| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 11:17 PDT
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Oh great. Naraku just had to show up. Aaargh! You're killing me with this cliff hanger! Good job. *Pats you on head* ^_^ Although, this has turned into a series of cliffhangers. *strangles you* LOL Great job with keeping the writing fresh while doing it mostly from a first person POV. ^_^
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Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: September 15, 2010 02:18 PDT
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this was the saddest chapter i have read. i was in tears when inuyasha had to finally tell them he was dying. and whose voice was that inuyasha heard in his head. was that his human side? of course when inuyasha isn't able to do anything naraku would show up. poor inuyasha is in so much pain. it makes me wonder how he was able to survive until morning. your story is so exciting it's makes me wish you could update every day. well maybe not everyday but i understand how life justs jumps in and things are thrown out of whack for a while. but anyway, wonderful chapter and i am dying to see what will happen now that naraku now knows inuyasha is sick.
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Title: Cliffhanger
Reviewed By: JessiV On: September 15, 2010 01:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just evil! I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat to read what happens next and you put the most evil cliffhanger on the end! I'll need to keep checking for updates even more often then I do now! Well, done!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Angel122189 On: September 14, 2010 15:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please say that he was secretly followed and hes not about to die like it seems like. Write more soon. This was an evil evil evil cliffy. I love your writing and descriptiveness. keep up the good work
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Title: poke
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2010 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE SOON Seriously what happens don't leave us hanging man something big s going on and somethings going to break free soon I just know it. I want to know what the "it" is. Inuyasha is not going to really die is he? Whats going to happen to our favorite Hanyou can he be cured, will the complete their mate bond and accept it. WHAT HAPPENS (whines) okay so im being a kid, but i love the story and really really really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 00:12 PDT
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I liked Chapter 29. Just thought you should know. The fox gard (can't remember his name right now) is a bit scary when he wants to be. Sesshoumaru is a bit slow, everyone knows you trust your gute before you trust the person your talking to. I hope he him being slow dosen't mean InuYasha dies because that would suck so much. Guess I'll find out when you update.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 12:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so funny lol that was a great story on Sesshomaru past. Wow still laughing I don't know how you came up with that story but I really hope to hear another. sigh ok I'm calming down now. Poor Inuyasha What going on maybe it's the though of being around Kagome. (bad attempt of humor) How are you doing? Long time no talk Ladytokyo
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Reviewed By: Sondji On: May 24, 2010 07:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic - love it love it love it! The characters have depth beyond what is needed for the basic storyline, the plot is interesting, the writing is engaging... and Sesshy's just scrumptious! Yummy! Can't wait to read more of this!
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Reviewed By: JessiV On: May 19, 2010 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great update! It made me laugh and it made me cry. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work.! :D
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Title: sorry.
Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2010 11:01 PDT
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That last review was mine. I didn't realize that my friend was still logged on to my computer.
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Reviewed By: LadyTatiana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2010 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Took me six damn days but I got it all read. Damn! It's a wonderful story, well written, good oc's and plot twists. There are few stories that have made me laugh like this one has. I have enjoyed nearly all of it. There were a few bits that were a bit on the gorey side for me. But I got through them. There wasn't anything bad enough to make me think about not reading the rest. I loved the family history as Diagon relayed it. It was really well thought out and wonderfully portrayed. This is the first story I've read where Inuyasha has so many health problems. It's very interesting and I look forward to more. I am also amazed at the length of your chapters. I have never been able to write one of nearly that length. I don't know if I would want to. I have enjoyed reading them though. Even if they kept me up until all hours of the night trying to get to the end of the chapter before crashing. But even the end of one was not always enough for me to be willing to stop reading. If it was in book form I wouldn't have been able to put it down. As it was I kept dozing off in my computer chair. It truly is a wonderful story and I look forward to the next posting. I hope they are able to find out what is wrong with Inuyasha. Keep up the good work. I'll keep an eye on my e-mail for the next update.
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Reviewed By: cherryblossm29 On: May 06, 2010 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I have never reviewed, I just wanted to say thank you for a great chapter and a wonderful story. I am so grateful that you have continued to develop and write since you have such a talent for it. This story has made me laugh, cry, and overall I love it!!! Please keep up the excellent work....I know it must be hard with everything going on in your life but just know I'm am an loyal fan of your story and look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: WinterD. On: May 05, 2010 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad your back! Hope everything is getting better. Thank-you for the last two chaps, this fic has me riveted and it's great you are continuing where you left off. This last chap, wow! Poor Inu! Poor Sess! Inu's body decaying more so is so interesting, and you haven't even really told us why yet; I'm holding out for an enemy or spell. And the way you've written Sesshomaru's progression from bastard to repentant is done so well. Not an immediate change, but more realistic progression. Thank-you again and please keep writing. I hope everything gets better for you.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: May 05, 2010 00:24 PDT
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first, i hope your father is doing well and out of the hospital. when i read the part when daigo was telling about sesshomaru's childhood i laughed so hard until tears fell from my eyes. it was so funny. little ru ru was the terror of the west. he was a little monster to everyone and they couldn't do anything to him. but everyone that was hurt by him got some satisfaction when inutaisho finally turned the brat over his knee and spanked his bottom until it was red. one question all that what daigo was talking about? was it his boot that sesshomaru crapped inside of? i ask because it seemed that he knew too much stuff first hand. but the ending was so sad. i wonder what the others are going to do when inuyasha tell them he's dying? i hope it doesn't come to that. inuyasha deserves some happiness and to live a long life.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 20:41 PDT
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Gah! Poor Inuyasha! He's in so much pain. What is happening to him? *sniffle* Oh, the stories about Sesshoumaru were really funny. ^_^ Thanks for the update. Much appreciated. ^_^
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