| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 18:23 PDT
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OH to bad! Anywho, another great chapter! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 20:32 PDT
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I absolutely adore this story! It's so ridiculously good! When I first started reading, I admit I was unsure about the whole 'inner battle with the youki' thing, but I've only fallen in love with it now! It makes your story only that much more unique! I love the way you portray the characters, especially Sesshoumaru, and of course Inuyasha. You're doing an excellent job and you shouldn't let anyone or anything get you down! I'm so eager for the next chapter; I hope your life drama calms down!Please update soon, your story has me so anxious for more!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 19:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story. it made me cry and it made me laugh quite often. i think the tempo is absolutely perfect. it never seems rushed and it never drags. the flow is good. nothing seems forced. your writing style style kept me coming back, so that i could catch up, even though my time to read at the computer is limited. the problems i have with the story are: repeated words, omitted words, homonyms and typo's. they really slow things down. and when you use had had, you don't need a comma between them. but enough of that. you have a good story going, and i want to thank you for the enjoyment it has given me. i love stories that make me laugh out loud. i do think you need to find a role for sango. she deserves something more than lurker status. there's nothing wrong with a strong female character. and my favorite line is still "gag me with a fucking sword".
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Reviewed By: DD On: September 23, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I LOVE this story!!!!! You are one of the best fanfic writers of the Sess/Inu pairing I have ever read! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! The miroku/Koga situation is juicy!, but what about Sango, is she going to get some positive attention? So far she has kinda faded into the background.This story is just as good as UKE if not better.p.s. I "Rarely" ever review even though I have read fanfiction for 6 years, so consider your story extreamly good to actually get my lazy ass to right the longest review ever have.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:38 PDT
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:: twitches with the need for a new chapter :: My god, I could just SEE those two cuddled up! I wish I had a picture! :: thinks and then pulls out a sketch pad :: Well...I'm not that great of an artist but I can sure as heck try! :: has a determined look:: Anyway, great story so far! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 06:54 PDT
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i loved this chapter. their inner voices are so much fun to read.... the "gag me with a fucking sword" line made me laugh out loud. i can see where "uke" inspired you. fluffy's speach about the necklace and all. watch youre vs you're and breath vs breathe. but a good story
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Title: Snuggle puppies
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drama who's giving you drama? is it those flamers cause I could round up a possey and we'll go riding for vengences! HEHA! ok a bit much huh? awe you saying that we mean so much to you means so much to us, that we mean so much to you! and thanks this was a nice touch to the story no to much is happening but something happen and it was darn cute! Thank you Bruiser Brody and Smoke-man. Now how in seven tarnations did you come up with those names? whats the other dog name bruiser is the pup right and theres smoke-man. ok on with the review. (Hanyou, Youkai) I giggle and awe this whole chapter. " Sess and Yash need sleep" I was howling by then. sesshy not a morning youkai huh lol. awe there cuddling and snuggling and struggling is so cute. Sesshy isn't letting go anytime soon. there youkai are so funny I would like to hear more of them. good thing shippo woke inuyasha up I'm sure he doesn't want a picture of this. and what the hell she mean she's not happy with him no one ask her to come any ways. Hey wouldn't it be funny if there get to the catsle and Sesshomaru doesn't allow kagome and Sango on to the grounds or in the catsle? damn thats funny. so huh Kagome going to be leaving good how ya going to do it? and make sure she know that she has no chance in hell to be with our Inu and it's her own fault! ohhhh! the wolf is coming after the monk watch out Sango! I like it when I read the aspects of youkai. I really do hope Inuyasha gets a tail or two and some crests as well. I say it's going to get funny when they go to the catsle Sesshomaru still has his work cut out for himself and Inuyasha is going to make as funny for us as possable. and also thank you for changing things up a bit. it's nice to see/read Sesshomaru being taken, that's gotta be talk out too. lol can't wait for the next chapter and as alway I'll rereview if I had more to say. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: September 17, 2007 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new chapter. It makes me laugh that Kouga wants Miroku. Poor Shesso I can tell things are going to be rough here on out. He's strong enough to take it in stride. thanks for the update best wishes and good waves.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 17:28 PDT
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Great job! Sess and InuYasha are sooo cute together! Everyone else needs to f**k off, so some serious action can occur. And, I think Inu should stop sweating the little things! I mean so what he woke up naked next to his tall, handsome, manly, sexy oozing god of a brother! He should be so lucky! *sigh* I wanna be a cartoon! I would be Sess' bitch any day! Oops, don't tell my husband! Love the new chapter, update soon- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: MysteriouslyMoi On: September 15, 2007 07:52 PDT
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Aw, I posted that twice...
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Reviewed By: MysteriouslyMoi On: September 15, 2007 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, now Sess and Yash snuggling is just so adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter. This one was aweseome, and you barely had any mistakes at all. I didn't like the part on Kagome and all them whispering in the background, though. =D But I don't have time to dilly dally on that, 'cause now I'm so worked up over KOGA and MIROKU! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the story and I love it! I hope you update soon! I was giggling so much over the last chapter and I kind of wish that Kagome had gotten the picture... the brothers would never have to see it right?....
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your latest chapter i love how inu-chan couldn't get away and sess kept talking in his....i can't wait to see what the other lords are going to do when they meet inu-chan....i have a question through when did kouga-kun figure out he wanted he wanted miro to be his concubine....anyway UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 20:45 PDT
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That was an awesome chapter and I absolutely loved it! Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru cuddling is beyond adorable! I love the plot and Sesshoumarus new found feelings! I can't wait for Inuyasha to begin to forgive Sesshoumaru and all of the issues they are probably going to have to go through! I'm so excited to read the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lemonloki On: September 13, 2007 18:44 PDT
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YES! i love your story so far, kagome bashing is the greatest. inuyasha is taking control!
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