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Title: chapter 18
Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 20:13 PST
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wow, what a chapter. all in one night, and the next morning? it took me longer than that to read it. i loved it. everything you included seemed vital to the story, and it didn't feel as if you left anything out. how do you always know when enough is just right? have i told you lately that i love this story? and i love your vision and style of telling it. i still think that it will take a catastrophic event for inuyasha to accept sesshoumaru. but however you plan to work it out, i will wait to see what you do. this chapter was such a lovely gift. thank you for that. i enjoyed every word of it.
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Title: Ishellmay
Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 01:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful! a few things though, Spelling... Youkai, Hanyou. Also, watch your punctuation; sometimes it gets difficult to read. Well, thats all, for corrections that is, well other than make sure you finish you thoughts. Glossary: ne? - right? nani - why nande - similar to "what the" haori - inuyasha's top fundoshi - traditional Japanese underwear Hakama - Inuyasha's pants Good job. I'll proof if you want. always willing to lend a helping hand.
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Reviewed By: McKay On: January 22, 2008 08:32 PST
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Oh my god, I love this chapter especially the ending, it seems as if the Inu brothers are getting closer. Well I would not expect nothing less from a great author like yourself, and I wish that you do update very, very soon!!!!
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Title: last chapter
Reviewed By: gen50not logged in On: January 21, 2008 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a long chapter, and one truly enjoined... i like the dynamics of the characters and sess--- becoming slightly possessive... and inu, well, he's acting out of sorts, too and very intriguing
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo! I love is chapter! worth the wait! oh and the tail thing is really growing on me now!! great job!
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Title: A Perfection created by a god
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my holy jesus. yea, thats right. Oh my holy jesus. Though just saying that gives this chapter (alone) no justice. Top notch, exquisitely perfect, entirely delicious. Yummy. Though I expect no less from someone who pours their time into creation. I expected nothing, and received bliss. I thank you for your hard work. Every word typed was as it was supposed to sound, and trust me, it rings. Amazing detail. Doors of unnatural beauty, and filled with love. I have never read anything like it, and I read a lot. Beautifully crafted.
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Title: Its my life
Reviewed By: wolfluv13 On: January 20, 2008 00:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY..... I DON'T KNOW... This is the best xmas gift I think I have ever gotten!!!! THANK YOU!!! I about cried when I got the update notice for this fic! So of course I had to re-read it again wouldn't be the first time every time you add a new chapter I just love to read it from start to the newest chapter that part of the reason it takes me a little while you send you a review. I STILL LOVE THE INNER MONOLOG OF THE INU BOYS!!!!THAT IS STILL ONE OF THE BEST PARTS OF THIS FIC!!! I really look forward to the next chapter I am sooooooo happy that Sess listened to his demon side and kissed that boy hell who wouldn't??? The pace you have set is perfect and its a good thing i re-read the story because I wouldnt' have remembered why their hearts get a tug.... the first mating rite. Poor Inu and his demon just casually taking over every now and then... hehe heee between soft tails and blue lips damn! Nice job on the length of the chapters too! They are worth the wait that is for sure! THANK YOU AGAIN!!!
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 02:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!! i love the new chapter i can't wait to read what happens next i mean....i love how sess yuki is acting up and i love the way inu-chan is satrting to want to trust sess again it's funny watching him try to fight it and the way you detailed the part about his room made me feel like i was there or looking at a picture. inu-chan being outta control of his body is so much fun to read and i hope kagome gets slap or worst in the next chapter i mean she is being such a BITCH.....anyway great chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kiki441 On: January 18, 2008 22:13 PST
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i just love this chapter. i especially loved it when sesshomaru told the guard to put kagome in 'the room.' i take it this room isn't as nice as the others. oh well, i guess the saying is true you reap what you sow. and kagome is going to start reaping as soon as she sees her room. i can just imagine how angry she is going to get when she find out that sango's and miroku's rooms were much nicer than hers. and the description you gave of inuyasha's room was beautiful. i wish i had a room like that. and the painting of the two inu brothers playing that was such a sweet description of how inutaisho saw his sons. and the explanation sesshomaru gave inuyasha about why he often treated him that way was very well thought out. i often wondered that the transition of power could not have been an easy one for sesshomaru. and the fact tht he was a just a teenager when he took over would explain why he was always so angry whenever he saw inuyasha. although like he said it does not excuse him for all the pain he causedd his younger brother. will you explain whatelse it is that komar does for sesshomaru? i was so hoping that you would let daigon talk to inuyasha that night because i so want to know what is going on with him. is he going into heat? or is he growing because the human blood in him is dying out and he is becoming full demon? and i just love inuyasha's and sesshomaru's lecherous youkis. i can't wait until you update. i am dying to see what is going to happen at breakfast. and i definitedly want to know what daigon is going to tell inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: January 18, 2008 21:49 PST
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Wow this was long, but the review will be short, cause it's almost 1 am. Ack! Stayed up way too late, but I wanted to see where this was going. Sesshy is a little more likable, but still Inuyasha suffered so much, poor puppy.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: January 17, 2008 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to have to learn to read faster or you're going to have to write smaller chapters. :) That was fantastic. As late Christmas presents go that was the best. I did like what you did with Atrius. Oooo... You're going to have to commission somebody to draw him just for me. *hint* *hint* And another OC. I liked him. He was naughty. Not to gloss over all the other wonderful things in this chapter but the humour was really shining through on this one. I laughed out loud quite a few times. I just loved the stuff - to use a technical term - with Sessh and Daddy. Oooo... And the room for people Daddy didn't like. *chuckles* The interaction between Sango and Miroku was so cute. Hmm... Not like you to end a chapter with a bit of fluff. It was... mmm... for lack of a better word. Thank you MMC I loved my present. *hugs* Come visit me if you like. I'd love to hear your opinion of Second Time Around http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/midnightwhispers/
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Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 18:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this fanf fic. I think you are doing a wonderfull job, and cant wait until you update again.
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: January 17, 2008 18:21 PST
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Alright!! I've been waiting for you and I gotta say that this is one pleased puppy. Were ready when you are . Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was an absolutely wonderful chapter! I couldn't stop reading and it is now two a.m. in the morning. Too tired to read fast. Squeeee! Got to see Daigon. Ooooh, so things may not be as they seem. I love background plotting and surprises. You are definitely keeping my attention. I need to go back and re-read the story so that I can assimilate Sesshoumaru's behavior with what has happened in the rest of the story. Gah! I haven't been able to write for so long that the same thing will happen. I love this story so much that I don't mind reading it over and over and...eh, you get the picture. Even though Inuyasha has every reason to act the way he does, I do feel a bit sad for Sesshoumaru. However, it is only right that he has to work for Inuyasha's trust. You did so much with Sesshoumaru's background. I'm sure that the alcohol allowed him to loosen up a bit more. You've made his background more three dimensional than I've ever seen. The story he told was so detailed and poignant. Awesome job! I think I'm getting jealous. LOL Your portrayal of Inuyasha's reaction to the dinner was wonderful. I can see how he would be a bit lost. Retsu is great! It is so difficult for me to enjoy original characters, but you give them such strong personalities that it is easy to accept them. Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's soft moments were wonderful. Let's not forget the youki's. Heheh, they remind me a bit of my naughty 'Fluffy' in Centennial Hunger. Playing with them is so much fun! The room! That was awesome! I could picture it! Poor Inuyasha, the knowledge that came with the room had to really hurt. Oooooh! Imalia really pissed me off. Inuyasha's reactions to people around him was soooo sexy. Yummies. Then the group has to come in. I'm sure that there will be problems, and that sucks for the boys. Hah! That jerk guard and Jaken got theirs! I would have executed the snotty guard that called Sesshoumaru a fool. Grrrrr! I'm too tired to comment on all the things that deserve it. However, that kiss was a perfect ending to the chapter. Please don't be offended that I have not commented on all the wonderful detail. It is obvious that you put a lot of work into this chapter. I'll definitely be re-reading this wonderful story! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: diobeckstead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 20:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderfully fun fiction to read! Thank you very much for sharing. You have a marvelous grasp of word economy and a great storyteller sense that makes reading quite enjoyable. I am looking forward to reading more whenever you update. ~sands
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