| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 00:47 EDT
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Wow. Well, don't be so concerned about the lemony things; they were necessary for the story. It was not unpleasant, really. I don't like hardcore lemons; I think they spoil the intense moments, such as the ones that are way too descriptive. Yours was smooth and metaphoric, intense and steamy. Quite enjoyable, mainly because is a part of the story. I wonder what comes next!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy fuck. great sex. if only i could have an animal like him =D
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update updtate update!
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Title: fabulous writing
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: May 20, 2008 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. You pulled off their personality perfectly. I super can't wait for the next chapter. Let's see how Veggie handles Bulma in the sheets. As always I enjoy reading your fictions. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! Your stories are great so please update soon! Oh man, Bulma has him backed into a corner it was so great to see them both go at each other! By the way, you really nailed Vegeta and Bulma's personality! i really can't wait for the next chapter! Great work! ~~Go-chan
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 16:51 EDT
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Nice. She really got him to the point... How could he refuse? She is so smart, just as she must be. You have it right. Well done!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is great! I love the dialouge that flows between Bulma and Vegeta, and how you're building up the intense moments between them. Well written and very descriptive material, I cannot wait to see what you have intended for our Saiyan Prince in chapter five! Good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Liorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 16:51 EDT
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Positively wonderful. You have no idea how happy it makes me to see a 'realistic' VB get together. And, woah, do you pull it off well. Your writing style is just great, the characters are in character and your sense of wit is so refreshing. That scene with Enma, Baba and Kami had me just rolling. Perfect! Please, keep up the awesome work.
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: May 04, 2008 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Hope the next chapter comes really soon. Can't wait to see the heat between Vegeta and Bulma.
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Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That is almost the only word I can manage for this story. I love it and hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 23:04 EDT
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Akira Toriyama is certainly great. This story is really intense, they are both terrible, one made just to fit the other. Great writing, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more :)
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way he called her vulgar and it sounded like a compliment lol
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 21:35 EDT
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Wow! I love your writing style. Tis is getting hot! Looking forward to the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 23:26 EDT
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I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope it turns out steamy :P
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