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 Reviewed By: la bohéme  On: November 09, 2008 18:26 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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A fantastic chapter. Do keep up the intricate plotline to their characters. We don't need to see a mushy Vegeta/Bulma. That's what I admire of this piece. They're very much in character.
 Title: le fucking mer!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2008 18:11 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
my god what more perfect scenario than a dinner to show the perfection of Bulma and the decadence of Vegeta walking amidst the crowd to lewdly kiss her in front of propriety clichés??? and her reaction was soooo realistic. the whole chapter was unbelievable. i think her mom talking about her 6th sense helped her realize that he's it since after all he came after 3 wks of hiding to say goodbye and then you have her running after him. i love it. i love it. i love you.
 Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2008 15:14 EST
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Who cares how many times the whole outerspace thing has happened? It never happened like this before and I am caught into this almost as bad as Bulma. I love this new chapter. I was too funny. The "Goodbye" had be almost crying in my seat, especially when the other girl wanted one too. LOL Great job with this. Look forward to more.
 Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2008 10:04 EST
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Ooh, dark. Don't worry about the scenario being overdone. I absolutely love those stories and, when done well, can be even more exciting than the plausible "canon" time line. Not to mention that any closure from given to us from the predictable storyline would have been to rushed, not befitting of our two beloved characters at all. How Bulma deals with her feelings and how Vegeta goes about making her accept them will be worth the wait. I can't wait 'til next time.
 Reviewed By: butterflyV  On: November 08, 2008 21:44 EST
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apologies if you thought the review sounded like a put-down.
 Title: Giddy
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2008 21:36 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love it love it love it!!! I was so into when she spotted Vegeta in the back of the room!!! I love where this is going. I've tried the Vegeta in space with Bulma before its difficult for me, but I can not WAIT to see how you do it!!! My favorite paragraph you have in this chapter has to be when Bulma is explaining how she is in tune with Vegeta's like and dislikes. Something about Vegeta listening in on Bulma's music while polishing his boot struck a cord with me. I could just see the scene so easily.
 Title: Spectacular
Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2008 20:11 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hadn't read such a long fic since last year, and I'm very happy I found this one. Let me tell you this is one beautiful piece of art. I enjoyed every moment, I laughed, I suffered, I went through many different emotions so far, and the best part is it doesn't even have an end yet! I can't imagine how good it will be once the story is complete. The more I read, the less I wanted to get to the last updated chapter, because I knew I would then have to wait for the next one. I can only thank you now for sharing such poetry, and congratulate you for your brilliant work. I'll be looking forward to the next "Step". Wish you the best, and keep it up! =)
 Title: Wow.... O_O
Reviewed By: izzieLaLa [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2008 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh...My...God.I was absolutely blown away by this chapter. This was such an emotional chapter for me to read. I've always admired Bulma for the main reason that she somewhat embodies the type of person I've always strived to be. But in every chapter...especially this one, you've slowly delved deeper and deeper into the psyche of not only Vegeta, but also Bulma as well. With every chapter I've read I've found myself finding more and more similarites between myself and Bulma, in both her fears, shortcomings, and her constant defiance to everything, to be strong and not let anyone else take her down and win. I've lived quite a pampered little life myself and reading the horrors of Vegetas mind just as Bulma had witnessed them, I felt like I was coming to terms with my own sheltered life, as she had realised the true reality of what vegeta had been. I couldn't stand him just leaving her like that, as well as her going to the life that everyone had planned for her despite her desire for a life of adventure (i know the feeling all too well). And when Yamcha (HATE HIM) came back into the picture that just fricken about killed me. God my ex bf was a yamcha and he almost ruined my life...long story short, everything about this chapter was amazing in the fluent and vivid language and use of imagery... it was the sheer essence of perfection (i know i still sound like i'm over exaggerating xD) but all and all I'm so excited to see how you bring the two of them back together i can barely stand it! and I'm still pondering over how Bulma has managed to not get preggers with lil trunks yet with the amount of hanky panky they've been doing xD LMAO P.S. Thank you so much for your reply in the A/N!! After lots of treatment my eyes have finally healed and things are finally starting to look up for me a bit ^-^ I thank you so much for the positive vibes lol i guess they really helped! much
 Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2008 17:25 EDT
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I meant lovefeeled. Don't mind me. My grammer is terrible. I have no idea what I'm talking about half the time. I love your story as I said before. Never hurts to say again. LOL!
 Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2008 17:24 EDT
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Oh man, what a punishment! I knew that was going to be a tough one but who knew he would pick one like this? I have to say that is pretty creative of him to come up with it. I look forward to the next chapter in this lovefelled story. Great job.
 Reviewed By: Kyrene [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2008 21:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is my first time ever reviewing something on media miner but I felt the overwhelming need to review here. You are absolutely just...wow. You're Vegeta is so incredibly delicious it's mind boggling. And your Bulma! Absolutely perfect. She's kind of like a fangirl with her morbid desires (cause it is kind of morbid how much we love him) only she gets to have that man we dream of. Your writing is everything I could ever dream of in a story and more. I can't wait to see how Vegeta responds to this...Can't wait to see how Bulma does. Who can go from Vegeta back to Yamucha? I mean...seriously. Please, Keep Going!
 Title: radio in my head
Reviewed By: you're living in a fantasy world....  On: October 23, 2008 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
In limbo from radiohead to this is good times lol. Thanks for the shoutout. I am beyond enamored with your work. You truly delve into the psyche of each character which are beyond complicated. The fact that they like to play master and servant with another and neither refuse to share both titles truly lets the reader study their dilemma. I think we all know that her ploy to be the business woman and marry off with yamcha will be her cross to bear and I truly wonder how far both will take this. After all, vegeta witnessed her solution to stop a blackhole lol. Now I wonder about his reaction. Im also wondering if only she got to see into him past with her mind exploration or did he see into her mind simultaneously?
 Reviewed By: Adge06 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2008 15:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
freaking AMAZINGGG!!! I love every second of it!
 Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta  On: October 20, 2008 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have done it again. Another amazing chapter. You are keeping us on our toes everytime you post another work of art. Each chapter offers something different and I got to tell you I was not expecting micro-nanobots to surface at this point of the story. The trip inside Vegeta's mind is just another example of how you have mastered keeping your reader's entertained. I can only hope my husband views me as his perfect vision of light. Please continue writing and posting. Can't wait for the new project also. C U nxt chapter.
 Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: tiffy!  On: October 16, 2008 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWESOME chapter!!! I LOVED it! this story is sooo amazing! I love every single aspect of it! cant wait for more!!
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