| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 23:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great! I was so happy to see Inu and Sessh get along better, it was so nice. And as usual you made me cry, the part with the tree, and Inu remembering when he as there, it was so sad... poor Inu. I really, really hope InuYasha isn't really dying, I hate when I read stories that I like only to have someone kill him off. I'm hoping maybe he's just turning into a full demon or something, or that if he is really dying that Sessh can save him. It would be so crappy after all the horrible things he's gone through to lose his life now. And poor Sess, he'd probably follow him into death as well. It's your story though, and I'll keep reading and see what's to come. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: xzlyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 18:13 PDT
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please, please, please do not end the story sooo quick. I really, really wish to read at least 5 more chapters before it ends...But I do wonder do you already know how you plan to end the story well in that case....PLEASE let your mind run while and update another long one! =) I do wish to ask, after the ending of this chapter may you please write a way to improve one's writing skills...Take this as a compliment for I think your writing is the best of all mediaminer. You may write it as an author's note or whatever, however I do wish to know some advise a great writer like yourself, will advise to other writers...ANYWAYS please do not end the story soooo soon.. I have been a fan since chapters 1-23.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen On: September 24, 2008 10:55 PDT
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this was GREAT! from start to finish was one roller coaster ride after another. the story about that tree was such an awful thing. poor inuyasha. the pain he suffered because his 'fat head' brother would not take him in. when inuyasha ripped that accursed tree out of the ground and threw it away. i cheered. such a reminder should not have the chance to out live one of its victims. the truth after his heart attack was that truly sesshomaru he saw or was it himself? at first i was thinking like maybe it was sort of a ghost dog waiting for him to die to lead him to the after world. i know its silly but since inuyasha has been having this terrible feeling that he is going to die. well. . .you know what i mean. but what creeped me out was that bog scene. it had my skin crawling. and then that worm that was wiggling down alir's throat. Ewwwwwww!! one thing those bog men. you described them like those creatures that was on i think it was 'Beast Master.' did you get the idea from there. but anyway, are you truly going to let inuyasha die after almost a lifetime of pain. i hope not. i hope that feeling he has does not come true. Or could that feeling be that his human half is dying off finally and he will become a full blooded demon. because inuyasha no longer hears his human half anymore just his demon. so hopefully that is what it means and inuyasha will be all right in the end. out of everyone in the story inuyasha deserves to be happy. anyway, what a thrilling read. i can't wait to see what happens now that they have fianlly made it to the meeting place.
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Title: Kickass chapter
Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: September 23, 2008 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was just crazy! All kinds of stuff was going on from possible drownings to a heart attack to swamp monsters attacking! I felt just as drained as the characters after reading this chapter. I really love how you are building more on Inuyasha's past. The situations that you develop really help to explain why he is the way he is. I just LOVE this story! I did a happy dance when I saw that it was updated. Should I be doing homework and organizational work, yes I should, but I just couldn't stop reading even if I wanted to. You are an amazing author and I CAN'T WAIT until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 19:19 PDT
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amazing chapter! Those bog men were creepy... *shudder* please don't take too long to update!!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 19:06 PDT
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Wow! That was so amazingliy detailed!!! I feel sorry for both shesshyand inu.... O.O *cries* Also: THERES ONLY ONE CHAP LEFT? T_T ~This one will feel very very sad if there is only one chapter remaining. (Daigon) !!! ur still amazing though! love ya much!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yashas_Sis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its times like these, the world just seems to suck and suck hard. Yash!!!!! You're always getting fucked over and damn right Sessy came to your aid. He's not as much of a prick as he use to be and he's a loving brother now.... whether he wants to admit it or not. I continue to love this fic and this chapter was a real downer for the most part. It just never seemed to get better. Everything just kept going wrong like quicksand and it just was depressing. Even the end finished on a sad note. Sigh. I really really don't want Yash to die. My bro bro can't die!!!! Yashie!!!! But if you have to...... let it end right. You know what I mean... I hope. Update soon. ~Yasha's Sis ps.Just a little side note in case you didn't know. When you type, sometimes the font ends up bolded for the rest of the chapter. It was getting kind of annoying but I'm use to it now. Would like it to be right though....
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Reviewed By: shohunky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 09:06 PDT
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Please don't kill Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: The Iron Reaper On: September 23, 2008 03:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done it again I believe this is one of the best chapters yet in undeniably the greatest story I have read yet. I love the long chapter lengths and though I wish it didn't take so long I understand that such greatness requires time and effort. I respectfully request you continue this story whenever possible and as a note the angst and horror parts (such as the tree and bog scenes) were wonderful and very well writen. Also to answer the question of if anyone expected that "No" no one did, period. The only assumable part was some else attempting to rape InuYasha and Sesshomarou finding out. Thank you for your time. Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 02:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!! i can't believe how great this chapter was i mean i feel hella bad about what happened to inu-chan with the whole he might be dieing thing but at the same time i like how sess is starting to see that he may be losting him before he even gets a chance to have him.....but really that part were sess wasn't sure if he should really stop inu-chan's heart was touching to me cause it showed he really does care enough to do whatever he has to do to save inu-chan...the bog part on the other hand may give me nightmares that's how good it was i mean damn i don't ever wanna across those things especially knowing what there capable of....one question through..you don't really plan on killing inu-chan off do you? i mean i think that would make sess cry.....and he wouldn't have time to start to make it up to rin for telling her he hated her....mean while i can't wait to see what happen now that there where their suppose to be but whatever happens i hope that inu-chan can bring him self to put some trust into sess that he's not out to get him and it's not all some over the top plot anyway........PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! After your hands rest of course
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg that was amizing never saw it coming and i love the way u worded all of it. i just have to say that was amizing to read and i cant wait for the next one. keep up the amizing work love. ash
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: September 22, 2008 23:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot 2 put da rating
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: September 22, 2008 23:11 PDT
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OMG this part of the story was really really sad and scary and gross and sad agian cuz inuyasha gonna died. dude i was ballin when sesshy had 2 kill inuyasha inorder 2 save him:(, but all in all ur story was kick ass awesome.
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Title: I. am. GLAD!!!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: September 22, 2008 22:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohohoho....I like this one. more fun to read once again I am glad that just in time my online games had them server down... ....and my time to read your story is finally come!!! And for waiting your next updates....I just hope my broadband hasn't been suspended, cause I just broke today...
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Title: Revie 300
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 19:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes. I am your 300th review. I am so glad you updated. It was very quick after I left that other review yesterday. Keep up the good work, and I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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