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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 10:49 PDT
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i felt so bad for 'demon sesshomaru.' he's such a fun guy. will inuyasha really try to hurt sesshomaru in theat way. although it would serve sesshomaru right to make him suffer but wouldn't that make inuyasaha no better than sesshomaru if he goes off and takes another mate knowing he is marked by another demon. one more thing, you just love making kagome out to be an idiot, don't you. it's obvious she seems to think demons are as weak as humans. and why doesn't sango say something. she's suppose to know about demons. why doesn't she tell kagome that shippo won't get sick from eating raw meat. but then isn't kagome controdicting herself. she eats sushi and that is raw meat, right. anyway, do you plan on bringing that nefrume chick back to cause more trouble? and has 'demon sesshomaru' actually given up on making inuyasha his mate or has he just retreated for now to give inuyasha time to settle down before he begins again. i hope he doesn't give up. he deserves to be happy although the other sesshomaru should tied to a pole out in the blazing sun. anyway, wonderful chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 04:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I feel like doing a little nursery rhyme style song "Miroku's an uke, Miroku's an uke." :-D That was a very, very nice chapter. Dialogue was good. I thought Inuyasha's reaction to the mark of possession was nicely done as well, Shippou's test, Miroku's reaction to Kouga....I can't even tell you how much I'm looking forward to the next chapter! And for Uke...well, I got up early today just to work on it, because I can't seem to find any free time otherwise. So hopefully I can have a chapter of that as thank you for ya!
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 03:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more angsty bits between sess and inu.. i ought to hit him over the head for arguing and fighting with fluffy (sess's youki) who is on his side, after all... nice to see that shippou foreshadowns inu as a dad. i think inu will do fine. one fic writer put it this way ... (i think the lady who wrote the prophecy) - inu has the compassion, whilst sess has the .. er, cant remember the word, but steel sounds like a handy sub. i know... we are interested in the next bits...
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Title: UMM
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey am I the only one to notice that when Inuyasha youkai took over he had more control over his mind? Is that something he gain when being able to hear his youkai now? And not to bring unneeded work but I thought that Inuyasha fire rat cloths grew with him because it was part of his youkai. Not that I didn't love the strip tease and the sex, and the fact he's in new cloths and I'm sure that he looks yummy. but it's still not Inu without the red, I'm loving the spike armor keep that. I kinda want to see what Sesshomaru says about it. but damn these question have been in my head and I forgot to ask. Ok now thats off my right lobe UPDATE SOON!! I have to see the morning after, those are always funny scenes.
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: May 23, 2007 19:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi me again sorry i just think this is an amazing fic. So please update i need more Inu/Sess. Lets get together and kill kagome-whore!!! I GOT THE CHAINSAW MWAHAHAHAHAHAH!
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Reviewed By: 95454 On: May 23, 2007 07:43 PDT
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AWESOME THAT WAS SOOOO SWEET AND MIROKU AND KOGE VERY HOT I HOPE THAY ARE A COUPLE LIKE MY TWO FAV DOGS SESSHY/INU NOW THAT WAS SOOOO HOT. I WISH YOU WOULD TELL US WHO IS THE COUPLES IN THIS STORY BUT I THINK WE ALL KNOW BUT WANT YOU TO TELL US PPPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSEE?
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Reviewed By: PinkyBunny On: May 23, 2007 07:30 PDT
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I love that chatper it was so sweet and i knew you would like the miroku/koge ideal hehehehe i like that but will miroku get a clue mmhmmhm i like him hell i think i like all the men in that show that look good and i dont care if they at good or bad they are hot hot & hot but anywho we are talking about the men in this story SESSHY/INU & MIROKU/KOGE.And I like the hold yokai thing but i want to know will inu be turning a full demon?Anywho loving this story.And please keep it YAOI and a love but funny & hot and sexy story PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 22, 2007 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this last chapter was short but sweet. I loved it good. I'm glad shippo has finally learned something and it was heart breaking to think about his lonely howls. I'm glad Inu is taking him back. I was a little worried. I just hope Inu will give Miroku a chance too. And what is up with Kouga's crazy ass behavior. Is he wanting Miroku's body? Interesting. Thanks so much for posting can't wait to see more Best wishes and good waves.
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Title: you worrie to much
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keh!you worry to much. this chapter is good. We were wondering what was going on with the others and about shippo see I told ya he's going to have a really good part and he did! But did ya! listen hmm maybe. he's learning and the self reflection is what I wanted I wanted heart wreching emotion and you gave it to me so thanks! I'm totally in love with you becasue of that. I love the whole howling thing calling out to Inuyasha I know my heart was hurting for the kit. and the first answer had my heart pounding of a reunion. Hm Koga tring to hook up with the pervert it be funny to have someone go after him instead the other way around. I'm loving the loyalty that he's showing to Inu but I want to know is when did koga started seeing Miroku as mate? I'm not the biggest fans of kagome and sango they just get on my nerves sometime I just want to push them off the cliff. Because of there bhaver they could end up all alone. or maybe with each other than maybe sango will leave kagome because she's a idoit. Kagome deserve hobo. All that Inuyasha has done for them and they act like that get a clue. Sango she's really no better just not as outspoken as kagome. Kagome ahh! damn she gives me a headace maybe I could put some beads on her that'll be fun. I'm just as suprise that she hasn't complane about stoping! gah the world is going to edd!!! Hm Inu going to be all princely proper so sessie are you going to but the facial marking on his face? And we all want to see how sesshomaru handling be taking in the ass. It would be funny it he ended up as the Uke! lol what you know that would be funny as hell. Your spelling and grammer is so much better in the chapter congrats! HUGE ALL AROUND! Just wanted to tell ya that szaugglaughs has posted her part in my poem at adultfanfiction under yoai it's quite funny. check it out and hope to read something from you.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD.....i LOVE your new chapter i mean it ROCKS like always...i mean i love how shippo finally reaalized that he was wrong for the way he treated inu-chan...and that he apologized and inu-chan took him in....i also hope that he forgives miroku....is it me or is it looking like there will be some miroku/koga.....i can't wait for the next chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: May 19, 2007 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter made me cry I actually felt it when Inuyasha and Shippo were howling. It broke my heart. Thank you for such a grat fic and please keep updating. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: szaugg laughs On: May 19, 2007 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really enjoyed that. Hmmm, more yaoi pairs potentially shaping up, with my favorite monk, no less? And the inu/shippou howling thing? Very touching and heart tugging and VERY nicely written. Smooth, flowed well, did it just long enoug to give the motional punch, but not so long it was overdone. I...this was really a great chapter! I really, really look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: May 18, 2007 19:58 PDT
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Yes I want to see Sesshomaru running naked through the woods.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 15:48 PDT
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Great chapter! I love the way you defined the relationship between InuYasha and Shippo. I am still hoping that this is a SessXInu story. It's a little creepy to thing of InuYasha and Miroku being together. And, Kouga and Inuyasha is just down right NASTY! Great job so far, B reading U~ Later!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 06:54 PDT
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well shippo is learning a lesson.
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