| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: March 09, 2010 21:14 PST
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I have read and re-read this story countless times. It is so fantastic. It's obsessive. Looking forward to your update! Please!
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Reviewed By: shaneyaw On: March 09, 2010 11:01 PST
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Still patiently waiting for more :-)
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 09:50 PST
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PLEASE UPDATE!!! We are waiting very patiently. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 14:49 PST
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Hope you decide to update soon! Its been 5 long months now...
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Reviewed By: Saeri-Jenn On: February 25, 2010 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definately an excellent read. I really admire your pacing with the plot in the story. You explain everything with such vivid detail that it places your reader right in the middle of things. I really like how you've put the characters of Bulma and Vegeta through their paces. Really testing their original character concepts and seeing just where you can take them into new territory. It adds incredible depth to the story. While there were a few little grammars things I noticed (mostly using on when you should've used in and vice-versa) this was very beautifully well written. And while I hope you at least write one more chapter to wrap all the build-up action up, I hope that you'll take your time with the writing process that it is beautiful and that you do enjoy writing it. Lots of luck with your writing. Eagerly and patiently awaiting an end to this tale.
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: February 09, 2010 10:10 PST
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Still waiting (and hoping). Looking forward to your update.
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: January 29, 2010 13:54 PST
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I won't give up the ghost. I am convinced that you will continue with this story. It is just too good to let go. Looking forward to your return!
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Reviewed By: Lilpryde On: January 25, 2010 13:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just really excellent. I love the different angles of conflict and how the main characters always come back to the fact that, no matter how hard they try, they actually need each other. I'm desperate for the big reconciliation! Also, great work bringing Zarbon back. He's such a good villain when Vegeta is supposed to be the 'good guy.' Again, excellent story. Please continue as soon as you are able. One of the best, really. Thanks for putting pen to paper (type to Word document). Lil
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Reviewed By: arashi4567 On: January 21, 2010 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic a lot. I thought it was the best out there, but it has no ending. I hope that you're ok, Caprice, that nothing bad has happened in your life to ignore this beautiful story. But it has been ignored, for one reason or another. I can only guess because you haven't even left an update just to let us know if something's wrong. I repeat, you owe us nothing, except maybe a little of your time, even a few minutes to let us know if it will end or not, because you did say you had the story's plot and the possible ending mapped out. You really seemed like you knew where you were going. Then nothing... I can't keep checking this story day after day, like I know everyone is. I don't blame them, this is so good, it has become an obsession, but I'll stop because clearly you have. Oh, and by the way, I've seen this mistake in almost every fic I've read, but "breath" is a noun, "breathe" is the correct verb. If you ever care to check this story again, you might want to correct that.
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: January 20, 2010 10:11 PST
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Hello?? Updates?? Please!!!!! Dying!!!!! Here!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: December 30, 2009 21:20 PST
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I agree, torture. Please don't forget your faithful followers. We've been so patient. Checking, checking, and checking some more everyday. Need my fix!
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: December 25, 2009 14:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this is absolute torture. Please update. This is one of the best B/V stories ever. I have been checking back for this more than my e-mail or my college grades. That's truly sad but shows the level of obsession. I'm dying to see what happens along with the long overdue.
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Reviewed By: princessG On: December 11, 2009 03:08 PST
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We're all missing your beautiful writing. Please update before Christmas, it would be such a wonderful present!
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: December 10, 2009 10:56 PST
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Still waiting patiently (sigh). An update would be a great Christmas present! Hint, hint! Please!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2009 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease have mercy on us. what happens con bulma????? omg.
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