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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 16:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff! Thanks for sharing. I particularly enjoyed the interaction between Sesshomaru and Coda. I just love a good boo-hiss villain. War it is! Heheh... Though the scenes between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were fantastic too, so hot and sexy. Inuyasha being so soft in the room when Sesshomaru was dressing him was so sweet... Can't wait for more!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 04:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I've been hanging out to see how Inu-puppy would go with the meeting thing and he did really well, though I must say I'm really beginning to dislike Coda. Sesshoumaru should have gutted him. Any way, can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Cliffhanger
Reviewed By: JessiV On: May 10, 2009 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! You're creativity never fails to impress and leave a reader grasping for more. I look forward to how the brothers will endure the future with a war on the horizon. Or how his friends and son will react. Keep up the good work. This is a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: May 10, 2009 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW NOW I AM AS OF LOSS OF WORDS............I DONT THINK I USED THAT RIGHT BUT DAME. DUDE UR STORIES JUST KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER. OK LET ME SECTION THIS OFF. THE BEGINNING PART WAS FUNNY AS HELL. THE WAY INUYASHA WAS ACTING WHEN HE WAS WRESTLING SESSHOMARU HAD ME CRACKIN UP, AND THEN INUS DEMAN LIKE MESSED IT ALL UP WAS FUNNY AS HELL. THEN THE BATHROOM PART WAS FUNNY AND CUTE(FUNNY CUZ INUYASHA WAS PARINOD, CUTE CUZ HE WAS TRYING 2 SEDUSE SESSHOMARU AND DONT EVEN NO IT.)OK NOW THE END PISSED ME OFF CUZ DUDE WAS FLAT OUT SAYIN "MAN LET THEM KILL YO BROTHER AND SAVE URSELF" SOME FRIEND LOL. THE VERY END GOT ME EXCITED AND WANTING TO READ MORE OF UR STORY, CUZ THERES NOTHING MORE THAT I LOVE THEN IS A GOOD FIGHT SCENE AND THEN YAOI!!!!! BUT OF CORUSE I EXCEPECT THERE 2 B DRAMA IN BETTWEN THERE.=D ALL AND ALL THIS CHAPTER IS AN 501/10 TEEHEE XP
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Reviewed By: Greenhorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!!! You already know how excited I was for this to be published and you definitely didn't disappoint!! I got chills when Sesshoumaru pondered showing InuYasha his unrestrained side.... epic foreshadowing perhaps? Certainly would be interesting.... You know what needs to go down at the next meeting? Inu-Youki should just take control and put their asses in their places!!! Especially that damn rat!! DOMINATION MUST BE SECURED!!! And if Sesshoumaru should get a little uppity.... well you know how to handle that.... ^_^
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Title: Isis191
Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great chapter. I just love this story. It just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I EAGERLY await your next offering. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: kaggy4ever On: May 09, 2009 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww, i waited soo long for this and there was no lemon, not even lime. and now, the plot had gotten thicker and every thing seems soo serious.
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Reviewed By: Lina03 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I am glad things are becoming clearer, though I really hope it does not take a war...also, what if Inuyasha gets sick? His heart again perhaps, or who knows with his body fighting itself like it has, he might end up in a coma or something. Anyways, thanks for updating and it was a wonderful chapter, I specially liked their little tussle, it was kind of cute ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 10:02 PDT
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Yes! Kick the rat's ass and the betrayer's ass. How could Coda talk that way about Inu no Taisho's youngest son. He's no friend of Sesshoumaru's. I say the guys should pack up and leave, send someone ahead to let the troops know to prepare for war. With Inuyasha's condition, it's a sucky time for it to happen, but it'll give his youki something to do. That was a great chapter. The play wrestling was a bit surprising. I wasn't expecting Inuyasha to treat Sesshoumaru like a real sibling. Guess he'd been cooped up way too long. Poor guy is so confused. I felt sorry for him while Sesshoumaru was dressing him. That was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what you have planned next! Inuyasha had a good day without incident and I'm hoping it lasts a little while longer. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: 0animerocks0 On: May 04, 2009 21:02 PDT
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goddamn, i'd never realized this until you pointed this out. shit! we're all being brainwashed!! lol. cool beginning.
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoyed the story so far. I think you need to work on your grammar and sentence structure a little. So sections were a little hard to tell who's POV it was from. Overall, I love his story, I'm on the edge of my seat as far as what's up with InuYasha. I really hope he gets over his issues with the whole brother/male on male sex/mating.
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 07:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, especially where Inuyasha finally gets that damn rosary off. Kagome is such a spoiled, demanding little brat who 'sits' our poor hanyou when he either says something she doesn't like or when things don't go her way. He's a hanyou, not a household dog. I so cannot wait for the latest chapter. Love it. Love it a lot. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for such a great story, but please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!
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Title: Truly Amazing Work!!!
Reviewed By: Greenhorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the title says, This story is truly amazing!! I've been following the story for a LONG time... heh I still remember crying for Inuyasha when during Sesshomaru's journey through his otouto's past... I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter (when you update I skip out on homework.... this story is top priority!!) Keep up the good work man, you really are good at what you do!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 14:07 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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