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Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS !!!! I'm so glad to read that I'm not the only one who is always looking to see if you have up-dated. Your story,by far, is my favorite of all that I have read. And like so many of the other ones that I have read I'm always wondering(worring) if there well be an up- date. So thanks once again. And I do Hope that you well contune to weave your wonderful tale for us.
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Title: Keep It Up!!!
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like always, I enjoyed this chapter. This was a pretty funny chapter, as you had me rofling all over the place. Cant wait to read the next chapter, and see whats in store for everyone. Keep up the great writing.
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Title: Hooray...
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: March 16, 2009 01:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly? Definitely you should get a new one. Now this fic could only get more interesting, and its definitely in my most first list to read a fiction! Get more update! and update! and update! and update! and update! and update! and update! and update! and update! and update!
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Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: March 15, 2009 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy dance all around!!! Talk about a surprise! You do not know how long I've been stalking, yes I admit it, stalking, this site for updates. I laughed so much throughout this chapter. I was just as surprised as Inuyasha that Sess was true to his word. I'm really looking forward to see how their relationship will continue to develop.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the part about Daigon's head being in a box and tossed out the window. But what I liked the most is that Inuyasha and Sesshoumru are getting along a little bit better. Inuyasha is trying hard to figure out Sess and Sess is not making it difficult for him. Even going so far as to tell him pretty much how to go about it. Showing emotions without even noticing and treating him like a real brother. I hope that they talk about where Rin and Shippo will fit in as they let out more secrets that they hold for each other without the help of drugs. Since Inuyasha has found out that Sesshouamru does in fact have feelings and fears it will help him put things into perspective about himself.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 19:22 PDT
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That was a very fun chapter. I felt sorry or poor Atrius, but wasn't sure whether or not I should feel sorry for Retsu. Definitely didn't feel sorry for Daigon. Such a conniver! I don't know if I reviewed the previous chapter, but Sesshoumaru was so cute in it. I'm surprised at how mellow Inuyasha has been in this chapter. It is refreshing. If he truly believes that he's going to die soon, he should relax and enjoy the time he has left. I'm worried about Daigon being gone while Inuyasha is still having problems. I don't know that Sesshoumaru tossing him out like that was a very good idea. What if something happened to Inuyasha? Guess Sess was too pissed to think of that. Sooo, is Inuyasha finally starting to believe that Sess is telling the truth? Now he has a lot to think about, especially with the fact that Sesshoumaru doesn't appear to be fighting the mating. It will be very interesting to see where you take it from here. I'm very excited about coming chapters. There is the big meeting and Inuyasha's illness. You know, if Sess and Inu were fully mated, the other lords would be hard pressed to do anything to Inuyasha. That would be cool. I can't remember if the mating is complete or not. I'll have to go back and read again. Heheh, another excuse to do it! Dunno how many times I've read this fic. Congrats on the new car and on the new place. Good luck with getting a chair. Invest in one that'll make you happy for a long time. ^_^ Great chappie. Thanks and I look forward to the next. Snow
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Reviewed By: JessiV On: March 14, 2009 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, you've put out another amazing installment to this series. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. The humor of Daigon's head was a prize and the tantalyzing tease of a possible Atrius tossed in was perfect! The cliffhanger was sheer cruelty of wondering what happens next. I hope that you continue this great story. It's a jewel!
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Reviewed By: Rethira [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 04:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, new chapter! I cannot wait until Inuyasha actually asks Sesshy. I imagine it will be a stunned!Sesshy moment, possibly combined with speechless!Sesshy and embarrassed!Sesshy.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen On: March 13, 2009 23:35 PDT
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This chapter was wonderful. that alir is a nut. i thought poor retsu was going to have a heart attack when sesshomaru burst into the room. i laughed when retsu was trying to ease out along with the guards when sesshomaru dismissed them but he told the cook to stay. then sesshomaru hacked daigon's head off and threw it out the window and put the body in a closet. now that is what i call harsh punishment. harrassing atrius like that. actually they all were but i guess its to be expected. as they said, atrius was the new kid. when they started talking about inuyasha i thought for sure atrius was going to tell them that inuyasha raised himself out in the forest. just as well, because they are going to find out sooner or later. by the way, where is jaken. i would have thought he would have been with sesshomaru. he seems to follow him around like a dog. did sesshomaru order him to stay behind and watch rin? or maybe he just didn't want the pest following him. so, will the others let the secret out to sesshomaru's old commander about inuyasha and sesshomaru's relationship. i ask because it seems to me that he might have it in his head to overthrow sesshomaru. then, i had it in my mindd that imailia came to the west to cause trouble. after all, she is or was a mecenary. and she has done just that. sesshomaru may not know it but his forces is split between those who follow her and those that follow the other man. (I've forgotten his name but you know who i am talking about. his son almost stabbed inuyasha in the back when he first came to the castle.) anyway, this will be my last question and i will shut up. did Nefra and the rat demon lord working together to try and get their grubby little paws on the west. i can't wait until the next chapter when the meeting begins. i wonder how inuyasha is going to handle that obnoxious rat. hopefully, sesshomaru has set a trap to catch the rat in.
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Still sitting on the demon chair? You got to get you a new one to type the next chapter for me! LOL Inuyasha does choose his moments to have revelations. I almost fell off my chair laughing when he had the thought that he should have been consulted when Sesshomaru put him the "will fuck box". Oh God! The couple of chapters are going to be so much fun. :D I really enjoyed the guards' conversation. Those guys are so much fun, particularly Alir and Tren. Poor Atrius! Don't be surprised if people start requesting side-stories. Loved the creative punishment for Daigon, as gruesome as it was. I hope they find his head soon!
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I've been hangen out for that chapter! And it was fabulous, Sesshy was soo funny, and when he cut off the healers head and put it in a box I cacked up laughing. Then he thinks InuYasha doesn't remember, has amniesa (sp?) and starts freaking out full like awww! LOVED CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Title: Perfect Friday the 13th Read.
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 18:36 PDT
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This was a wonderful chapter. I know that many are asking for you to hurry and write quickly. I completely understand them but you just can't hurry a good thing. I hope that you get rid of the ASS DESTROYER chair so that you can sit comfortably and write at your pace the wonderful goodness that pours through the fingers. Loved how Retsu and Daigon got away with their stunt. I particularly enjoyed the playful haze that Atrius had to endure. Obviously, I relished every scene between InuYasha and Sesshomaru; especially, the last thoughts that InuYasha had. I wanted him to keep going but he stopped ... *sigh* torturous cliffy. Happily, I'm set for more dreams about these two lovely creatures... FYI, about more than half of the chapter is in bold format. I'm not sure if that is what you intended so I thought that I would let you know. Wonderful work as always. Enjoy your new place, car, etc! QS
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: March 13, 2009 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u now it takes like a month 4 u 2 update but it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooo worth it :D...i cant wait till u update.......i feel sorry 4 the fox dude cuz he was getting pick on out the ass. lol and i also feel sorry 4 Daigon, he cant find his head. oh god i almost fell out of my chair laughting my ass off. dude u better keep u the awesome work, cuz if u dont i think i'll die:( jk.jk
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Title: just update sooner
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 13:50 PDT
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get your new chair, new desk, whatever just update sooner i don't want to re-read since the beginning...don't get me wrong i love your fic but i every time i start reading it from chap 1 i cry... a lot as if it were my first time reading it so please update sooner......
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Title: 2 months
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: March 11, 2009 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can u updated please? I wanna set this fic to be in my first list, so I could reread them and then to your latest one. pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleaseplease please update...
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