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 Reviewed By: KB  On: February 02, 2015 20:56 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was amazing the first time I read it years ago, and it's still amazing today.
 Reviewed By: rennysusanto [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2013 10:36 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The BEST!! Love it so much,i can't describe it with words... your work is marvellous... i crave for more.. thank you so much... but it'll be such an honour to have your work again.... sequel orjust another work... love it so much....
 Title: oops i didn't mean to put sequel
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2011 12:02 EST
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and i ment first one of your stories
 Title: this is a great sequel
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2011 12:00 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this one is almost better than the first one!!!!!
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2011 12:17 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, please tell that you're not done with this fic. This story is fantastic.
 Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Louise85  On: August 14, 2011 16:57 EDT
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I am so happy you decided to finish this fic. And it's a really good ending also. Thank you for this wonderful and intriguing story. Honestly the best BV fic out there in my opinion.
 Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2011 14:41 EDT
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Soooo excited to see you finished this! And with a nice, juicy lemon to boot. Woo hoo! Excellent. Glad to see them finally succumb. Nicely tied up. Loved it. THANK YOU for finishing this awesome story!
 Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: noonen  On: June 14, 2011 05:58 EDT
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Very good story but why is bulma so weird? I'm used to authors portray her as rich, arrogant and somewhat slutish but here she's almost insane. And the kamis think her an angel? Any man would run from a female like that after a one-nighter lol Vegeta is perfect. I like how you portray him.
 Title: chapt.11
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 08, 2011 16:19 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh, the webs we weave! These two are truly two of the most prideful and stubborn people. This chapter is really amazing! The angst and tension is so thick, you actually feel it in the air. You are an amazing writer. The way you can bring out so many different emotions with just words is absolutely mind blowing.
 Reviewed By: Vegetaswoman  On: June 08, 2011 08:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story I hope u updated soon I love it its so crestive and so full of details I gotta admit I cry a little.on the sad chapters I hope u keep updating and soon!....please pretty please I cant wait to read the next chapter.keep writing ur a hell of a writer7
 Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2011 13:38 EDT
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Great chapter! I actually went back and re-read the whole story again.
 Reviewed By: LolaV  On: June 06, 2011 09:43 EDT
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Welcome Back! Hope you are well. Seeing this update today made me so happy. Thank you! Looking forward to (hopefully?) another installment. Wonderful, as usual.
 Reviewed By: saej  On: June 06, 2011 06:56 EDT
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That was...an interesting update to a story that has slept for a while. I get the impression that this is a close on the entire story? It's a very good place to leave it though as it ties more neatly back into the canon story line this way. I liked the flow of the story from the unvoiced pictures they saw of themselves and each other into the well..."wild affirmation" sex. Though there were some rather TOO touchy, feely moments to start out with (especially after the way the last chapter ended), you wrote them in such a way that made them neccessary to get through the emotional bruises of the characters.
 Title: love this story!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2011 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so happy that u updated this fic. I've decided to reread this story so I can enjoy it all over again. Can't wait to read chapter 27:) A big welcome back. R u planning to finish this fic? I sure hope so.
 Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2011 11:54 EDT
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That took you long enough! ;) But what a bloody well piece of smut that was. I remember reading this years ago, and always hoping you'd continue. Even after 2 years I could pick up right where we left after reading only the last sentence of the previous chapter. That's how well this story has forever stayed in my mind. It's all coming back to me now and I love it! Thank you for continuing. And wow, that was simply perfect. That conversation, the honest teasing, the build-up to that explosion of pure, heavenly sex. Brilliant! Will you continue on from now on?
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