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Title: U + Internet = One Happy Reader
Reviewed By: StarsLikeMillions On: April 30, 2008 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! This is definately one of the more enjoyable fanfictions I've read in my time, and believe me, I've read thousands. The plot is great, and the pairing is my current favourite, which is a definate plus. I also like that the chapters are long; short chapters are the bane of my fanfiction existance. XD I have just one suggestion: improve some of the grammar and spelling. There's just a couple mistakes, but, I feel that corrections would be awesome. Oh yeah, and a major one is in the title. 'It's My Life' would be a lot better than 'Its my life', you know? You should get a beta! XD Thankyou for posting this fic (I also found the ff.net posting (XD)), and please, please update soon. Please. I can't wait to see what'll happen next! Yaoi =
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: ashlan On: April 18, 2008 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only fic I do truly wanted to read until the end. This is also a fic that will have to reach an ending. The most entertaining and interesting fic, include the comfort scene and love. Not really I'd hope it would be sappy, but hey, you the author, you decide. But please continue this fic, I just couldn't wait to read the next episode.
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Title: God
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodnes....you are sooooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!! *pounces you* Seriously! Reading this made my day soooooooooooooo much better!
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Title: Chapt. 19
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol…’to air or not to air’…coupled with…’do I want to do that ‘cause that means I have to clean up, AGAIN’ rationalizing, I just about laughed myself off my chair! Ah, just one of the many things that scream out the very essence of maleness in this chapter!! Nice! But I think that I will imagine that Inuyasha’s got a type of towel that is a magical handy-wipe. He is going to be eating pretty soon after all and just rubbing on a regular towel won’t get rid of the evidence that he has been cruising the love tunnel to all those sensitive demon noses ;) Retsu out-did himself with the way he helped Inuyasha; he didn’t overwhelm him with choices. A fantastic cook. Will we get to see what goes on inside his kitchen? And Inuyasha gets to annoy Sesshoumaru with his positively enthusiastic praise for Retsu’s new drink. Take that brother!! Yup, you have to do what you can to annoy your siblings…an unwritten law I think, and Inuyasha does just that throughout the rest of the chapter…lol The subtleties in the designing of Kagome’s room are working great!! A devious idea imagined by the Inu Tashio and created I’m sure with the help of Diagon. It sounds just as grand as everyone else’s room, but it’s had some special ‘care’ put into it. Love it! So far she has lasted a whole night in a room made to drive out a youkai; how many more hours will she last? She’s really struggling to try to be nice but the worlds worst PMS takes over instead. The breakfast moment allowed Inu’s youkai to point out some pointers out to his former pack members that none of them would have let him do in his normal frame of being. And we know for sure that the wolf at the door (nice touch with the word image!), i.e. Kouga, isn’t there waiting for Kagome when she does leave. He’s got other plans!! The whole scene with Diagon was incredible! And poor Inuyasha gets answers â€" all helpful but the cure for the mate mark is worse than the bite itself. Not what he was hoping for! His youkai seems to be thrilled with all the hotties in the castle. Will he take Inuyasha on some test runs? Sess’s youkai is upset at the very thought it might happen. Makes me laugh at the many ways Sess could go crazy trying to contain and keep his little brothers love starved youkai focused just on him. What steps would he take? As if he didn't have enough on his plate just trying to run his empire. The contrast between the way the brothers were raised really shows. Sess still can’t understand why Inu won’t trust him. Inuyasha won’t trust him just because Sess said he could and should. You could just feel the pain in the roller coaster of emotions that they are both going through. Will Diagon take matters into his own hands and ‘help’ the brothers by spreading chemical trails on the wind and into their food via a suddenly needed diet change? Oh, that could be interesting...lol Looking forward to the castle intrigues and raging hormones!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: Make more chapters!!! On: April 10, 2008 17:34 PDT
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your story is really good, and I would love to read more of it when you update it.....I wonder will Inuyasha and Kagome ever get along.....please hurry and is their ever going to be a married in your fanfic.....HURRY I BET 20 IS going to be good.
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Title: Am please soon!
Reviewed By: UPDATE!!! On: March 29, 2008 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON, VERY SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 21:39 PDT
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this is a great story! is inuyasha going to have poison claws? i hope you update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so happy that you updated. this chapter was so freaken awsome keep up the good work and i think i will read the whole thing once or twicethrought then ask you to update. hehehe. love thanks
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Reviewed By: The Reaper On: March 19, 2008 00:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! There are so many things about this story I like I can't even count! There are a few things I've been wondering about though. Inuyasha has been growing you say but I'm wondering on how much. Sesshoumaru was about a foot taller to begin with so how much taller is he now? Also I noticed you said Daigon isn't allowed to refer to himself as himself, but he says "my Lord" isn't "my" refering to himself? I suppose I'm nitt-picking at this point but in all honesty that's all I've seen wong in all these chapters. If you have read all of this I thank you for your time and please continue writing whenever possible. Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 15:20 PDT
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i love your mega chapters. what most authors would post in ten chapters, you give us all in one. diagon is the most wonderful character. i love the way he thinks. he cand really get to the heart of a problem. i think your characterization of miroku and sango were so on target. thank you for taking the time to post such a long juicy chapter.
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know how you have a show on tv that only airs once a week and you're so hooked you watch the clock till the last second? yeah, your story is sooo like that! only kind worse!! lol this is the best chapter in the story yet!! i am absolutely in love with daigon!! hehe cant wait for the next chapter! yay!
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: March 09, 2008 16:12 PDT
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You're back! missed ya! I wuz getting kinda worried back there. Oh and dude... that was soo totally worth it. I don't need to tell you that we want more. Hehe the plot thickens. Anyway best of luck to ya Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: UPDATE MAN!!! On: March 08, 2008 20:22 PST
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Ohmygod, if Sesshomaru prefers men....does Inuyasha tooo?! Come on...you are such a good writer tell us more about his orientation....MORE INUYSHA PLEASE!!!!!! With his friends will be great too!
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 03:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!!!! i LOVE your latest chapter it was so worth the wait....i can't believe how bitchy kagome is but then again if you ask me she's always like that anyway....i'm happy that inu-chan my finally get answers to what's going on with him......this is only a guess but don't tell me that inu-chan is starting to develop his own poison that's to kool....anyway i feel like this is starting to run on so i'll end it with this.........PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Isis191 On: March 05, 2008 15:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for such a great chapter. I just love your story. You have a wonderful gift of words, thank-you for sharing. I eagerly await your next up-date
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