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Reviewed By: Iron Reaper On: May 04, 2010 16:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapters. i went on vacation for a month with family and come back to find not one but two wonderful chapters! I hope your father is doing better and that you feel well too. Please continue writing when possible. Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 02:04 PDT
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Poor Inu, he's finally come to the realization that his body is wonky (technically speaking) and that it doesn't look like he's going to live much longer. I do hope Sess figures out what's wrong he's been doing well so far. Also Sesshy was a horrible child who should have been spanked daily.
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: April 12, 2010 18:36 PDT
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wow. how long has it been since i found this fic. once again you made me cry...which is a good thing. glad to know your back.
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Reviewed By: Lyn On: April 08, 2010 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agghhhh, I just read this whole story in one sitting - I abandoned my homework, it was just too amazing! I never thought I'd enjoy an InuYasha fic ever again but boy you proved me Wrong. Much encouragement to you, dear, and I hope all turns out well in your family. Did I mention how much I loved this?? Well I loved it.
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Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: March 13, 2010 10:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Have I said how much I LOVE your writing? It was so epic, dramatic, tragic and any other drama term one could come up with for this chapter. Thank you for providing us with this story about the past. I felt so sorry for Inu-Toga. To die from a broken heart is almost like a death of both the body and spirit. The fact that even while dead, Arne was still able to cause damage between her son and mate made me really hate her. It was also really interesting to see Diagon in a different light. I want to know what Arne stole from him. This history lesson was a great story!!! I hope things are as well as they can be with you and your family. No matter how long it takes, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter. I'm still trying to figure out what's going on with Inuyasha!!! Is his body going through a transformation to make him a full demon or something else completely. I can't figure it out, but I'm excited to read about what it could be and to see how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru grow closer as brothers and mates!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2010 20:43 PST
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Regardless of what you may think this was a great chapter, it gives us, InuYasha & Sess lots to think about! As much as we all want InuYasha to get better (and we all want him nice and strong so he and molesting Sess can have some fun), we are in no rush, take your time, we will all be here for you! Thanks so much for this great story!
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Reviewed By: Winter235 On: March 06, 2010 16:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maxx! I'm so sorry to hear about your father, my hopes for the best with you and your family, but I was extremely excited to see an update. I love this fic, and I know it's hard to be creative when life interferes. Keep writing, we'll keep reading. Hope and good health to you and yours!
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Reviewed By: K.Mcintyre On: March 04, 2010 13:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a nice tribute to fathers that you did and it was a really great look on the background from where the Inus got there real start. I hope your old man is doing ok and that you continue witing well into the future. Take care.
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Title: after a long worth wait
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: March 04, 2010 12:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After we patiently waiting for your fic, it is worth it. we knew that you never abandon it even though in a bad situation whether is in a worst or small. hows live going? hope for your family best health certainly improve by the way of your writing now. no, it is beyond improving. more than marvelous. the most longest fic i've ever read that it take whole nights until sunrise but we are mostly gratefully handle your fic. your chapter is thoroughly epic. Congratulations. we will waiting for your next, wanna know what happen to the brothers when they reach home.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: March 04, 2010 00:06 PST
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at first when you put up this chapter i was thinking your father must be doing alright but after reading the author note at the end. i hope he is doing better and getting better. anyway, this was quite a sad story and i really don't see anything wrong with it. you have given out a lot of good information about why daigo is in the service of the inus. although i wonder what it was their grandmother kept hidden from daigo to keep him there. but it was a sad ending for their grandfather. it must have hurt like a wound to the heart to believe that your only child hates the ground you walk on. it was such a sad ending and then not have history mention anything about all the good you did. it's just not right. but anyway, hopefully when you check the reviews on this chapter your father will be doing well.
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Reviewed By: dashllee14 On: March 03, 2010 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
words cannot describe how much i love this story besides the words......i love this story, and i pray that ur father makes it, i really do hope he does.
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Title: kale
Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it was a looonngg chapter, but it was very interesting. Inuyasha fanfiction usually doesn't delve into his father's history. Which it should. That's thousands of years of workable material right there. And if you want to know how Sesshomaru became who he is you have to know who their father was. Thanks for the update. I look for to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 15:39 PST
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Daaaauuuum! That was one long-ass chapter. I hope you didn't burn yourself out. It could have been chopped up into two or three shorter chapters. I loved it though. The stories were very captivating and I almost cried when Inu-Toga died. *sniffle* Especially because of the reason given. Arne's death was truly horrifying. The picture Daigon painted of her, as a person, was quite ugly. Inu-Taisho's revenge was quite brutal. I'm confused about how to feel because I want to cheer for him, but at the same time, killing the whole family instead of the only rat who was responsible, doesn't seem justifiable. Although, with current circumstances, I wish he had killed the kid too. Now it's haunting Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I just have to wonder if Daigon had a point to make to Inuyasha. Perhaps, somewhere in his mind, Inuyasha has given up and is ready to die, but maybe something is fighting to keep him alive. I'm very intrigued by his new symptoms. You're really torturing him. I don't think I'm being that bad to Sesshoumaru in Centennial Hunger. LOL His symptoms are mild compared to Inuyasha's...plus, he always has a boner. LOL Poor Inuyasha, I'd like to give him a long scratch behind the ears. I'd hate to be Sesshoumaru. There's really nothing he can do to help Inu. Ugh, I do not look forward to Inuyasha being around Kagome again. *shudders* It's time for me to go back and read this again! ^_^ I'm writing shorter chapters now because the long ones were burning me out. The cookie of making my readers happy was taking too long to bake and I didn't get near as much satisfaction out of it. :-( Well, I'll definitely be re-reading the story! Awesome, awesome chapter. You really out-did yourself. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 13:38 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Welcome back and awsome long chapter. Of course now my neck hurts for sitting and staring at the screen for two hours LOL. The heaviness of the dialogue was hardly noticeable since it was more like reading a story that was being narrated by the teller. Either way a vey enjoyable chapter, if a tad morbid. Hope the wait for the next one isn't as long.
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Reviewed By: Toni (anf600) On: March 03, 2010 12:58 PST
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awesome chapter! I started to cry again... sounds like Inuyasha takes after his daddy quite a bit!
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