| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Angeloj On: November 29, 2012 04:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....after all that. And Inu does not remember who he is. It might be better in the end but you know I never even saw something like this comeing, update soon please |
Reviewed By: Stephanie 8245 On: November 24, 2012 15:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I love this story! I found it a couple days ago and just couldn't stop reading :) I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon! |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: cms On: November 16, 2012 16:22 PST
Comment/Review:
So happy you updated! I loved all of your inu scenes but what really got me was what was going on with Miroku! oh and I was also a little disappointed that Kagome escaped mostly unscathed again grrrr she's so annoying. Update soon! |
Title: Wigi
Reviewed By: Wigi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2012 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I enjoyed your writing. I have so many questions already! Why does Inuyasha not remember Sesshy? How will this affect their relationship? So I am really looking forward to the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: shelly_webster On: October 04, 2012 04:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, this will be probably completely unproductive as a review... but pleaseeee, more! Please, please, pretty please? So, I stop whining now... just please update, will You? Or I'll start to cry. Yes, blackmail is so very mature ;) At least I'm not delirious from lack of sleep like certain someone, hehehe go fountain man! |
Reviewed By: derangedKymera On: August 20, 2012 12:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! I love this story and I'm so happy you updated. I hope everything turns out well for youand anxiously anticipate the next chapter! :D |
Title: WHEEE
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2012 08:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few spelling errors but did not care. YOU UPDATED!!! I read the new chapter twice already. Thank you for the update. Even though you said it was only a half chapter. Hope your circumstances improve so you can update again soon. I love the "bolder pup" I laughed so hard when I read that. I don't know why but I found it extremely funny. That and the fact that InuYasha would not let Sesh go. Guess he got his revenge for the nesting thing way earlier in a way. The whole thing was funny and a nice light heart-ed scene after everything else that went on. I can see Sesh not being able to live down the golden shower incident for a little while. I can't wait to see what the other half of the chapter is like. Please oh please try to update soon. |
Reviewed By: Glily On: August 02, 2012 22:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
You have my complete gratitude for your half chapter... Lol. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: kale25 On: August 01, 2012 17:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
So nice to see another chapter, and great to see Inu has finally come through his transformation. Sess is also taking the whole situation pretty well. Can't wait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2012 09:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Finally Sesshomaru realizes his responsibility to Inuyasha. I feel so bad for him having to grow up alone everyone even his brother turning his back on him and now Kagome's bullshit. All Inuyasha needs is a hug and someone to actually give a damn about him. |
Title: Ch. 3
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2012 22:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
God there is like no end to the disregard Kagome gives to Inuyasha's feelings. You really did a good job of turning Kagome into a most unlikable character, at least for me. When Inuyasha is like,"I don't want to be here." And Kagome is like, "Why must you make a big deal out of stupid little things." I'm all like biiiiittttcch calm down you can not be that much of an ass hole. And look who's talking she always makes big deals out of stupid stuff in the canon. Inuyasha go help that random person, Inuyasha I know you heal fast and everything but strip and let me check it anyways. And then the stuff with Eiichiro happens and proves that yes Kagome you can be that of an ass hole. |
Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2012 22:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like in this chapter how even though Inuyasha is getting fed up with how the group is treating him he still tries. He's just not like fuck it, just yet. Which shows that he really cares about them. I can't believe that not one of the characters actually stood up for him in the canon or told Kagome about herself. Like say something like, "Hey girl the way to win a man's heart human or otherwise isn't by slamming him face first into the ground, or humiliating him." If I was Inuyasha I probably would've ditched Kagome and tried to find some other way of finding the jewel shards, or just waited till Naraku collected them all then kill him and take them from him. And the plot starts to thicken even though it's a short chapter we get a glimpse of the physical changes starting to happen. On a sidenote if Inuyasha was human there would CLEARLY be some domestic violence going on. There is no way without that necklace thingy would ANYONE take being treated like that bruises all over that woman's face. I can't believe I never noticed how much of a bitch Kagome was to him. And maybe the reason why Inuyasha starts to fall for Kagome in the canon is all those sits eventually turn his brain to mush? IDK. |
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2012 21:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
So this is like my tenth time re-reading this story and I was always so nervous leaving comments before but after reading that bs over at y-gal I'm about to change that. You said you had 23 emails in your inbox well there's 36 chapters in this story and I'm re-reading and commenting on ALL of them cause that shit is just not right. When I first read this story I was so drawn in by the fact that we were looking in on Inuyasha's point of view, which actually inspired me to write my own fanfic like that. You also made me think about how badly Inuyasha was being treated in the anime. I mean I never really looked at the 'SITS' as something that hurt him or felt sympathy for him until I read this story. Kagome never really took the time to understand Inuyasha in the canon either it just seemed like Inuyasha ended up giving up on his demon heritage and suppressed it. Like even though he was looking for the jewel shards to become a full demon what he was becoming by hanging out with Kagome was even more HUMAN. After reading this first chapter I wanted to find out HOW things were going to change. You did a really good job of hooking me I've been following this story since 2008. On to the next chapter! By the way I'm shutterbee from y-gal. |
Reviewed By: Hey Listen On: July 05, 2012 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been six months just got done rereading it aain. I really love your story. Have it favorited and check back once to twice a week to see if you have updated. I get saddened when it is not. But hey life sucks and you have probably been busy. Really Really busy. Or I hope it is that and that you have not hit writers block or a case of the I don't cares.Cus I really really love your story. One of the best well developed I have found and read in a while. It would be a shame to leave all your hard brilliant work unfinished. I think I speak for everyone that reads this fan fic when I say: Get on your muse and update again please. I would really like to see what happens when Inu becomes consious of everything. How he will take his human side being gone. How he will take the changes his body went through. The fact Naruku is dead, he mated with Sess again. His deeloping bond and trust between the two of them. How he will react to the second mark. Will they ever complete the mateing? I would sure hope so. All those questions and much more. And you are the only one in the world that can answer them. For you are the creator of this story and a really good one at that. So please please please please. Pretty Please with icecream, and cholclete sprinkles and a cherry on top update really soon. |
Reviewed By: aeglos On: June 23, 2012 12:32 PDT
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Fricking great story - I have been dancing in joy since I have found this fic. Craving the next chapter... |
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