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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: March 17, 2007 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure when I started reading this if it would be original or just another- Kagome's a bitch, Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were born mates- sort of fic. But if Sesshomaru's going to treat Inuyasha like a brother then it'll be unique, so I'll stick around and see where this goes.
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 01:34 PDT
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i didnt mean to imply kagome was evil. if anything, i thought she was too clingy, and a bit too goody-goody. i think she can be very childish. and i do find her outfits ridiculous. i mean, here she is this modern girl traipsing over feudal japan in short skirts? (what was rumiko thinking?) how lame is that? i see the outfit coloring the characterization of kagome. i have some of the manga, but most of my inuyasha info is from the anime... i was just remarking to someone that inuyasha is more into het than anything else. i happen to like the sessxinu one because they seem to be a match set... and they balance each other. and of course they're demons and to me, demons are like alien beings..so there are no rules on mating or breeding practices. for all i know, that's the norm for aliens. i like sessxinu stories because they deal with opposites in temperaments so there are many dynamics to the relationship. it also provides interesting views to pack behavor (i also watch national geographic a lot and some other nature shows) your sess characterization and about-face was a tad too fast, granting his youki is acting up - he has issues about honor - and you sort of glossed over that a bit. (is this a short fic?) looking forward to your next installment. and it is szaugglaughs i think. i remember the sz and yes, uke is a wonderful humor-filled fic i also discuss it with my saiyuki friends
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY........So great, this is so cool^^, i wish Kagome will, die, die you even annoying bitch from the seventh hell.....um exsuce my french...wait english, well update soon okay
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Title: keh!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KICK HER ASS! pain someone should kick her in the head maybe she learn some since. the hardest lesson is to learn is that you lost something you greatly want, and then to learn you had it but lost it by your action and you can't have it back. there's no going back, no coming back from this. Like I said I'm just so happy that someone wrote a fic about this.
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Title: I love you
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bitch got it come to her. She had no fucking right to do what she did. she really need to be put in her place; and the bitch is still yelling and she let the fucking old man spit on him and kick him. Kagome says he loves him funny fucking way to show somebody love. It's about damn time someone stuck up for Inuyasha for all the shit he does for them. he should make everybody do there own work or just leave. I would rather be alone before I stay with them one more min. And it's damn time for his human side to die and Inuyasha to become a full Youkai, his human side is what allow such treatment you would think his human would be on his side. And please make it hurt. I hope Sesshomaru is going to be Inuyasha mate. please update I swear this is so good that when I read this I start to shake with anger, see how that's being into the story.
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Title: 3 chapters
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well. i hope it's with sess and not miroku. (did you say you liked uke? by szaugglaughs?) although the other side of kazaana has inu and miroku... anyway. interesting 3 chapters. and the groundwork is laid nicely - altho you have miroku suddenly defending him. i do think miroku is quite capable of that. i was just reading another fic that portrayed kagome as you have her in your fic. but much more selfish and vile. so. looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again awesome i was sad when the chpater ended i was like 'what? where's the rest?' lol haha he'll go BEAST MODE on her vindictive butt OMGOODNESS that part will be so funny! keep em coming! i hope sesshy does inu lol IN FRONT OF KAGOME lol naw im kidding....about the in front of kagome part haha
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inuyasha, i cant wait to that bitch leaves, she is so........EVIL, update soon okay^^
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Title: hm
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HM hate to say this but Kagome is fast proving herself to be no better than kikyou. hell I think kikyou treated Inuyasha better. I would love to see her face when she know that she has lost Inuyasha. I don't mean to be mean I usally like kagome & Inuyasha fic's but her treatment always had me say why is he putting up with her. maybe that why he's always so mad. the lack of trust she shows and always embarssing him in front of rivals and enemys who's going to be scare of you with a human woman can bring you down. man I hope kikyou shows up and makes it wrost for kagome. ok sorry I just had to vent. I would hate it if someone ever tried to control me like that or ever. thoose bead are for her protection and he has to find a way to get it off.
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Title: THANK YOU
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See I'm so fucking happy that someone has written what I've been feeling about kagome and the other's. I feel like he's there family pet or something. I love you for writing this. I love that story UKE the was kagome finally figure out to remove the rosery. Inuyasha is more Demon and she is not in her world and should not make in into what she think's he should be. why isn't anybody saying another about her abuse of him because it is. Maybe she will understand that she really don't know a damn thing about demons and there needs. Inyasha should let them try to survive by themselves. please update very soon I need a lot and I mean a lot of guilty, tears. Everyone has there breaking point and maybe kagome would like to know who it feels to have her body slam down into the ground. Inuyasha is not a creature to be tamed. Is Inu turning into a demon? will he mate Sessie? thank you I was so hoping someone would catch on and write about it, I would but I'm not good at it, I just have ideas I would like to read from a good author come to life. your my hero! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 13:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite honestly i think Kagome is an annoying little bitch and she should be put in her place! i think she needs to be sat a couple times so she'll understand how it feels....>XD...anyway i like how original the story is...i'm just waiting for him to snap on her ass lol....please update soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: March 13, 2007 21:18 PDT
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he doesn't love kagome anymore... rough. ahhh! i totally agree with you about the whole it's-all-your-fault-inuyasha bullshit! ah! i hate how all the fanfics have inuyasha getting sat to death while everyone else just watches and talks about how much of an ass inuyasha is. oh man. yaoi though... how so? and with whom?
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Reviewed By: Veelasiren On: March 13, 2007 19:47 PDT
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It is so true about how he is treated. Remember the epi where Rin is kidnapped w/ a bunch of kids? The monk who rescued her tried to force her to come to the village when she wanted to go back to Sessy. He HATED demons. He despised Ship and Kilala. When he met up with Inu in the village he was saying nasty things about demons and he started glaring at Inu. All he said was-You got something to say to ME old man?- Kags glared at Inu and told him to be polite! Excuse me? If she was standing there with a black or gay "friend" and there was a stupid jerk spouting off the N-word or fag while scowling at him, would she still expect him to be polite to the bigot? Way to defend your friend bitch!
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 18:54 PDT
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this is good its gettin there, i think your right bout inuyasha tho.....he seems to me to be a slave to them....AND WTF is Kagomes prob, anyways update soon
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