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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED U TO UPDATE!!! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T SO PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE!!??!!??!!??!
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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:55 PDT
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ROFLMAO!!!! i couldn't stop laughing when Sesshomaru's youkai started talking about inu's ass. that was sooooooooooo funny. u seriously ROCK!!!!! i can't wait to read the rest of the chaps that are up right now. plz update some more. thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:30 PDT
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ur story RULEZ. i hate it wen people think ur gay if u right a yaoi fic. so what?! i'm a girl and i'm bi. actually i would write a yuri fic if i had to. i just perfer writing yaoi. ne wayz. U ROCK!!!! plz continue writing!!!!????=)
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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 13:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is REALLY good so plz continue to update. also if a person had actually thought about what ur saying it does seem as if it's true. seriously. i actually think wat ur saying is inuyasha's point of view. nice job=)
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!that ROCKED......i mean the pairing should so be inu/sess....i hope 'the lady of the south' gets what coming to her....i hope inu and sess do it together i mean they need to just really beat the shit outta her....i just can't say how much i love this fic.......PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: szaugg On: April 08, 2007 01:30 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few more grammar errors on this one, but oh man, the angst! What a great 'she's only a child' line. ouch! Which means...please, write more! Gotta know what happens next!! szaugglaughs
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 11:46 PDT
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Wow, talk about angst. I actually had to wipe tears from my eyes, especially when he howled. That always gives me the sniffles. That means great writing when you can pull the reader into your head. I love how assertive that you have made Inuyasha. He does what he must knowing that it could break him. And it did. I wonder how long it will be before he can find some comfort. Can't wait to see what you have planned next. Will Inuyasha attack Sesshoumaru, even with Rin near? Oooh, so sexy. A mature Inuyasha. He needs some clothes soon or they will be too tight in all the wrong places. It will be interesting to see how you clothe him. Or not. *dirty mind at work here* A shirtless Inu is a sexy Inu. Your description of what is happening inside of him is awesome. I would like to know how tall he is in comparison to Miroku and Sesshoumaru since he is growing so fast. I'm glad that you are allowing Miroku to be his friend. I don't think that Miroku would have sucked Inu into the wind tunnel, not with the way that you are portraying him. What to think about Sesshoumaru? He's a horny bastard that needs to be put in his place. I don't know what it would take to get Inuyasha to forgive him. That's my opinion. Yup. Although Inu and Kouga have an understanding and have saved each other on more than one occasion in the manga and the series, I can understand what you did. Kouga did need to be put in place and I love the way you did it. Kagome shouldn't be sitting Inuyasha when Kouga comes around. That is humiliating. Even with the violence in that scene, you managed to sneak in some sensuality. Heheh, great job there. Also, I hope that southern bitch gets killed. Yup. A torturous death for putting Rin in danger. And she knows that if Sesshoumaru does it, Inuyasha will see it as an attack on his freedom to decide who he mates. She think that it will protect her from Sesshoumaru. Well, I guess we shall see, ne? You are writing this very well. However, as you get further into the story, spelling errors have increased. There were places where it took me a few moments and re-reading a sentence a couple of times before I understood what you were trying to say. I make more errors when I'm having fun and writing fast. You might want to check over your work a couple more times before posting. I know that it delays posting and I hate that just as much as anyone. But, you and all of your readers will be happier in the long run. Eh, I'm not trying to slap your hands with a ruler, just letting you know how it's going on the reader's end. ^_^ Love the story....Snow
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 10:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Maxx, your introspection here is awesome. Pointing out the reasons for his conclusions, the different situations that he finds himself in, makes a strong case for him. I loved that he had taken down a buck and was pissed that Kagome would deny him that. By the time I reached the end of the chapter, I was glad that he was determined to make a change. And then you left us with a mystery. I'm anxious to find out what is going on with his body. And I am taking guesses outside of mpreg. I just hope that you don't turn Kagome into an evil character. Well written! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 01:11 PDT
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i was beating my desk and punching a couple of my stuffed bears when i came to the end. i wanted so much to see him and sesshomaru duke it out. that is where inuyasha is going to fight sesshomaru, right? i mean that does bring up some questions. why is he taking care of a human that is not related to him but yet would turn his back on his own brother? i'm sure someone could come up with a reasonable explaination but for me that just won't cut it. you would take care of a stranger over your family. and then what he said after inuyasha broke through the barrier. that was so awful of him to say. but like they say, your misdeeds often return to bite you in the ass. and his certain is on his way to do just that if not worse i knew that witch was up to something. a hyena, huh. inu should have known never to trust a creature like that. oh well, live and learn. i am so excited. i can't wait until the next chapter. i hope it will be up soon because i want to see this battle. oh, is that witch gone or is she going to be watching the big fight. and will you go back to see what his supposed friends are doing? if so let it be the chapter after the next or after the that one because i do not want to miss the battle of century. so, update soon. okay. please.
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Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 02:44 PDT
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A sad, but great chapter! A loved the way Kouga got handled Poor Inu though Kagome can be such a bitch... I "m sad that Inuyasha got upset at Miroku I was hoping it would be an Inu/Miro fic... Oh well, Inu and Sesshy is a good couple also. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 11:25 PDT
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Kouga lived if he was smart he wouldn't have showed himself in the clearing. Selfish Kagome
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 10:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that ROCKED inu-chan finally put kagome in her place...and got the rosary off i cant wait to see what happens next i mean....i wonder what sess youki will make him do to comfort inu-chan...and wha kagome and the other will say about what they thinking is going on with inu-chan...and will the other stop being his friend becuase of what happened...i JUST CAN'T WIAIT....UPDATE soon PLEASE!!!! I LOVE THIS PAIRING
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Title: inu snaps
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 02:17 PDT
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.. and that's a surprise. but you handled it ok. it seems you are changing styles somehow. but whatever it is, i like it. for a sec there in the last chapter i thought you had changed pairing. silly me. huh? inu snapping. i thought that it would be possible, even for someone like inu - who i think - has patience a mile long (unlike sess)!
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Title: with kouga
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 02:02 PDT
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you arent going to change the pairing, are you? what's kouga for? a little demo on how strong inu really is? i had always thought inu stronger than kouga. really. which is why i enjoyed the stories where inu was seme to kouga. ah well. i missed this update... mm doesnt always tell me what's updated, hmmm. its short because i want to read the next chappie
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 00:47 PDT
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well i say keep leaning toward a sess/inu story. because this story is great. and poor inu. i felt my heart break when that stupid witch would not take the rosary off. i mean what does he have to do to prove to her that he does not need it on anymore. i mean he already runs around half of japan helping people she deems need help. guess she wants him to die as well. i guess the way how she just behaved will sort of make koga change his mind about wanting her. i mean if she was that mean about not removing the rosary from someone she claims to love. you can just imagine what she would do to koga. anyway, like i said you should let it be a sess/inu story because than you could have that demoness(i forgotten how you spelled her name. sorry.) snatch inuyasha up and take him to the kingdom and sesshomaru has to rescue him. i just love romantic stories like that. i know review too long so i will stop. just update soon.
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