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| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] | | Pages (39): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to tell me when you are going to write the next chapter. There are just too many questions left unanswered. But I do have one. Does Sesshoumaru have to be the uke in this fic? I meanwhy on take turn so to speak. This would help Inuyasha trust him more and at the same time have someone to treat him wiht love and kindness that was only given to him as a child before his mother died. Right now he feels threaten because of Rin, so why not allow Sesshoumaru some more leeway into his mind to find out whats wrong. There is no way he can fix things with out some help. I understand that Inuyasha is a teen (which is why I can't see Sess being under him all the time) but there are signs that they give so that others will be able to help them.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 15:24 PDT
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I almost forgot! There are so many small things that I liked.."Well…go girl power…or something." Inuyasha muttered. That was awesome! So was Sesshoumaru's response. And, I loved the round about way that Meadi let Sesshoumaru know that he would like to have his help. It sure confused Inuyasha. I can see how it would. Good job. And, I forgot to say that I felt sorry for Inuyasha having to witness Tren and Alir getting 'unstuck'. LOL That was funny. Poor Alir. Sesshoumaru being stronger during the crescent moon was an interesting factoid as well. I could probably write a chapter of comments, but I'll leave it at this. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 15:07 PDT
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OMG! What a chapter! So many things happened in it. You could have spread it out over at least two or three chapters had you wanted. I love snuggly Sesshoumaru. That was too cute. And all the little quips at Inuyasha were funny. I was wondering if someone seeped some kind of gas into the chamber to make him act like that, or is it how he truly is when he isn't hating Inuyasha? Anyway, loved it. Man, Coda really pisses me off. Sesshoumaru thought he was a friend. I hope there is some kind of resolution to that problem. Maybe Coda sees some kind of danger that Sesshoumaru doesn't? I don't know. He's a mystery and I'm a curious dog. I hope he at least sees that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha were telling the truth. Even though Meadi needs Sesshoumaru's help, I still like him and hope Sesshoumaru helps him out. Considering how Coda is acting, he may need a new ally. I think the two should get together and talk. Yay, Enyon didn't get his way! Take that, bastardf! Hahahaha! Heh. Inuyasha's kitchen escapades were funny. Before I forget, when did Daigon get back? Maybe I missed a chapter. Atrius was hilarious. Don't fuck with the kitsune! Yes! It's about time he stood up for himself. Usually, fighting back wards off the bullies. That was just too awesome. What happened in Sesshoumaru's chambers was hilarious. It explained the person sneaking around to the rooms. I had thought Enyon was up to something. Glad that wasn't the case. Oh noes! What is happening to Inuyasha now! Maybe now that his weak human blood has taken over, his beast can come out to play finally? Maybe his demon blood can finally tame the human blood. That would be so wonderful. I hope so. Inuyasha's humanity really gets in the way sometimes. I'm sooooo excited! Eh, I did sorta skim the Alir and Tren lemon. Sorries, I'm an action whore. You sure delivered with this chapter! I'm dancing up and down in anticipation and excitement for the next chapter! ^_^ Thank you so much for all the fun! Now I feel even more guilty for not having gotten my own chapter out. :-( I'll see you next time around. ^_^ Have a great weekend!
| Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 14:52 PDT
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Ahhhh! Cliff hanger! So evil, anyways Atrius makes one seriously funny pissed off kitsune that was just too good. This chapter was great I loved the humor of all the guards being duped and especially when Sesshomaru shut them up with out even having to raise his voice. It was like he was a father scolding his many rambunctious kids for taking their pranks too far. Good stuff, good stuff. I have a question though. Does the fact that Inuyasha had a very short human night have to do with his demon blood becoming more dominant with the changes going on with his body? The suspense of finding out just what's going on with Inu is killing me! I'm dieing to find out. Anyways awesome chapter. I'll be waitin patiently for chapter twenty nine.
| Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: September 10, 2009 13:57 PDT
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you know i was just thinking that the new ruler from the south would show up and explained that nefra was indeed a sceheming witch that should have killed years ago. and finding sesshomaru and inuyasha innocent of the charges. but i also thought that they would be able to pin that rat enyou or whatever his name is, into it also. you know like the two of them planned this together so that they could split the riches of the west between them. oh well, the fact that it is over is good enough. i laughed so hard when when altruis had played those pranks on everyone. at first i wasn't sure but when po and ko was got stuck to that statue i remembered that was what shippo had done to inuyasha when they first met. that was when i realised that it was altruis playing a joke on them. but i bet he gave them something to think about. i mean when he told that kitsune are masters at pranking and the way he said it. i pretty sure it will make them all think first before they even think about trying to do something against him again. finally, i have never screamed so loud before in my life until i got to the end of the chapter. what was happening to inuyasha? was he changing into a full demon on the night he was usually a human. does it mean his human blood is disappearing leaving only the demon blood behind? i so wish there was more. i really really want to know what was happening. was this what inuyasha has been feeling all along that infact he was not going to die but will now become a full blooded demon. this story is the best and i can't wait until the next chapter. i guess the answers about inuyasha will be answered then.
| Reviewed By: Water's slave On: September 10, 2009 12:25 PDT
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so long as it happens faster than the last chapter, I cheer you on.
| Title: Do you have time?
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: September 10, 2009 02:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why I did this? because I am impatient. I dont know why....I truly miss your fic though. Where are you? can i lend some suggestion? I just feel about Coda had something to do with the hanyou thing and Enyon just held some BIG prejudice towards hanyou. Now when will I know about they true intention? CAN you let Sesshomaru investigate about their true intention? I just want Inuyasha feel at ease and not questioning himself about his own existence, he is already ill and dying to think that, that is makes me pity him. At first I just thought Coda will consider about this, now he is truly making a suggestion to punish Inuyasha, this is outrageous!!! I think I wanna get down there and SLAP HARD to their face and call them PATHETHIC because prejudice will lead nothing but death not only to everyone, but also themselves. Now, when will you update? If not, now more than a month has passed, do I ever mention about sending some same review to you? is it annoying? yes it is but now I will not do it, but I will send a review that only filled with only 1 word, "UPDATE"......everyday. Our patience wearing thin. Even though you did marvelous...
| Reviewed By: IamJeanClaudshumanservantandloveit On: July 18, 2009 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fabo chappy! Thanks for the update, poor InuYasha had such a trying day and I would really like to take a chainsaw to Codas head. loved it
| Title: FINALLY!!!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: July 16, 2009 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time you write it UP! I was nearly wanna do the same review and then now you've finally update it! CONGRATULATIONS DUDE! Now my headache finally get better, and will waiting for your next chapter! Truly...TRULY wanna read yours until we get read THIS FIC until completed!!! P/S: I will waiting for your NEXT UPDATE. after 3 weeks without it, I'm gonna TORTURE you again with THREE SAME REVIEW IN 5 DAYS!!! ...heheheheheheheheheh......I evil, so deal with it. It's your fault though, cause you're already THE STARS.
| Reviewed By: dashllee On: July 16, 2009 01:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ima skip all the bad stuff for right now and go 2 the hot, steamy stuff. ok *takes a deep breath* OH.MY.GOD.INUYASHAS LITTLE WET DREAM THINGY THAT HE HAD OF SESSHOMARU WAS HOWT!! NOT HOT, BUT HOWT! OH AND SESSHOMARUS WAS HOT 2. NOW ON 2 THE BAD STUFF. I REALLY WISH THAT RAT, HIS NAME STARTED WIT AN E, IS GETTING ON MY NERVES. AND CODA NEED 2 FIX HIS ATTITUDE AGAINST INUYASHA AND GAIN SOME SENCE AND TAKE SESSHOMARUS SIDE. BUT I DO AGREE WIT INU. A QUICK SWING OF HIS SWORD AND THE PROBLEM IS SOLVED. LOL*SIGHS*LET ME GUESS, THE NEXT TIME THE 4 OF THEM R IN THAT ROOM ALL HELL REALLY IS GONNNA BRAKE LOOSE. I JUST HOPE INUYASHA GETS 2 LEAVE ALIVE AND THEY DONT HAVE 2 GO 2 WAR. CUZ THEY REALLY DONT NEED WAR RIGHT NOW, DO THEY? OH WELL UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZ XDXPXDXPXDXP
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 14:20 PDT
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Great chapter, I hope Inu starts to trust Sess soon. More please!!!
| Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: July 15, 2009 02:15 PDT
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i am always excited when you put up the next chapter to your story. and as usual you do not disappoint. i for one thought for sure that inuyasha was going to make a break for it also. imagine my surprise when he only ran to the bathroom because he had to throw up. anyway, i think inuyasha had the right idea. just let him hit both of them with a wind scar and the matter will be settled. i had to laugh when inuyasha went into retsu domain and began to cook. i can imagine inuyasha tossing the poor demon out and yelling at him. and then to top it off, sesshomaru had 'the talk' with inuyasha. inuyasha wasn't quite as flustered as i thought he would have been after talking about sex with his brother. and that coda. it's to be expected from a big stupid bear. some friend he turned out to be. but there is something strange about him hating inuyasha so much. it seems to go beyond the regular full blood demon hates hanyou stuff. you don't suppose he had a thing for their father but inutaisho turned him down because he was in love with inuyasha's mother. that would explain his hostility to ward's inuyasha. but the thing i want to know is what is wrong with inuyasha? i am still not satisfied with Daigo's analysis. but hopefully, there will be something that can be done to save him. anyway, i am so looking forward to the next update. i bet it will be just as thrilling as the last.
| Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 01:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe how much that chapter rocked i mean that was great now i wonder why coda is being such a asshole i mean seriously if sess said it did happen then it didn't happen he has never been a liar....but the scenes with inu-chan and then sess touching them selves now that was hot....i can't wait to see what happen next i mean come on it seems like anything can happen now anyway.......UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 18:05 PDT
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OMG! You won an award! Go you! *clap, clap, clap* Congratulations. You deserve it. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 18:02 PDT
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Well, damn. I wonder what the hell Coda wanted with a second private meeting. Bastard. When do we get to see Inuyasha rip off Enyon's head? Heheh. Sorry, you're doing a good job making me hate him. Oh, I was so afraid that Inuyasha would have a second heart attack type episode. Don't scare me like that!!! Inuyasha and the kitchen episode was so funny. I liked Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's alone time. They didn't have any big blow outs. Inuyasha has really done a good job reining himself in. And, finally, it has occurred to him that Sesshoumaru might actually want to mate with him and he got off thinking about Sesshoumaru! Yay! ^_^ I just wish they had gotten that issue resolved. I wonder if Enyon is plotting an assassination or something. I wouldn't put it past him. Grrrr. Great chapter. Thank you for posting. Sorry I've been so slow with updates on Centennial Hunger, but I've been working on it. Snow
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