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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 13:13 PST
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I am so in lone with this story. I jusdt wish that Inuyasha would tell them what was going on. He doesn't have to carry the burden all by himself. Oh and i'm glad that they made it out okay.
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: November 20, 2008 14:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGGGGGGGGG WHEN R U GONNA UPDATE CUZ I REALY LOVE THIS STORY. THIS IS MY 5 TIME READING IT.(SCAREMS) U GOTTA UPDATE SOON OR IM GONNA DIE. (OK JK BOUT DAT PART:D)
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Title: I wanna read yours!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: November 14, 2008 22:47 PST
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....please UPDATe....
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 11:03 PST
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That was amazing! Gruesome, yes. But still amazing. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 11:02 PST
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That was amazing! Gruesome, yes. But still amazing. update soon.
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Title: W00T!
Reviewed By: Pandoras Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god it's been such a long time since i've read a fanfiction this good. to be very frank, i spent three days reading this story while i was supposed to be studying, but it was still worth it. not many authors can successfully pull off half the plot devices' and twists that you do. by the way i'm not some creepy 38 year old (i'm 18 yay!), i'm just taking critism at school and every time i review it ends up sounded really professional. anyways, yay plot! (also been reading your other stories and i have one word for them BRILLIANT!!!)
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Title: Curious
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: October 21, 2008 06:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoping for your next chapter. Might as well this story will be find some great ending soon...I dont mean that really quick to have ending, just hope you made chapters suits your taste as well... just... i.... hope inuyasha will be back to normal health... and make sesshomaru happy as well...i hope... i suck at review this time!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 15:23 PDT
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Oh! I saw in one of your author notes, way back when, that your computer had shut down and lost your chapter twice. I thought about this neat gadget I bought with my computer back in 2001 or 2000. Stupid me didn't know what was happening when lightening would shut off my computer, the battery would kick in and my document would come back up and I was asked to save it. I had no clue what that meant until about a year ago. This gadget saves whatever your working on. Some kind of battery back up. It's a big black box and it isn't cheap, but you can probably catch it on sale. It is really worth looking into.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:37 PDT
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Sorry, about my review being so sucky. I'm going to see if my brain can work right now. I feel really sorry for the position Sess (nicknames to reduce word usage) is in. He's really having to keep his needs, as well as his, libido in check. Molesting Inu was cute, but I can see why it would embarrass Inu.--Inu is in so much pain that I don't see how he can bear being around so much noise and activity.--Little humorous thoughts like this keeps the fic from bogging down in angst: [So it seemed unlikely that Inuyasha would- "FUCK OFF!" -Or perhaps caution was the wise choice after all.] ["No…you've done your best Daigon thinks. This one simply does not understand your sibling." "If you figure him out…let me know." Sesshomaru whispered. He took another bite of his stew.] ["Bite Daigon's ass fox boy…"] --I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love Daigon and Retsu. ^_^ Daigon's reaction to Retsu's near death was so sweet. *sniffle* Hm, so Inu's prank was payback for Sess humiliating him. I didn't realize that before. --Ooooh, I love a pissed off, protective Sess who lets loose! [ "You…you…you." Sess mocked. "Dead….dead….dead. But first."] ["Do enjoy." Sesshomaru sneered before he turned back to Inuyasha.] That was great! It really got to Inu, too. What those guys did to Inu was awful and I liked that Sess got to see just how strong Inu really is when he saw that Inu had pulled himself off the spikes.--The story of the old tree was very morbid. Ick. I'm glad the tree is gone and that Sess was the one to have it burned. It was interesting to see the others' reactions when Inu threw that tree.--OMG! The emotion displayed by Sess when he had to stop Inu's heart was amazing. It was so sad. When it was all over, Inu was too cute. It was odd that, though Inu remembered Sess hitting him in the heart, he didn't remember why.--Oh! Those guys haven't mentioned how Sess went against their tenets of protecting family even though they are learning all the things that Inu had gone through. Where was Sess all this time?--The whole part about Inu's 'mama' being gone made me want to cry.--The confusion of Inu's heart was suspenseful and exciting. Such a touching scene when Sess, so vivid.--I already reviewed about the icky bog monsters. Inu was very brave though. I liked that.--The end was very cryptic. I can't wait to find out what is going on there. Well, that was an eventful chapter and I liked it very much and am anxious for the update. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 13:59 PDT
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Ok I forgot to tell you this but the emotion that you put into this was amazing. you made me cry so I don't know if I should hate you for that or not. well my sicfi channel is thanking you. Because of the bog men I had to watch creepy things on tv now. although it's october and I ;ove this season. and the shows that come on. I'm on such a happy little high from this chapter, please if you can make the next on a long one as well. I can't wait to see Inuyasha at the end. I feel sorry for sesshomaru but he has to earn Inuyasha' love and respect or at least a quiet talk. plz plz update
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Title: I can't breath
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I so didn't see this coming I couldn't stop reading I was gasping a few time. I had to reread because you did such a good job with this fic. I don't even know what to say to you at this point but my mouth is hanging open in suspence. Inuyasha going through some hard time. is his human dying and becoming a ful demon? I swear my heart is racing thinking about this chapter. from the floor, to the demons with the spike, to the village, heart attack, the monsters in the dark. I don't even know were to even begain when to breath. sad that the kit die but I gues true to his nature and youth he had to find out. I don't know what you have instore for us next but I can't wait. sorry I havent been reviewing i just quit two jobs, but I have been reading. do you still go onto gaia? if you do come find me I'm miya yen and my mule is sadie frost. talk to ya later hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil miss sandman On: October 02, 2008 07:54 PDT
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Oh I forgot to ask which one is (cough, cough) Bigger? It seems like Seeshy would be cause Inu's still growing but I was wondering because of the way you wrote it many times it sounds like Inu's bigger if u catch my drift :)
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Reviewed By: lil miss sandman On: September 30, 2008 07:28 PDT
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OMG i love this story poor inu. lol sesshy's the girl in the relationship, i like it that way far more than the traditional where inu is submissive. it makes more sense anyway keep writing plz.
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Reviewed By: my_perversities On: September 27, 2008 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG this story rocks!!! I love it!! Oh and "na no da" a gravitation fan hmmmmm lol me too!! Although I am a little concerned...if Sesshoumaru is the alpha and Inuyasha needs the comfort and attention....who's going to be seme??? I mean due to Sesshoumaru's personality and that he is dominant (and the fact that I love him as seme) make him the obvious choice. But you've already stated the Sessh's youki doesn't care either way....and Inuyasha's youki seems to really enjoy being seme and has no consideration for being the wonderful uke that I totally wish he would be ;) So I hope you hit a really good smex scene soon so that this....curiosity can be put to rest (plus I just REALLY want them to fuck lol!!) And OMG I LOVE how long your chapters and basically the story is...no puny...done in an hour thing....definatly wortht the read and I can't wait for more. So please keep 'em coming as soon as your sexy creative ass (or rather hands I suppose lol) can crank them out ;). Keep up the amazing work!!! *chuu*
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 18:12 PDT
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Wow. That was some long chapter and had a shitload of awesome action. Eh, I didn't particularly care for Wasil. He was annoying. Sesshoumaru's behavior toward Inuyasha was sweet. I felt really sorry for him when he had to stop Inuyasha's heart. You did great with expressing his emotions and describing the body language that went with it. Damn, Inuyasha sure has been through a lot in his life. That day was a really shitty day. He knows what's wrong? If he does, maybe it's something that he knows happens to hanyou's? It'll be interesting to find out what it is. I'm hoping that someone at the gathering will be able to help him. Regardless of the outcome, I think that Inuyasha's prank with the flood was funny. It was also amusing when Inuyasha did everything Daigon said. Kinda makes me think he needs to be on happy pills for awhile. LOL If only for everyone else to keep their sanity. Ew, the bog men were gross. They reminded me of some creatures that I saw in a sci-fi movie ages ago. They did the same thing, only they were like bats. Downright creepy. Inuyasha has been perpetually malnourished, huh? Sesshoumaru thought that Inuyasha was probably so accustomed to hunger that he learned to get used to it was enlightening. I wonder if it is too late for his body to make up for that. I'm so glad that the assholes who captured Inuyasha paid for what they did. They deserved it. This was an exhilarating chapter, and there was so much in it that I know I've not commented on a lot. I'm very anxious to see the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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