| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 14:52 PDT
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I hope you post chapter 11 soon. I just read your entire story so far and I really like it. I cant wait to see what Vegetas reaction is going to be once he is free from his restraints. So PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 21:13 PDT
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Ooo, I'm glad that the next part is already written. I can't wait to see how it goes from here and why Bulma has ended up in the predicament at the beginning. Vegeta definitely needs a little role reversal for a change. Nice work, can't wait 'til you post the next part.
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Reviewed By: annna On: September 08, 2008 09:21 PDT
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greeat :pp updatee it! it had been so long since you last updated i thought you gave up:(
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Title: Yes!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 05:57 PDT
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This has bound to be the most bizzare chapter ever!!! I mean Bulma is off her rocker! What would want her to do this to him? Doesn't she know she's going to PAY when he gets out of thoese restraints? Deadly game she's playing, indeed. But please, PLEASE give us chapter eleven. I'm simply dying to see what's going to happen next! I'm dying to read some well written fanfiction, and honey, you really REALLY have talent! You turn a phrase so well! And I'm not bullshitting you so you can post chapter 11, either. This is the honest truth. Thanks for making BV alive again! Now PLEASE POST CHATPER ELEVEN!!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 11:31 PDT
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UPDATE SOON! I'm going to bug you quite often with these senseless reviews until I get an update!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:38 PDT
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I need a chapter update REALLY soon. :D
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: August 22, 2008 09:14 PDT
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please update. . .
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Title: OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!
Reviewed By: keleos On: August 04, 2008 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good Lord that was the hottest thing I've ever read!! THE TENSION OMG THE TENSION!! *fans herself* weeeelll, I will need a couple of hours days to recover... Thank you so much for writing this, and as usual, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Title: VXB is fun again
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. I am really liking the pace you're developing and the balance of action and dialogue. You really put me right there with their 'lime on'. As always please keep going.
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Title: Great chapter!!
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: July 25, 2008 13:45 PDT
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can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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A 10 for everything. Fuck im so nervous lol
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Reviewed By: earlschibiangel On: July 22, 2008 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice. i liked this one.
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Title: OOH SO HOT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: lefemevegeta On: July 22, 2008 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I once again can't wait for the next chapter. You had way to many steamy moments in this chapter that has me sweating and drooling. I want to go on a date with Vegeta too. Can you arrange that????? Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: TexRLos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this story is so great, seriously i'm loving it! its different from all other ffs i've read...im sure a lot of people feel the same way :) don't take too long to update, i really wanna read the next chapter ! xoxo
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Title: Yeahhhh!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 05:52 PDT
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Gosh, thanks so much for updating! Lots of funny moments in this chapter, I laughed my ass off when Vegeta made that kid's ice cream explode. A lot of hot steamy all-most-there moments too... I like how you put a spin on Bulma and Vegeta 'making out'...which builds up to tangy chapter 10. Oh my gosh, I don't think I can 't wait too long, please hurry!
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