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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: July 11, 2007 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy freaking chibi. Saying he got schooled in this chapter is an understatement. He got fudged up man. I mean damn. I cried when you talked about Inupapa dying and the how thing with Inu almost being raped was insane. I mean dude that was crazy. Thanks so much for posting I can't wait to see more. Best wishes and good waves.
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Title: there are no words
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did such a fantastic job. You did what I really wanted to read and that was make the character suffer and boy did fluffy did suffer. now if only you could do the same with kagome and I'll be a happy trooper. and the fact that your story have a little of Szaugglaughs in there could do nothing but make her happy. I have a lot to say to this and it's wont go be on wow! and we all thank you so much for this long chapter to so made my day! 69 pg you say mine say 46 so that means you owe me another 23 pg. the character is it inspired by Yoda from star wars? I want you to make Kagome to suffer! I don't want to let her off easy just because kogo talk to her. and sessy got some making up to do and I hope it some parts would be funny. and in another chapter whichever you choose I would love and really lone chapter. I love for those. I simple love this chapter what wonderful writing and plot. my fav is with sessy youkai and I love the father and son moments with shippo. so what are you going to do with Nefrume bitch? and whats up with sango I would like for her to pay as well. and the monk well he's just cute and would hate to see him end up with sango. I guess thats it for now but you know me if anything comes up I'm going review again!
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Title: Chapt. 13 plus
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just WOW! I sat and read the whole story...it's got some really good things happening. The humor is great; Fluffy cutting off Sesshoumaru is just too funny - I'm still snickering over that one. And you have allowed the characters to mature and work out some issues. Nice job! And this chapter really put me through the emotional wringer; laughing; cheering for the good guys; and crying over lost moments. Looking forward to more of the story!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 02:39 PDT
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Man Daigon reminds me soo mich of Ryuichi off of Gravitation. It eas scary. Especially when he went na no da. *shivers* Ryuichi gives me the creeps. Anyways freaking awesome chapter. Your writting is so intense. I squeezed out a few tears reading this chapter. I so can't wait for the next update now that Sesshomaru is done with all hiss ass-holarey.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen On: July 11, 2007 02:34 PDT
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this chapter was sooooooo long and i just loved it. the first thought that came to my mind when nefrume appeared was 'bitch.' i am so glad you killed her. she jsut worked under my skin. anyway, the scenes where sesshomaru was seeing and feeling everything inuyasha was when he was growing up was so wonderfully done. and the scenes where he was being chased by the humans was so sad and heart breaking. and the scene with inutaisho that was brilliant. personally me, i always thought that was kind of an unnecessary death. takamura or whatever his name was was already half dead i was wondering why he didn't just use the wind scar against. even if inutaisho was weak he still should have had enough stregnth to kill one half dead human. but like i said that's my point of view. anyway, this was wonderful and i am looking so much for the next chapter when sesshomaru and inuyasha have their 'talk.
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Title: loving this story and always will
Reviewed By: kagomebabygirl On: July 11, 2007 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i just wanted to tell u that this si the best sessh/inu story i've ever read. and i just love this story, hope you'll update soon
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this first chapter. It gives a view that is seldom seen. Of to read the next chappie! Snow
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a terrific chapter. pretty long, too. well, you had memories instead of just emotions, and it was a one-up thing - meaning it is part of a spell. yeah, so i cried too... but i'm feeling blue so a bit more angst is enough to push me to cry. you really piled up the guilt, didnt you? but the next chapters will be the thing. sess eating crow, so to speak. i like seeing those. sess being very humble, and this time he will be - so looking forward to that... i guess sess might deserve the name fluffy in succeeding chapters? btw. i like the way you characterized hope.. how it slowly dwindled...
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Reviewed By: shohunky On: July 06, 2007 10:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! that is an amazing story I absolutly love it, please continue it, This story used to be on adultfanfiction, could you please put it back there, I love this story so much, it is great! So update soon!!! And Love that Kagome get's put in her place, man she is freaking annoyin, so again please continue this extremely wonderful story I love this story, oyu are such a great writer, it's amazing how great you are, so continue it. Shippo is starting to actually grow up, so that's great, and Koga and Miroku are starting something, so that pretty funny for me, so please you have got me hooked onto this story, I need to know how it is going to end so please for everything, don't end this story!!
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: July 04, 2007 15:16 PDT
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I'M BAAAAAAACK!!!!!! You love making me cry and scream at the monitor don't you. I'm totally sucked into this story. Please update some more you can't leave fans hanging like that!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn sorry it took me a long time to review but I like to think out what i'm about to write and I wanted to put down more than wow how hot anf sad. but I guess I didn't do such a goo job cause well it's there. oh well. I could let thing go by and not review. wow poor Sessie youkai, it's so understandable that Inuyasha doesn't know whats going on with himseslve much less his old bastard half-brother.but damn I'm in love with howling out pain. never thought that would come out of seesie mouth no matter which one it is. and love to slight lemon just enought to keep us happy for a few more chapters. plz update I love your mental torment your doing. (kill the miko) hehe! um just kidding. It's about time Inuyasha gets to eat his fill. Kagome well she can go to hell or hobo whatever!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:56 PDT
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Poor Sess's youkai. Oh well Inu still has issues to work through
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: June 14, 2007 01:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter. I'm glad Miroku and Inu are friends again. that makes me happy. And I loves the lemons too. And the fact that Shippo is finally getting the care he needs to grow strong. But poor sessho. He must be hurting very badly. I hope Inu doesn't mate with that one bitch just to get back at Sessho. That would suck ass. Thanks so much for posting Best wishes and good waves.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 03:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so bad for sess yuki i mean he tried to help inu-chan and he still gets blamed for sess being a asshole something about that just doesn't seem fair to me you know what i mean......anyway it was a really GREAT chapter i mean it ROCKED so hard....i hope inu-chan doesn't do something stuipd like mate or think or mating that bitch from the south....i mean really can she be anymore of a use themuntil you don't need them anymore type....anywho...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great character development in the later chapters. I would like to see InuYasha and Miroku together, but if you have in mind t0 have him mate Sesshomaru fully, then I'll take that too.
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