| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zsenny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel?? Please write a sequel. *puts on her best puppy dog look* Loved the new chapter. Keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: flame81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 10:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You make me want to read a the sequel, so go on write it! Of course only if you feel too ^.^ I would really like to see whats happen to them in the years until they meet Kagomes family and there is still the Rin/Fluffy issue not to mention Kouga/?.. But I am sure you have enough ideas of your own to make your humble readers very very happy ^.^
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Title: its a wedding
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 09:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HERRAY HERRAY, lets go to a wedding. I can't wait for the next chappy...
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah another great chapter
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 08, 2003 03:39 EST
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What comes next? The wedding, the mating, or giving her the kimonos? Will Sesshomaru visit or come to the wedding? Please update as soon as possible.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved this fic from the first word. I'm glad to see you updating so regularly, and It's so nice to see those two finally getting together in your own cool author-way. Good job with it, you know we all look forward to seeing the next chapter, but you really just can't rush great writing. Good luck with the rest of the story - even though you've not needed any luck with it yet, it's just so nicely written!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: November 08, 2003 02:28 EST
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Cool I like this chapter. I am glad too that you didn't turn Kagome into a hanyou. Inuyasha fell in love with as a human so it is good that he didn't want her to change. Kagome didn't want him to change she fell in love with Inuyasha the hanyou. If either one wanted the other to change they would have been no better then Kikyou wanting to change Inu into a human. Kag/Inu truly love each other and don't want the other to change because it wouldn't be who they fell in love with. Keep writing this is good.
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Reviewed By: Storm Crow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so I've loved this from the start and I soooo want to read the last chapter, but I am not yet able to see chapter 18. Anyway, it is such a beautiful love story and the timing for the entire plot moves at just the right pace. I completly feel with Kagome and Inuyasha. And I absolutely love Miroku. ^_^ Steamy love scenes, romantic twists and turns, and lots of good ol' raw passion. Total goodness all the way.
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 12:15 EST
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I absoslutely love this fic, it's definitly different and you at least update your fic a lot. Love it^.^
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think she would should wish to be half demon like inuyahsa that way their pups when they have some will have those cute dog ears
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please put a new chapter out soon. Can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: medatsu-chan On: November 06, 2003 19:12 EST
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u never ceace to amaze me
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Reviewed By: Billie On: November 06, 2003 16:56 EST
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Fireash here. just not logged in. loved the new chapter. well not the rape but the way you wrote it. you are very talented. thanks for updating and can't wait to read more. there were a few spelling errors but they were minor.
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Reviewed By: EibhlinRoise On: November 06, 2003 06:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have crafted a wonderful story. Your characterizations and plotlines are consistent with the manga, making your story truly mesh with the canon IY universe. It is a rare feat. And the introduction and punishment of Montaro was very well done; it's a touchy subject, but I think you managed to portray it realistically. However, there are a few thinks I'd like to point out, mostly incorrect usage. "As long as her head was out of the heat, she had no completes." *Complaints* would be a better choice. To be honest, I've noticed quite a few of these in previous chapters as well. However, that was the only thing that lowered my reading pleasure. Your story is enthralling.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 05, 2003 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! New chapters! Thank you!! Loving this story more than words can say.
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