| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 22:55 EDT
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amazing story... i really liked it... great work... good job!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! I love u............ I want ur babies!! I will see u in the sequel.
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Title: Well Done!
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved your story. Well done!!! I would definately read any other inu/kag story if you decide to write another one!!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 17:58 EDT
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Prologue: I've read your story before, and I think that it is a spectacular story, but would you mind rewriting your summary? There are just so many typos and grammatical errors in it, and it really bothers me, since your story is otherwise brilliant.
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Title: Moshi Moshi
Reviewed By: coke_cola123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 07:23 EST
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I like the way you write! YEAH! GO! I read fanfiction with lemons not for pleasure but for realizations.... nice story....
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 22:08 EST
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This was a very good story and I really enjoyed reading it and thanks for writing it^_^
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 02:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this story was written a really long time ago, but I just read it for the first time and thought I would review, because I really like the story, especially how romantic it is. It was nice to see Inuyasha uncertain and hopeful. I thought it was believable, too, since he's changed so much through knowing Kagome and this fic is set even further in the future, when her influence would no doubt be even more developed. The only problem I had with the story is the numerous spelling mistakes, which occur in almost every paragraph. It's especially distracting during the lemons, when it's a little funny to all of a sudden have someone touching someone else's "nibbles" instead of "nipples," for example. If you ever decide to revise this story and need a beta reader, feel free to contact me. It's a good story, so I'd be glad to help.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 16:02 EDT
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That's *shock* it? Oooh... it was so good...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 15:59 EDT
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It's called a Goshinboku tree... even though others have undoubtedly told you that. I love your story... though I kinda skipped the lemon *blush*
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 15:58 EDT
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It's called a Goshinboku tree... even though others have undoubtedly told you that. I love your story... though I kinda skipped the lemon *blush*
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Reviewed By: DarkInuyashaangel101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I can't wait for the sequel. Please let me know as soon as you post it! Thanks. DarkInuyashaangel101
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Reviewed By: Chebonne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 06:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my God. *Starts bawling* Jesus, I'm really moved. I feel like going 'awww' and squeal with joy. I'm such a ditz. Anyway, I really liked this. The whole love story between Inuyasha and Kagome was great, his courting was probably among the sweetest things that I've ever read. i was a little confused in the beginning with Sango and Miroku already being married, but the OOCness of that was probably due to both of them being tired. And a girl! Who knew? Well, you obviously, but still... The part that I loved the most, however, was the bonding between Shippou and Inuyasha. Most people just sort of jump straight to Shippou calling him Papa, without the middle ground of them actually starting to accept each other as father and son. There was one story that I read where Inuyasha was trying to give Shippou the childhood that he himself never had, and I really started thinking about that here. Our little hanyou is growing up *dries tears of pride* What can I say, I love that annoying little kitsune brat. He's smart and capable, but still a little kid, and it's good that he gets a father figure. I also loved the fact that Sesshy and Inuyasha is actually getting along. Wow, so never saw that one coming. The demon seamstress was scary as hell, but just to be expected. And that Montaro guy creeped the living daylight outta me. His eventual demise at the teeth of wolves was actually the most creepy part about it. It was sort of chilling how quickly he was dismissed - not that he didn't deserve it, the twisted bastard. The thing with Kouga was also a novelty, and a welcome one at that. I always loved how people seems to get impressed with Inuyasha - the fact that he's so strong and capable (even without the Tetsusaiga) despite being a hanyou. And finally Kouga gets a little respect for that and for the love between Kagome and our dear hanyou. Yes, thank you! I've been waiting for that. It was also great that Kikyou was taken care of so early, that she was only mentioned and not included. I get really tired of that woman and it's just... when she's around things really get overly complicated. But it was a nice catch. So anyway, let's see... Kagome and Inuyasha, Shippou, Kouga, Kikyou... no, I think I mentioned it all. I loved the story! Ja ne
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Title: Stupid Computer
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 22:08 EDT
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the review below waw supposed to be for Worthy... my computer decided to be an ass... I really should refrain from reviewing... something ALWAYS goes wrong... sorry for the mix up.
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Title: Update?
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 22:05 EDT
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Okay I'm dying to know how this is going to end... you said that there is only only one chapter left. I don't mean to sound pushy but... what IS the hold up?
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Title: Lovely Story
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story and I haven't read a story in a long time that used the Shikon no Tama like yours did. Most use it for other things but it fulfilled its purpose for the story. ^^ What a story it was! I absolutely loved the courtship part of the story. It was purely Inuyasha before Miroku interfered. Even after that it was Inuyasha and he was sweet. ^^ The fight with Kouga was excellent and you have no trouble with action scenes as well as love scenes. Overall the story itself was wonderful and your ideas were a refreshing change. As for the spelling and grammar in your story, it was very bad. I suggest getting yourself a beta to beta-check your work. It'll improve the quality and really make this fic shine more! ^^ Despite the shortcommings in the technical department it was still very creative and enjoyable to read. I liked how the chapters gradually got longer since I prefer longer chapters to short ones. Good luck with your future endeavours and I hope to read more of your work in the future!
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