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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: izzieLaLa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 09:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel like such a horrible for not reviewing this story until now! I mean, I've been following this fic since its days up on FanFiction.net and then you kept removing it from everywhere! DX i had to do multiple google searches just to find it here, and that isn't even the true extent of how much I love this fic. I'd have to say, during one of the worst months of my life (my doctor says I'm at high risk of going blind due to this terrible eye infection I have, and I've already been hospitalized for depression and turned away from 3 clinics who all say I need serious help, but I'm just not "crazy" enough for them to admit me... those bastards...), I have to say this has been my only true happiness. The way you write is so beautiful and poetic, I'm brought to tears almost every time I read it. It is truely amazing how good of an understanding you have of the human psyche, its almost as if I can feel every emotion going on between them, you write in such amazing detail. I also love the little breaks in the story with Enema, Baba, and Kami... (hehe Kami's gonna win ^-^ *does a dance*). Anyways, I've never read anystory that has gone into the emotional detail and storyline with such extravagant depth and almost simplicity, that it comes out as the most exquisite work of art I have ever been able to witness. I know I'm probably sounding like I'm just over exaggerating, but I guess its because no words can describe how deeply moved my this story I am. As for the most recent chapter, I'm absolutely head over heels in love with your idea of Bulma going into Vegeta's inner mind and finding the true innocence that is him, and him reveling the way he sees her in his mind... oh my goodies that was the most romantic thing ever! I wish I had some guy say that to me =3 Overall I just wanted to say thank you for writing this incredible story! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, I can't wait to read it! :D
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Title: Almost brought me to tears... whoah!
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: October 10, 2008 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to read this a few times to figure out what was going on. It has so much intensity. I was in tears halfway through and was really emotionally overcome. It's very deep with much texture, and you've got a lot of emotions roiling here that I can really feel. It was hard for me to read at first because I felt like I wanted to cry for what torment they were causing one another. You've got a lot of brilliant description here and a unique take on it. It has a lot of the feel and mood that reminds me of Lab Monkey. The only thing that I am grappling with is trying to figure out the magnetude of their angst. The reasons behind what Bulma's done and Vegeta's thinking she wants him to kill her are a bit confusing at times. I still am confused where the source of their torment is coming from, but I respect your interpretation of the characters and the thought you've put into it. The more I think about it I can see it as both characters both trying along with the reader to get their minds around just what is going on between them. I can't quite see Vegeta and Bulma going to these depths in the series, but you are convincing me how this could be a deadly game of cat and mouse that they are playing. Especially if I see Vegeta as a predator and Bulma as a woman trying to come to terms with what she's unleashed. Yet you've got a creative take on this and a talent for provoking the reader to feel a lot of the angst, fear and confusion that Vegeta and Bulma are experiencing. I continue to be impressed with that and jealous. :) It's a definate gift.
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Reviewed By: Lou85 On: October 09, 2008 04:35 PDT
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oh my gosh, I already thought this fic was great, but where you're taking the story now... I didn't see that coming. This story is so original and wonderful and I can't wait to read the rest of it. Please never stop writing!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 23:55 PDT
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The beginning was something! I can't believe those two. They really have a knack for telling off to each other. The ending was so sweet though. Great job and the update was worth the wait.
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Title: fuuuuuuck!
Reviewed By: devinyx On: October 08, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know reading this excellent chapter whilst listening to The Giant's Dream "Conjuror of war & watermelons" on replay was perhaps the best atmosphere and moment for me. By the way you can listen to that song on my myspace www.myspace.com/votre_dominatrice. i swear the way the song played i felt that with that same rhythm vegeta trapped her with his ki. with that momentum. and the high pitch treble resembled bulma and her emotions. my god what a great chapter. im a mess of waterworks i looooved how she asked him to let her in his macabre world and she showed him how she is so careless about modicum and sense around him. i mean the girl goes and shoots herself and awaits for him. and oh my jesus christ the scene when she realizes what she is to him and she sees the true innocence hidden in the most darkest labyrinth of his soul and how his demons try to obliterate his innocence and he continues fighting it and he decided to once and for all confront his demons. i love the way you made bulma speak of what was silent. i loved his reaction. i love this fic. i love you =] the amount of psychology of behavior and sex and relationships and emotional trauma is fantastic and the way you explain it and develop this unmatched originality and creativity of scenarios to let the characters unfold is beyond exquisite. i respect your work and am enamored of it.
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Title: Simply Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story about a week ago but since I have a newborn it took me a while to be able to sit down and get a review out. I wish I could review every chapter and I might go back and reread them just so I can do that. I remember after finishing the last chapters I couldnt stop thinking to myself how much beautifully your words flowed. I LOVE the way Bulma thought all this through. It was brilliant. I also love the way you really kept Vegeta the rough badass he is! Props on that. I nearly yelled out when I checked my email and saw you updated! Im curious to see your other work! I wish more published writers out there wrote like you. You should be a novelist with how detailed you are with every little thing! ~Forever waiting (im)patiently~ Iceis
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Title: Breathtaking
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: September 26, 2008 07:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my third time reading this chapter but my first opportunity to rewiew. Let me tell you that this interaction between B/V was breathtaking just as I knew it would be. When Vegeta felt his ki resurfacing I was on total edge. Kami and his peeps intellectual outlook on the end results of the B/V situation is fascinating and also and gives your readers another angle on your characters. Keep up the great work please and update REALLY SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 08:36 PDT
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This is really good. I can't wait for an update. Loving it!
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 04:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was so intense. So sexy, and so heavy too. I don't know what it is about your writing style that just draws me in completely. Your writing is perfection! I loved the bit at the end with Kami. The last few paragraphs with Enma and Kami and Baba were beautiful, and very true. You did another great job, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: September 22, 2008 02:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... just... WOW! I am amazed, you're brillant!! I don't think I've ever read a fic such as this one!! *is speechless* GREAT JOB"" I am really looking forward to the next chapters!!!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: September 20, 2008 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you describe her aching for him. And how she describes her desire in such a sexy and seductive way. Very hot!
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Reviewed By: amy22 On: September 16, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps getting better and better! And HOTTER too!! HOW I LOVE/HATE CLIFFHANGERS!! XD Great job, as usual!!
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Title: Well written
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: September 14, 2008 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for posting this chapter. Please post the next chapter ASAP!!!!! Your fans can't wait a whole month for the next update. We want to know what else our twisted Bulma has in store for our Vegeta. And we definitly can't wait to see how Vegeta will respond to this controlled situation. My email is janellab2k@yahoo.com, I would love to know when you post your chapters. Hope to read soon.......Can't wait!!! Can't wait!! Can't wait!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: September 14, 2008 05:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED this chapter!!!! I was sooo good and very unexpected at the beginnng i was trying to figure out what was going on. anyway I loved it and cant wait for more! >_
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 01:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is an incredible story! It's so sexy and so funny, I am addicted! I can't wait to read more!
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