| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: May 04, 2008 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Hope the next chapter comes really soon. Can't wait to see the heat between Vegeta and Bulma.
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Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That is almost the only word I can manage for this story. I love it and hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 23:04 EDT
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Akira Toriyama is certainly great. This story is really intense, they are both terrible, one made just to fit the other. Great writing, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more :)
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way he called her vulgar and it sounded like a compliment lol
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 21:35 EDT
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Wow! I love your writing style. Tis is getting hot! Looking forward to the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 23:26 EDT
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I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope it turns out steamy :P
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: April 20, 2008 12:49 EDT
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Very, very nice! Post quickly lol =)
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Reviewed By: deleyye On: April 20, 2008 00:39 EDT
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Great chapter
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 23:37 EDT
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i like where this is going. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: April 15, 2008 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nice work! Very poetic language here. It's very clear how much you adore Vegeta and are translating it into Bulma's desire. You carry it off well. I wonder what will happen next...
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Reviewed By: oldauthor On: April 15, 2008 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, really fantastic. That scene between them was greatness. Please, do continue!
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Reviewed By: deleyye On: April 13, 2008 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Can't wait for Ch. 2.
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: April 13, 2008 19:59 EDT
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great first chapter. Please keep it up =)
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Reviewed By: Anna08 On: April 13, 2008 09:52 EDT
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nooo she shouuuldnt :p update it soon =) Love it. xx
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