| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 22:24 PST
Comment/Review:
Awsome! Update Soon!! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 19:28 PST
Comment/Review:
There is no such a thing as a pointless lemon, your lemons are soooooo lemony and bondage next would add a nice change and some pointless plot for more great lemon. |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 18:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWWWWW Vegeta is getting fisty..I like that. Anyways this is a relly good fanfic..it would get a whole lot of more reviews if you put some twisted stuff in there. Like Bulma chewing Vegeta out becasue she catches him sleeping with another whore. ** wink wink** Or she thinks she did...**gasp** OHHHHH!!!! ok anyways this is really good! Keep it up i am druling over to read the next chapter. If you need any idea's please write to me at LilSasami2005@aol.com
Peace out
~Buffygirl~ |
Reviewed By: satan's seraph... On: December 29, 2002 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^ ^;;; I, as I've mentioned, like this fic, but I was wondering if you could..... *sighs* once again help me out. Since there're all these bitchy people on ff.net I want to put my fics on a new site, but I..... don't know of any, and I dunno how to sign up on this one- everytime I try it..... gives me a person that already exists.... *sweatdrops* I think it just doesn't like me..... but, anyway- I love this fic, and I really think it's heading in a good direction!!! Keep up the great work!! *v* |
Reviewed By: Kari-chan On: December 29, 2002 10:39 PST
Comment/Review:
I think this is a cool story. It's a lot more realistic than a lot of other a/u's I've read. It really has a great plotline! |
Reviewed By: Faye4463 On: December 29, 2002 08:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOH!!! You are too good. Did you have to keep us hanging there though? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: oui On: December 27, 2002 19:24 PST
Comment/Review:
great |
Reviewed By: Fallin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 09:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya!!!
Vegeta Goddess I'm an old fan of yours from f.F NET and I have read your stuff in a while but as I can see it's gotten BETTTER AND BETTER. Great plot!! Lady D I have to give you some credit too EXCELLENT work!!Well keep writing and hope for a new chappie soon!!
gotta blaze
Fallin |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 00:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going chica ^_^ |
Reviewed By: amazon fox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 21:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh, very nice!!!! I love fics like this...XD Keep it going! dont make B/V fall in love for a while, I love how hes so suducive... XD GO GO GO! WRITE MORE! I MUST KNOW!!! Next chapter is comming out when? XD |
Reviewed By: faye4463 On: December 26, 2002 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH. Very good; please keep up with the frequent updates, i love it so far. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: nano On: December 26, 2002 19:58 PST
Comment/Review:
KEEP GOING!!! PLEASE ;) |
Reviewed By: Eddie Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 08:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I can't wait for more! :) |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: December 25, 2002 19:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story i read so far for a long time so hurry up and update.
Renee
RisinIndeed |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 16:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite interesting, in spite of the fact that this type of story has been told to death. I think that what makes this story 'gel' is that your co-writers have done a good job in blending each chapter well, and that is not a easy task. I'll be looking forward to more chapters in the future, update soon! ~_^ |
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