| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 01:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was really about shippo, and inu. i like this chapter because it showed inuyasha how he was, how he felt, and how he didnt want to be. i thought you might go back to sess, but apparently not, maybe next chapter??
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 01:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
am also gen50-inlj. like sesshoumaru's youki, i rather enjoyed sess's discomfiture.... *laughs* and so i'm moving on to the next chapter right away!
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 01:25 PDT
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i don't know why you did not like this chapter. i thought it was very sweet the way how inuyasha and shippo made up. and it just broke my heart when shippo was calling out for inuyasha. even now it makes my eyes water. and then when inuyasha answered him and saved him from the panther demon. you can't tell me that that did not make your heart filled ieth glee. well anyway, i like the chapter and i cannot wait until the next one.
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Reviewed By: 95454 On: May 09, 2007 03:53 PDT
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Loving it so far, the no sex was so funny i loved it,the see/inu rare sex was HOT.Update soon this is good.
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Reviewed By: Angelofdeath2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 15:04 PDT
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This is so good so far. So does this make Sesshomaru uke then?
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: May 01, 2007 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!! it was so awesome!!!! haha NO SEX 4 U !!!!!! Mwahahaha!! Go Sessy's yokai woooohhh!!! Sory the yaoi fangirl in me took over keep updating. I wanna see wat happens next.
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Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in forever!! I feel so guilty...I really liked the flashbacks. Sesshy was so mean to little Inu...Some of these parts were quite funny 200 years of not being able to get it up...terrible! I really love this story can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: ALL
Reviewed By: PinkyBunny On: May 01, 2007 00:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally hate Kagome in stories and that damn show. But back to this story I can say that I love it good job and the sex scene good good love it.And I think Miroko and Koga is a cute couple to and what better way to piss of Sango and Kagome to know that by hurting InuYasha they have help an odd couple out.PS**And to all my women out there that think yaoi is bad FUCKYOU I love it and yes I am a woman and I love to see two men FUCK as well as love as much as I love to see two women FUCK and love. that life and if you don't like it say out of it you damn fuck oh and this goes to you men out there to say the FUCK OUT.Oh sorry about that back to the story I love it but I seriously hate a undone story that set for to long, so write more so I can love it more.*****
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL damn Sesshomaru own youkai is cock blocking him lol. man the irony, I don't think I'll every get over that one. lol I was a bit confused at first but I got it. love the flash back it help us learn a little bit more about the two or should I say four with there youkai's involed. damn so Inuyasha and sesshomaru are in each others head, that's going to be fun to read I wonder how long before sessie goes crazy. so how long before another lemon for the rest of us perverts? lol cock block and in the middle of getting hot and steamy lol. man never getting over that got to have the funny.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 02:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey your new chapter ROCKED....i mean i think i just fell in love with this fic all over again....i mean i love that sess yuki promise to get him back and find the perfect way of doing so in making it so he couldn't mate.....i love sess yuki...and inu-chan's confusion over exactly what happened and how it happened....i can't wait to see what miroku reaction will be when inu-chan tells him what happened...in truth i what to see the reaction on that spoiled brats face( also known as kagome) when she finds out she will never have a chance with inuyasha again....PLEASE UPDATE SOON....I DON'T THIN I CAN WAIT...hehe
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: April 29, 2007 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really kickass new chapter. I loved it good. I can't believe Sesshomaru could be such a cold hearted prick. But atleast his youkai was able to teach him a lesson. No sex for bastards. hehehehe But what is inu doing with sessho's armor. Is he planning on keeping it. interesting. thanks so much for posting hope to see more soon. best wishes and good waves.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 14:00 PDT
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Heheh...so I wander how Inuyasha will react when he finds out he's mated to Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oH MY GOD YOU SO HAVE TO UP DATE SOON PLEASE.
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Title: lazy ass uke, buahahaha
Reviewed By: szaugg laughs On: April 28, 2007 01:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay.. a couple spots where Sesshoumaru's word choice seemed a little OOC. So sad with Sesshoumaru's memory of ditching Inuyasha, and interesting about his father. The different jumps from flashback to present were a little distracting, but at the same time I think they worked okay. The youkai once Sesshoumaru discovers what happened...OMFG, laughed my ass off. "you can be a complete lazy ass and still have the time of your life." Gawd, I almost peed myself on that one. And from your comment, I'm assuming someone didn't understand what the voice was, or why it wasn't called Inu's youkai? PErsonally, I thought that was pretty clear that WE know what he is, but that INUYASHA did not, so I was perfectly fine having him called just a voice. Anyway, I did enjoy that chapter, and loved being left with a laugh at the end. Oh, one thought for future edit purposes, eensy weensy detail. If I remember my anthropology right, one of the most used substances for needles in primitive cultures was bone, because it broke so much less easily than wood. So...figured I'd mention since you went through the trouble of adding that detail in with the sewing. Which I quite liked, actually. gave that short, small bit of history that helps round it out without boring us. Again, looking forward to more. Oh, I read your note there on updating, LOL! Dang...now I have to update again too!
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:45 PDT
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i really like sesshomaru's youki. it is so funny at times. especailly when his youki wouldn't let him have his way with that female inu. i guess he should have heaved his youki's threat when he said he would make him pay for leaving inuyasha when he was child. anyway, why not send inuyasha to totosai. he might find myouga there since that's where the flea usually be hiding out? if myouga isn't there maybe totosai will be able tell him exactly what is going on with him and the rapid growth spurt he is going through. anyway, i do so enjoy this story and can't wait until the next update.
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