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| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] | | Pages (39): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: lokiotancock On: September 22, 2008 18:32 PDT
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oh no inuyasha going to die! no no no@@!!! too tragic.
| Reviewed By: twisted hilarity On: September 22, 2008 13:49 PDT
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oooh, nice! The action scenes had great details and the pacing and excitement level was really nicely done! I really enjoyed this - oh god, the pulling the worm out bit was truly disgusting and blech - good job. oooh, gave me the shudders. hardly wait until we figure out what's coming next.
| Title: past and present
Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for all of your hard work on this chapter. it certaintly kept me on the edge of my seat. The fight was amazingly done. I wonder what the mystery is and how it will be unveiled in the future chapters. I like how you incorporated Inyasha's past with present time events. I feel sorry for him and proud of how strong he is. i wonder if when Inu feels that his time has finally come if he will wander off to die alone. I know sometime's pets do that to save their owner grief. My cat did that. He was a good kitty. Please keep up all of your hard work and I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Title: Isis191
Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 11:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Just WOW!!! Poor InuYasha, he goes though so much. I hope that in the end he does find some peace and happiness.Your story is just wonderful. And the bog was something eles.As I was reading I could almost see it,and feel the darkness pressing in on me.I love when the story that I'm reading can do that. I can hardly wait to see where you take us next time. Once again, thanks for sharing such a great story !!!
| Title: Isis191
Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 11:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Just WOW!!! Poor InuYasha, he goes though so much. I hope that in the end he does find some peace and happiness.Your story is just wonderful. And the bog was something eles.As I was reading I could almost see it,and feel the darkness pressing in on me.I love when the story that I'm reading can do that. I can hardly wait to see where you take us next time. Once again, thanks for sharing such a great story !!!
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Rethira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as i said before, wow. and the swamp scene was just as you wanted. anyway, thanx for updating and keep up the good work.
| Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 22:38 PDT
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WTF? Where is the update? It has been a month now, and you said that you were almost done with the next chapter when you posted chapter 22. I know I'm not the only person thinking this. Im not mad or flaming, Im' just getting a little impatient, thats all.
| Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story! I can't wait to read more, please update soon!
| Reviewed By: perfectsolder On: September 02, 2008 09:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! I haven't been checking for your updates for awhile. I LLLLLOOOOOVVVVEEE it!! I love you!! You are the best writer ever. Can't wait for more. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
| Reviewed By: Jazzamarazz On: August 31, 2008 04:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. O.O that was certainly some action! XD Although I feel a little bit bad for Inu... :P but not really. I still think he needs some sorta revenge though XD omg I love this fic :DDDDDDD
| Title: Chapt. 22
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the wonderful world of politics! Sess was on roll teaching Inuyasha the ins and outs. Has he considered that Inuyasha could take that 'shades of gray lesson' and apply it to their budding realtionship? Inuyasha is just untrained - not stupid. You can be so evil...I really got a laugh at the end of the chapter. Sess pulled 'big brother' rank on Inu. He punished and humiliated Inu publicly in a way that would tick him off the most plus rub in Inu's face that he was no different than Tren and Alir. Sess used Inu's bodily reaction against himself to drive his lesson home. Nothing like having a public boner that everyone is making comments about and walking away to leave him to suffer...lol...that won't endear Sess to Inuyasha. One can only wonder how Inuyasha will retaliate!! 'Little' brothers learn by example; Sess better look out! It comes across clearly that Inuyasha is the 'middle child': Sess the know-it-all older brother (who has it all from Inu's point of view)and Rin is the youngest 'sibling' who gets all the good things without trying, when you read #21 with this chapter. Inu has nothing. So, I can understand why he's jealous of Rin. Inu goes a step further than just telling Rin that he hates her; he has to tell her scary comments and that's what puts it over the line and makes him mean. Not something that he usually does to anyone. Nice job with the two chapters showing that process! Inuyasha is getting crankier by the second. Is his human side starting to cause trouble? It was barely contained with Sess's help. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Fantastic Fic!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: August 26, 2008 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you really pay attention to this fic, hehehe... For your notice, I nearly thought about abandoning thing, but no you are not. I am proud. Other than Inu's fic I've have read this is the first fic I will choose as excellent Sess/Yasha romance/humor/family/comfort fic ever. But now, continue or no, I'm still reading your fic many time from beginning to end, no matter how I want to forget it, I am still could not avoid from reading your fic! You are marvelous author as well. ..... I do really never say something like that do I?
| Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Inuyasha's a hypocrite who would have thought? I bet that the brothers and Inuyasha are going to be the best of friends...eventually... maybe You know I think the one who's really suffering is Inuyasha's Youkai...poor thing.
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sess/Inu-fan! On: August 24, 2008 10:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(This is more of a comment/request than a review. but I will give you a review in your next chapter!)Uhmm I just wanted to say, that this was one of the most intresting SesshomaruXInuyasha fics I've read on Mediaminer, I really love it and hope you will update soon! I'm dying with anticipation. BUT, I WAS wondering if MAYBE as the story goes on, that Inuyasha ends up as the uke. If you did that it'd be so sweet {My opinion} ~! well... I hope you update soon or I think I might end up going crazy! and again, I'll write a REAL review in the next chapter~! I did want to say one more thing though... YOU ROCK! Your story is written beautifully ~ ~Sess/Inu-fan! ^ - ^
| Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, love it, love it, love it, it's great! I've laughed so hard during some parts, I've cried during others, I've sat on the edge of my chair anxious to see what happened next during entire chapters. Your story is unique and creative, it has drama, it's sexy, riveting, emotional, and so funny in certain parts (the 'pervert gods' thing in chappie 21 were halarious.)...but...you are driving me a little nuts with how long it's taking to get these two together. Yes, you are a tease, and naughty, naughty tease. I know in the story it's only been about a week since Sess rescued Inu, but out here in the real world it's ch. 22, and been a long time. I guess it's so frustrating because everytime Sess makes some progress, it falls apart. After Inu and Sess had that nice time against the tree, and Sess apologized to Inu I thought things would finally start getting better for them, it was so, so, so sad when Inu got mad afterwards at the market place because of Rin. And he was so happy and excited to go, and he never did get the butterfly. I cried when that happened. I also cried when InuYasha saw his room for the first time, but that was a different kind of sad. I guess what makes it so frustrating is that it doesn't seem like anything is going to get better between the brothers anytime soon, I hope I'm wrong though. Inu is so sad and lonely, he needs some hugs and kisses from Sess. And poor Sess is trying so hard, and it's not working. Inu is acting like a brat right now, but that's understandable, he's vey hurt inside. I liked your punishment for Inu, but I think you should have had Sess spank him (not in front of everyone, that would have been too mean), he's acting like a child, and maybe then he would have realized how childish he was being, plus spanking Inu is just too sexy (I love spanking him in my stories, or reading about it). Or I wish Sess would have done the same thing, but not in front of everyone, I would think now, based on how his behavior has been lately that this will make him even more angry with Sess and set things back even farther with he and his brother. It would be nice if he realized that he would be punished since Sess said he would, and not get mad, and come to terms with the fact he enjoyed hs brothers ministrations. It's funny though, you are the complete opposite of me, in my writing I try to wait, to draw things out before I get the two of them together, and I can never wait too long no matter hwo much I want to, then there are lemons. I admire your patience, maybe it's easier for you to go on so long with no fluffiness because you're a guy. That impresses me too, I remeber reading in your AN in one of your chapters that people were asking if you were gay since you were a guy writing Yaoi. I'm really impressed that a straight guy could write Yaoi so well, guys don't always do to good with the pretty boys, but you are just awesome. I have to say when they finally get together, willingly, happily for the first time that should be one hell of a lemon for waiting so long. So far your lemon/limes type writing has been great, it will be nice to finally read hopefully a nice fluffy lemon. I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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