| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:38 EDT
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wonderful story most of the characters had there ooc moments but totally an awesome story great job i am so envious from your great writing skill if only i could have a muse like yours but shhhhhhhhh don't tell mines anything about this. lol you probably think im being retarded right now sorry hope you write all your stories as greatly as you have done this one
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fanfiction was just... amazing. I loved how you wrote this... and so... exact and in character. I don't believe I have read a fanfiction like this before, and I do believe that it should have been more popular. I throughly enjoyed it... probably more than any other I have read. This was wonderful, and I hope you did write a sequel.
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Title: Just reviewing your work.
Reviewed By: Dreamspeaker_17 On: April 08, 2004 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You shouldn't be unhappy with this piece of work, I enjoyed reding it very much and thought it captured the essence of male cluelessness when it comes to courting women. There were some minor typos, a few sentence structure erros and sometimes you used the same word too close to each other and it left aome paragraphs sounding a bit repetitive. But all in all I enjoyed the overall outlook and mood of this story. Very good job! :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Drae [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is my favorite fan-fiction of all time. I loved it. I know how it ends but I still read it again and again and not for the lemon at the end,which is one of the most romantic ones I've ever read. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 03:14 EST
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Oh, this is lovely! That's probably not the best word to describe it, but this story really is a joy to read. Thanks for sharing!
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Title: WAAAAAHHH
Reviewed By: Rain B [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 12:43 EST
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DO A SEEEEEEEEEEQUUUUUUUUEL!
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Title: Noooo!
Reviewed By: Rain B [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 12:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo! it can't end!!! dammit i'm like crying here.....this was the greatest story i ever reeeeaaaad!!! omg you're amazing! i've never enjoyed a fic this much..........aaaaaaahndvqevb!!!!!!!! you are a GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Inuyasha:done *_*
Reviewed By: ZombieCat On: March 24, 2004 03:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found alot of spelling errors but it was the second best fan fic i EVER read WOW! *sniff *sniff I dont want it to be over!!!!! any way, i loved it! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ~Ruri
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Reviewed By: bob 420 On: March 12, 2004 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story i wish it was longer
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Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah this story was fansastic . I loved it ! Could you please email me when you sequel is up .
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Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh , yeah ...I just got through reading the 17 th chapter , and I must say that I an firmly pissed ! At Montaro that is . I think he got off to easy . He deserves to be tortured to death ! That son of a bitch ! Well anyway , I love this story .
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Title: SesshomaruStar
Reviewed By: SesshoumaruStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 02:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I loved this story!!!
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Title: courtship
Reviewed By: whit On: February 29, 2004 00:04 EST
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wow it took me a long time to finish this in one day but HOT DIGIDY DAMN this was a awesome fic and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job overall rating:10
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 23:15 EST
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This piece came highly recommended. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hungry, cold, and with a useless arm, he would die to a pack of wolves that weren't even hungry but carrying out orders from their youkai master. This is a perfect line. Kouga still loves her enough to be offended, but the fact that you don't mention his name shows that he's "out of the picture" in more ways than one. Even if you did this by accident, it's completely brilliant.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 21, 2004 10:25 EST
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Still one of my favorite stories! Just coming back for a re-read. Thanks again for writing!
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