| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 20:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awww, Bulma's gonna leave? Veggie-kun will be so sad. And what's Ilandra gonna do? |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 19, 2003 10:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOO
this story really is AMAZING!
*claps her hands extreamily hard, and acts real childish*
I cannot WAIT until the next chapter, I really enjoy reading this story.
KISS!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GALS ROCK!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:42 PST
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(Bell rings three times) "In this corner we have the beautiful Chikyujin concubine, Bulma! And in the other corner, Vegeta's betrothed and future Queen of the Saiyajin, Zuccini! Let the match begin!!" Heh heh. Can't wait to see that. Lovin' this story. Can't wait til the next chapter. Maybe I'll have had more sleep when I read it and not leave retarded reviews. Ha ha. Oh well. |
Reviewed By: Majin Pan On: January 18, 2003 22:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED Bulma's dresses in chapters 11 & 12 can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Credik On: January 17, 2003 19:15 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey sorry i haven't reviewed b4 but my computer has issues but anywayz gr8 story. My sugestions: NO THREESOME!!!!! But keep with the idea u came up w/ in the Chapter 10 where Bulma began dominant itz about time Vegeta got dealt what he was dishing out. also definitly curious about Vegeta's gonna feel when he sees the dressed up guards! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 15, 2003 10:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. as usual, wonderful, I'm very curious to the next chapter!!
Luv your writing style! KISS! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 21:31 PST
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lol can't wait to see how you play dress up with boys it should be great lol |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 14, 2003 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT~~~!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 15:19 PST
Comment/Review:
Still doing great. Just because there wasn't a lemon doesn't mean it's bad. I love your fics. |
Reviewed By: DemonicKittenTehan On: January 14, 2003 14:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I dont really have that much to say, other than this story rocks! Wish I had inspired my human to write it, but oh well, thats the life of a demonic kitten muse.
Ciao
Tehan |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: January 14, 2003 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! keep up the good work.
I didn't came mediarmeiner fanfiction alot could
E-mail ( amandajune45@aol.com) when this fanfiction has a new chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 13, 2003 11:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think for the next lemon chapter you should make Vegeta beg. I find it so cute in other stories when Vegeta, the great prideful ouji, whimpers because Bulma isn't 'rocking' fast enough. Hahaha |
Reviewed By: aquaprincess On: July 19, 2003 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense fic.. Real good.. I couldn't stop reading once i started.. Very Very original... Update soon please.. When updated can you give me a notice at:
fanfictionlover@hotmail.com? Thanks tons.. Great story.. Keep it up.. |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 09:28 PST
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Handcuffs and bondage for the next fic. Lots of bondage...*hehehe* It's a great fic! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 11, 2003 19:05 PST
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A beautifully steamy chapter! I would be awesome if he ever let her have complete control, but I doubt that would fit with his character and all. Oh well. The lemon was yummy and I can't wait until the next chapter! |
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