| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: cms On: January 11, 2011 05:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so glad u updated, ive been following this for years. i thought life may have forced u to abandon it. your writing improves with each chapter. this is my favourite fic :) |
Title: huh?
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: January 09, 2011 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...am totally confuse, does that army of a guard came from Imalia foolishness or by Garith himself. I just thought Imalia doesnt hate hanyou, only thought Inuyasha as a pampered prince... and that G&G's does hate him. |
Title: Love IT!!!!
Reviewed By: KitkAT02395 On: January 09, 2011 13:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic!!! I have never even read or started to read this until two days ago and once I started reading, i couldn't stop I read all 32 chapters in two sittings and that was only because i needed to sleep. keep up the great work, and I cant wait for your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Terra_DeeEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2011 14:18 PST
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Hurray! You made my MONTH by updating! As always good work, I can't wait for some more SeshInu interaction though you write that so well. terra |
Reviewed By: kale25 On: January 06, 2011 16:19 PST
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Can I beg for the sanctity of Inus virginity. Which is to say, I don't want to see him raped. He's been through so much in this story, having that happen too. It almost makes me agree with him. Hasn't he been through enough pain, doesn't he deserve some peace? By the way love your Sess he is so snarky. |
Reviewed By: anf600 (Toni) On: January 06, 2011 12:35 PST
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oooooo good chapter *applause* |
Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: January 06, 2011 09:44 PST
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oh my gosh! this chapter was so great. oh and the scene when inuyasha was telling shippo to leave him because he was dying was so sad. poor shippo i know he felt as though he was loosing his father for the second time in his short life. now naraku has inuyasha. you can imagine what that creep has planned. did he give inuyasha something to save him? i ask because i thought for sure that inuyasha had took his last breath when he saw the little imps of the underwworld lurking around him. and then when he fell unconscious he claimed he fell into something soft. and i doubt very seriously if it was naraku. i can't see him as been warm. was someone else there? does naraku know about inuyasha's illness. he didn't seem quite surprised when he saw how ill inuyasha was. were they being watched by one those disgusting insects that naraku has around? was that how he found out inu was sick? also putting aside the seriousness of why shippo and mirkou was there. their little chase scene throughout the castle was too funny. but you have to admit miroku and kilala was able to hold them off until they found altrius. and about that imalia, i'm thinking she was a plant by that rat ruler of the east to cause chaos within the west. and it does seem that her training the men isn't doing anything. like he said, with her there his soldiers are split and they will not bold well if they have to go to war. i just love waiting for your updates because i know that it is definitedly well worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: S On: January 06, 2011 08:31 PST
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OMG SO EXCITING!!!! MORE MORE MORE! thanks for the update! |
Reviewed By: Hiei08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2010 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you'll update this soon!! I'm becoming as attached to your OCs as I am my beloved Inus. :o) Daigon - Just freaky, lol. Atrius - A very good example of what Shippo could grow up to be. The brothers, all of them, they're just great!! |
Reviewed By: dashanta On: October 08, 2010 01:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U NEED 2 B-COME A F***IN ARUTHER!!!!!! make some books like this, cept come up wit ur own names(wouldnt want u 2 get sued). ok so i absolutely love how u write. theyre very few story, that i have read, that can portray vivid pictures in my head. i mean its like im watching a movie instead of reading a story. i also like how u...hmmmm, hold on im trying 2 find the right words 4 this............ ok i like how when u describe how inuyashas is feeling i can feel it 2(does that makes since?) and it make me cry every time i reread the previous chapters and the new chapters and come across a sad, depressing, and heart breaking emotions. and i NEVER and i mean NEVER cried while reading a story.i mean i might have felt hella sad but i never cried. and i totally no how u feel about the deaths in ur fam, cuz i lost like several of my pets either by accidents or old age, and i lost my great aunt 4 days after xmas in 2005, and yet even the littlest thing can make me remember her and break down and cry. so yea, i gotcha. that cliffy was just horrid btw :( lol. oh and plzzz let something in sesshomaru kick off and tell him that !!warning, warning, ur brother is half dead and ur worst enemy is about 2 attack him!!! just b like my inuyasha senses r tingling. lol. u should update soon, as an extra early b-day present 2 me. lol
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Title: clarifying...
Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 15:23 PDT
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my haha was for the cliffhanger comment on your last chappie. Im really sorry to hear bout your dog and aunt. I know how it feels. Hope you start to feel better soon. Again...sorry. :(
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Title: ha Ha!!!!
Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 15:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the title is what I thought when I read your ending note. :) this story is awesome, the different layers is has, and the complicated intertwining emotions ends up sending chills down my spine. the emotion you are able to convey gets me everytime, most specifically I notice it in the sad, tramatic scenes. Especially the one where Inuyasha's heart was trying to fail and go into overdrive at the same time. I totally felt connected to him. His fright had my heart pumping and there was also the element of Sesshomaru's worry and concern and fear for Inuyasha was almost making me cry. I was so happy when I finally read that he did make it, that I started to cry. SEriously. That never happens to me btw. So props to you. :) I also sent you an email, so....yeah, just please PLEASE continue your writing and this story. ITs simply the highlight of my day when I receive a notice saying that you have update. Ciao.
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Title: Crystal Clear
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: September 16, 2010 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we understand...and will be faithfull to your fic NEXT TIME CHEER UP!!!!! ^O^
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Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 10:45 PDT
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Please, pleease hurry up and right the next chapter. i think i'm addicted to this story.
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Reviewed By: Twisted Hilarity On: September 15, 2010 22:14 PDT
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Duuuude! You are goin' for the cliffhanger hall of fame on this one. I liked it a lot - the description of how Inuyasha was experiencing the whole melting down of his body was really vivid. And Miroku's reaction to the rites was lovely-sad. And the end...well, man you suck, you cliffhanger bastard. Gettin' some of your own back, eh? ;-)
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