Kagome as his mate. This is so good the way you get their thoughts and stuff into the story. And the way Inuyasha and Shippo are getting along now is great. Again great story post more soon please!
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