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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: musicartemisa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2011 10:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was well rounded! I loved how you put challenges, like you didnt make it a done deal, that Kagoma and Inuyasha were gonna end up together. I loved the emotional turmoil between them too. All the little details of the courting and Inuyasha's acceptance of Shippo. I was sad everytime I clicked next chapter because I knew I was getting closer to the end. My praises to you, because your story has been the best one I've read. And you lemon, was beautiful! THANK YOU SO MUCH! |
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 10:21 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: Ht tp:// groups. yahoo. com/group/ FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/winners. php?a= show&type= Fanfiction&year= March%202010 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: Ht tp:// feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/pickup_ site. php First place awards will be on permanent display here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/gallery. php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: amz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. But it needs to be Beta'd or atleast spellchecked. If not spelled checked it summons some very hilarious images sometimes.
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Title: darkil
Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there were a few times in there were u got a little gender confused when revering to inuyasha sometimes u'd say she or her, or do like that with kagome, there were other times when there were spelling errors, but honestly, thats all I can say negitavly about it, this is one of the best ones ive ever read (and I only read the good ones) and was that really ur first lemon? Cause it didn't seem like it to me, ur a natural, i don't think ive ever seen one done so realistically before, if you just changed a few details to make it cannon with the manga, it'd be perfect way to end the story, i haven't gotten to check for the sequel yet, but I'm really looking forward to reading it now, and once again I just have to say this was amazing, great job!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 19:46 EST
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awww... i really liked the ending.. great job!!!
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Title: Congratulations! You've been rec'd!
Reviewed By: The Readers Have Chosen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, STORY NAME, has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Weekly Poll (Inuyasha section). Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Inuyasha Weekly Poll at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index. php ? topic = 408.0 Thank you for sharing your work with us!
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Title: You have been nominated!
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 14:41 EST
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You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck! Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction. Site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / index . html Poll (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index . php ? board = 6.0
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very nice story. I like how you worked in her staying without making her make the choice for a change. I also loved how it was him out of control that made her relize it was her he loved and not Kikio.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite lovely, and not the many cliches. kudos!!
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 06:30 EDT
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I really like this story. It would really benifit from a beta, but the plot's good enough that I love it anyway.
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Title: LandraBlaze
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was your first?!? I loved it, it was much better than what I usually find. Congrats- you rock.
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Title: Inudaughter
Reviewed By: inudaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 09:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the tale. I was very pleased to see how you collected together all the positive, negative, and interesting things which could happen and wove a tale. It demonstrates a devotion to imagination. But most of all, I find the story a compelling read because of the spider demoness. She is an original character yes, but she was well crafted and the greatest jewel of the story. In fact, if she played a greater role, I would have given a higher rating. As a character, the demon seamstress possessed the spark of life and left me curious as to her history, motivations, and what could be achieved with such a person in the writer's tool box.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 18:16 EDT
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Well I read the entire thing in pretty much one shot. It was a decent enough distraction but I have a few words of comment. First, your spelling and grammer are atrocious. Seriously. You need to get a beta or a spell checker or something because it's really distracting and takes away from how good the plot is. Secondly, while I like that you included Shippo in your story the fact that he's wimpering or crying in almost every scene gets a tad predictable and irritating after the first couple chapters. He's a pretty happy go lucky kit so writing him as sappy all the time didn't really sit well with me. Lastly, I really think you could've made Kagome a stronger character. She comes off as being pretty weak and wimpy which isn't how she is in the series/manga at all. She's pretty strong willed and in scenes like the wannabe-rape with Mantero (sp?) she definitely could have put up more of a fight. With those criticisms out of the way, I want to congratulate you on finishing this. I know from experience how hard it is to actually get a story done and judging by the incredible number of reviews you've received you did a good job. Perhaps now that four years have passed since you last updated this fic you may find reason to go back and fix those minor errors? Cheers.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You did very good on this story. I cryed more then I want to admit.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know u wrote this story like 4 yrs ago but i just wanted to let u know that i LOVED it!!!!! ok now on to the rest of the series! : )
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