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Title: please update
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: August 08, 2008 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoop dee doo da dey, whoop dee you be dead! Update update UPDATE!!! hei... or are your update are still in progress??? DONT LEAVE US LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jazzamarazz On: August 07, 2008 05:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG, this is BY FAR my fav Inu/Sess fanfic. Not only is it fantastically written (I tip my hat to you :P), but I love that you update with LONG chapters... A longer wait, but SO much more worth it. Just keep doing what you've done for 21 chapters now :D I absolutely love it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Divina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!! XD It's amazing!!! I can't wait until you update! ^^ Oh and thanks for telling me that it was posted here. I normally only go to this site for art but I think I'll make it a fanfic goto site as well. XD Oh and I really thank that after reading this story that I must make you fan art! I kinda want to draw one of your original characters...if it's ok with you.^^
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is truly exceptional. I must say, I have taken that position about the way Inu feels about Rin many times. Although one thing strikes me as odd. If it wasn't stated that the two youki in this story were different, I would assume that they were one in the same. I have only two problems with the whole thing. Your spelling and grammar are absolutely atrocious! Please, for the love of GOD! Have someone, maybe two, check that shit (no offense). And number two please pay attention to your present and past tenses(stay with one or the other, it simply dooesn't do to have you slipping both withing the same sentence) and the forms of your word... as in to, too, and two. Their, there, and they're. Learn them use them. Please!They are here to help you, not hurt you... don;t shy away from them because they love you. They really do, and you should love them too. Catch that? Too, not to, as in going, or two as in 2. But too, as in more. As I said before exellent work. Just don't let your spelling kick your ass. I will continue to look in on your story as it is in my favorites. Continue to dazzle me. ~Ishellmay~
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Title: God
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hun.=) how the story making coming along? I look forward to your fantastic update! This is by far one of my most favorite stories. Period. I can't imagine how long it takes to write those long chapters, but it never fails to please. So, I hope you are well and achieving other things in life, but please don't forget us!Hee hee =)
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Title: Chapt. 21
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Sess's day hasn't turned out too badly. He finally got the big picture and understands a lot more about Inuyasha and why he's hurting. I really enjoyed Inu's 'bedtime' story for Rin. He gets to tell his story from his view point. And he was so mean!! Totally out of character for him; part of your word picture that shows him falling apart. It's causing him to break down phsyically too. And for some strange reason, I keep thinking that Sess is acting like a mother hen (a really, really, deadly one...lol)in his thoughts the way he wants to take care of his brother and Rin. And he thinks Inu is a mini-me? You just know how Inu would react to being in charge of market decisions - he'd slove all the problems with his sword. Not a bad idea; I hate it when the local marts move things around too! And the crash course "Sex 101 for Hanyou's" scene was so funny!! I do love your humor and where you place it. Just about the time you're in absolute pain from what is happening to Inuyasha, you take us for a delightful side trip of laughter. Thanks! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Title: Short?
Reviewed By: Nanashi Eeyore On: July 06, 2008 08:09 PDT
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You call that a Short Chapter? LOL I got to agree though it was short but still long. But I am not one to complain I loved it and the story and I am looking forward to reading more of it. I did see some typing mistakes where the word was there just misspelled like "hwy" I think you get the picture but what a few little mistakes in a great story, other wise I LOVED IT!
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Title: Pure Brilliance
Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's amazing how a single chapter could almost make me cry more than once. Amazing job on all twenty-one chapters (I think that is how many there is). I can not wait until the next chapter is up. I'll be waiting. :D
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Reviewed By: The Reaper On: June 29, 2008 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spectacular. I truly enjoy your writing and one of my favorite things is the chapter lengths. This story has progresses far better than I could ever imagined myself. I thank you with all of being for this wonderful story as it is now unquestionably my favorite story Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. I always look forward to reading what you have written. I just wish other people would write as good as you. I can't wait for the next chapter. I cant wait to see what direction the story goes.
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Reviewed By: vampspicy On: June 28, 2008 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You done well explaining Inuyasha' true feeling's. It was really amazing! I enjoyed reading it very much. You made excellant points on each character's point of view. Good to see the stick is finally loosing from Sessy's backside. Maybe common sense, not pride and or stupidity will guide him further to become a real brother. I sure hope so. You did really well with this chapter over all.
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: June 27, 2008 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You brought Atrius back! Yay! I anticipate some fun times ahead. Ahem! Pun intended. Nice bedtime story by the way. :) You've been building up to that for quite a while, haven't you? So glad it's finally come to a head. Sorry! I'll stop doing that. Ooo... and the fight was beyond cool. :) I read these last two chapters within days of each other. It was quite a treat. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 07:12 PDT
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at least now sess knows. makes for a more interesting chapter next week
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 03:07 PDT
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thank you for the update, i just cried through the entire chapter. i hope to read more soon, i really want to know what's up with the blue stuff in inuyasha's hands
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Title: Thanks !!!
Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the up-date it was great !!!! I've said it before and I'll say it again I love your story !!! And I saw that you are going to be bring back Atrius !!! He is such a great sounding charater. I hope you have more of him in the future. Thanks again for such a wonderful story !!! I can hardly wait for your next chapter !!!!!
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