| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved the new chapter and i feel sorry for inu-chan i mean poor him but i felt bad when he told rin he hated her.....and it looks like sess is starting to see that it's not going to be easy to get inu-chan to forgive him and he may be starting to understand how deeply scar inu-chan really is.......i just can't wait for the next chapter......PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap! poor inu. i was impressed on how sess handled a crazed hurt inuyasha. can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: wolfluv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 11:38 PDT
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You brought me to tears and snot bubbles eeewwww but you definately got your point across with Inu in the process of breaking down I totally felt for him I was totally impressed with the way you had Sess and his inner demon asses the situation and Inu's words and actions towards him and Rin. I really enjoyed the fact that Rin being a child didn't hinder Inu's feelings or aggression he felt towards her and the way he explained this to her I don't think anyone else could have pulled that off truly and if you get any crap over that then they don't understand great writing when they read it. You are an outstanding writer!!! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AMAZING STORY WITH US AND THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!! I AM A TRUE FAN OF THIS STORY!
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Title: God
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 11:19 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you amaze me.when I got an email update on the story, I almost fell out of my chair! I am always looking forward to reading your new chapters^^ Something about this story just makes it seem so real, even if it has "fictional" characters and what-not. It really hits home, and I hope everybody will have a chance to read this wonderfully written story. Loves ya much hun, keep writing and never change. =)
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Reviewed By: TwistedHilarity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 10:21 PDT
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ha ha! FInally got to give a review here! woot! I'm so glad you got the second half done so quickly, yeaaa. Oh, poor, poor Inuyasha. Just makes me wanna cuddle him and make it all better. Which is always so hard in a story like this, 'cause it's not like it'll ever really Be better. Those scars are still gonna be there, and I'm glad you're taking a long time dealing with them (I think I said that before). Aside from the pain, Inuyasha and sessh are such stubborn bastards, LOL. Gonna take a while, yes? yea, more story!
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Title: YOU, YOU S.O.G!!!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: June 26, 2008 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously you...... Oh god you really serious.... I dont.... I dont know.... Oh god my nose snobsss... Okay thats it. That was ENTIRELY, FREAKINGLY GOD-HEAVEN-KNOWS-WHAT EMOTIONAL!!!!!!!!!!!! 1000,000 POINTS TO YOU!!!!!! THE FIRST FICTION PART I'VE EVER READ!!!!! GET YOUR ASS PUT A NICE REST AND UPDATE YOUR REMARKABLE IDEA!!! WE WILL WAITING!!!! may the rain pours upon you.
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Lina03 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was sad reading this chapter, it was so emotional, though in a different way than before....and then I get to the end I can't stop laughing! It's a wonderful ending after so much angst, I can't wait and see how the trip goes. Now that Sesshoumaru is aware of what's up with his lil bro it should make things even more interesting. Good chapter and Thank you for updating! ^_^ P.S. So who is in charge of Rin? If Diagon is going with them, then who is looking after her?
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 07:20 PDT
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Oh no! I just realized! The market had been re-organized! There's almost no way that Sesshoumaru will find what it was that Inuyasha wanted...unless he would go to all the trouble of having the whole damn thing shifted back to exactly how it was before. Damn. You sure aren't making it easy.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 06:24 PDT
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OMG! Was that ever an eye opener! Inuyasha's growth really is stunted. Wow, Sesshoumaru seems to be taking responsibility for what he's done and is taking the blows for it, literally. Got to give him kudo's for that. I had tears in my eyes a good deal through the chapter. You made Inuyasha's pain so clear to see. I'm starting to wonder how much of his reaction is due to this otherworldly effect of his home. He just threw everything out there at Sesshoumaru's feet. Maybe he was hoping that Sesshoumaru would give him a reason for forgiving Sesshoumaru. He is definitely cracking. I can see how he would hate Rin, but outright telling her like that was a shocker. Is he hurting that much, or is he going insane? Or both maybe? I had suspected that Sesshoumaru had no knowledge that Rin and Shippou had gotten into Inuyasha's things-without permission. If that's how it is, those two sure owe him an apology. I'm crossing my fingers that Sesshoumaru will find what it is that Inuyasha had wanted and bring it to him. It wouldn't make up for much, but it's the least he could do. Now you have me curious about what Sesshoumaru, Daigon and Retsu are up to. If Daigon is going along with it, it must be a good plan. It's good that Daigon is helping. Sesshoumaru sure has his work cut out for him. You're doing so great with the psychology and aren't rushing things. I like that. It's so sad, seeing Inuyasha act like a wounded animal. He reminds me of a child, worrying that something offered has a high price, like being beaten or poisoned. Or will be snatched away as soon as he reaches for it. It is sad. The worst part is that there are children out there that really do have those experiences, who are very much afraid of every shadow, afraid that someone will lash out. And the worst one is hoping that something good will happen and have that hope crushed. Now I'm going to cry again. [sniffle] BTW, the one humorous thing was Sesshoumaru not bothering with his appearance. Awesome chapter. I'll be looking forward to the next. ^_^ Snow
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Title: update!!!!!
Reviewed By: Momodocuk On: June 23, 2008 23:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: God
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit that was awesome! XD keep going!!!!!!! Btw, i just wanted you to know that this is my #1 favorite story that i have ever read. ever.i always look for the updates! so keep going!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: Annalist On: June 11, 2008 22:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's fantastic! I want more chapter to come soon!! Please write more!! continue your chapter!!! I want to know what happen next!!
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! bravo! ahem ok i'm done. the fight between inuyasha and imalia was awesome! I love the detail is which you wrote it. the scene where inuyasha sees the toys that were meant to be his had my heart breaking for him! sobs poor inu! lol i didn't mean i was expecting a chappie every week, although i wouldn't object to it. lol i understand that writing isn't an easy thing, cause i can't even write a single story! lol keep up the great work! huggles
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Reviewed By: Yashas_Sis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok.... um. I know it's like 21 chps. into it an all but I just wanted to put my small voice into the computer saying how much ur story rocks and other such praises. I've plowed through all of it in 2 days WOOHOO!! ^^ From reading some of the other reviews I feel my appreciation in the fic is not alone an they expressed it often times better than I could but I'm going to try: "Ahem" well there isn't really a word that describes how kickass ur story is... well... i guess kickass does the job, huh? anyway that being said I love the story. It's my first...wait... second yaoi I have ever read and actually enjoyed reading. It's not just about the sex... it has substance behind it and all around is kickass and I LOVE IT'S KICKASSNESS!! ^^ But I said that already. Just got my account here in this vast fiction-lover's paradise and I wanted your story to be the first I review on. Thanks for thinking to make such a cool alteration of Inuyasha and "sniff" I'm really glad sumone showed it to me. But I'm done wasting your time with my long (and most likely annoying) comment. Looking forward to when you update whether next month or next year (hopefully not the later.) ~Yasha's Sis
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 03:40 PDT
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poor inu, never thinks he might be the only one for Sess, but then he is also right, he isnt the only one for Sess. there's the kingdom, and appearances, and Rin. Rin, a human. must gall inuyasha a lot, and you've shown that. when does inu get to be happy? i have this interest in inu's happiness so i hope you have some in store for me..... *on a personal note thanks for updating. have been away too
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